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liath
11-17-2006, 04:35 AM
Title: Ground Hog Day
Author: Rorschach's Blot (http://www.fanfiction.net/u/686093/)
Rating: T
Genre: Humor/Parody
Pairing: Harry/Luna
Status: One Shot
Summary: Harry lives the same day over and over again.
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3248583/1/

A very fascinating, but rushed one shot. There are a few funny parts--solid grammar and punctuation.

Overall, I give it 4/5.
PsyckoSama
11-17-2006, 04:59 AM
Beat me... damned.

5/5 for the Luna romance ;)
Jon
11-17-2006, 05:13 AM
As I said to Rorsch in his group; For Massive Damage.
ip82
11-17-2006, 05:38 AM
Neat, if a bit pointless.
3.5/5
the-caitiff
11-17-2006, 05:48 AM
It's Harry/Luna and it doesn't suck eggs. To often Luna becomes one dimensional, here she's odd and horny, but not too blah. 4/5
Tsukiyomi-chan
11-17-2006, 12:40 PM
Very nice. Good way to stay sane too. Definitely worth a read

5/5
magyareagle
11-17-2006, 03:45 PM
Luna is definately in character here. Rorsch should do more stories like this and work less on the MAW sequal. Loved how Luna was portrayed, and her logic is very Luna'tic. I agree with caitiff, odd and horny is an apt description of Luna.
Antivash
11-17-2006, 07:29 PM
Pointless but amusing. Ill give it a 4/5. Luna's character wasn't that bad, though i really don't see her going "Hey, wanna shag?"

Good though.
Dark Syaoran
11-17-2006, 08:11 PM
Even though it was pretty pointless, it was a fun little read. Well done.
Hadoren
11-17-2006, 08:12 PM
Best part: How many days it takes Harry before he finally manages to kill Voldemort. It went from six months of training to several decades.
Lord Ravenclaw
11-19-2006, 05:30 PM
I'm glad to see a story like this. I had a plot bunny for one of these a long time ago inspired by a Stargate episode....I would have done some things differently, but still pretty good.

Anyone up for golf off in the Great Hall? =)
Xantam
11-19-2006, 06:02 PM
I'm glad to see a story like this. I had a plot bunny for one of these a long time ago inspired by a Stargate episode....I would have done some things differently, but still pretty good.

Are you referring to the episode where both Jack and Teal'c are stuck in a time loop and after a while they both just start doing whatever they want? If so that would be a great read.
the-caitiff
11-19-2006, 08:22 PM
That was a good episode.
IndoGhost
11-20-2006, 12:05 AM
Its so stupid...but I give it a 4/5 for making me laugh and read hp after a long while.
Mordecai
11-20-2006, 02:53 AM
4/5, casue its brilliantly written. Slightly naff plot, but definitely worth the read.
Aekiel
11-20-2006, 09:36 AM
Funny story, thought it was a bit rushed but I think Rorsch intended that. I give it 4/5.

The Stargate episode is called Window of Oppurtunity, and its the funniest thing I've ever seen. Come on! Golf through the Stargate :D What more could you want. Love how he started correcting Daniel on the translations after a few loops. :P Its my favourite episode, what can i say?
DreamRed
11-20-2006, 11:57 AM
Ha ha, quite brilliant for what it is. 4/5
Xiph0
11-22-2006, 07:57 AM
A trail of students followed Harry as he stormed up to the Astronomy tower. "What are you doing Harry?" Hermione asked nervously.
"Learning to fly," Harry replied. The last thing he remembered before he woke up was Hermione's terrified scream.


Lol!

Cruddy ending, but pretty funny.

4/5
Wasteland
11-22-2006, 06:54 PM
Loved it. Felt a little stupid but thought it was nice and funny 4/5
pimpostrous
11-26-2006, 05:14 PM
lol, not bad. Yes, it did sorta seem rushed, but i guess theres no point in describing the same day over and over again. But yeah... should have at least described some things more thoroughly.
Adam
12-04-2006, 08:52 PM
4.5/5. Ending was weak, rest was good. Pity it's not a chaptered fic.
Nexus
12-07-2006, 03:28 AM
Would have made a good multi-chaptered fic. And like everyone is saying the end was weak.