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Shezza
01-16-2007, 12:30 AM
Title: A Veela Involved Series of Unfortunate Events
Author: Shezza88 and Surarrin
Rating: T
Genre: Humour
DLP Category: Humour
Pairing: Allusions to Harry Potter / Gabrielle Delacour, and whatever else Jon and I come up with.
Status: WIP
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3344308/1/
Summary: Harry Potter was enjoying Bill Weasley's prewedding party until young Gabrielle Delacour completely ruined his night. Now, Harry Potter must flee from an enraged Bill, a lovestruck Gabrielle and a horde of wellmeaning and misinterpreted Veela.


As promised, Jon and I will continue with the story.

Um...that's pretty much it, so...yeah.

HardcoreHobbit
01-16-2007, 09:48 AM
Heh, That's great. Looking forward to more of this.

4.5/5

DreamRed
01-16-2007, 11:39 AM
Sweet. It'll be nice to see where you go from the second update. 4.5/5

huntedorange
01-16-2007, 01:30 PM
Really good, gave me a great laugh. well done on the orginality too. 5/5

Democable
01-16-2007, 10:21 PM
yeah i have to agree with Harry in this story "Fuck me sideways" great story guy and gal (i think) hope to see more

Jon
01-17-2007, 12:24 AM
..Why the fuck does everyone always think i'm a girl? :\

Shezza
01-17-2007, 12:27 AM
I think he means me, Jon! :(

Apparently, my name can be interpreted as feminine.....

Edit: For the record, I am a male!

The Dark Monarch
01-17-2007, 01:51 AM
How is that a feminine name?

Shezza
01-17-2007, 02:12 AM
Shezza is a derivitive slang of my last name. But it also resembles Shazza, a females name. Hence, feminine undertones.

I really should get a new name.

cmuylistoooo
01-17-2007, 03:22 AM
i enjoyed reading this. did not realize the translation for the frech part were at the end of the chapter. i kind of forgot authors like to put endnotes. so while i was reading, i was using free translation. other than that, this was a amusing read.

Dressed in Black
01-17-2007, 03:23 AM
Maltese Falcon

Aekiel
01-17-2007, 06:25 AM
Amusing, in a strange and wrong kind of way.
"Fuck me sideways" is one of my favourite phrases, so that was awesome to see in a fic. :D

Aekiel

P.S. Shezza just reminds me of the word sheila, but I know better than to think he's a she. I haven't seen a female writer who could capture the essence of Stargate in a fic. No offence to the women out there.

japanese_jew
01-19-2007, 07:25 AM
It's good, but I want to be sure that it keeps on going before voting. Collaborations often seem to fail miserably.

Jon
01-19-2007, 07:58 AM
Silence pitiful mortal! You shall tremble before the combined might Of I, The great invader Surarrin and the dirt child Shezza88! OBEY ME! OR SUFFER TEMPORAL DOOM!

Nexus
01-19-2007, 10:38 AM
*zaps the 'Great Invader' with a tazer and commends him and Shezza on this humor fic.

TheIllusiveOne
01-19-2007, 02:28 PM
Good start, although I didn't like the way Harry was acting. I know it was suppose to be funny with him all frightened and what not, but it was kind of annoying and a little drawn out. Still to early to tell, IMO, but 4/5 so far.

Jamven
01-19-2007, 08:37 PM
Great story so far. I would have like to have seen Potter take on Bill in all his glory. 4.5/5

jaspernoone
01-19-2007, 11:32 PM
Nice....its shapein up to be analright story, hopefully the normal crap that comes from a duel effort wont happen, and it will go all smooth like, and shezza, you think you'll ever redo harry potter and stargate?

Moloch
01-20-2007, 12:54 AM
Good start, although I didn't like the way Harry was acting. I know it was suppose to be funny with him all frightened and what not, but it was kind of annoying and a little drawn out. Still to early to tell, IMO, but 4/5 so far.

o_o, Curious.

Anyway, its too short to tell how good of a fic this is gonna be but I like what I see so far. Hope you update soon. :D

World
01-20-2007, 07:21 AM
“Eleven.”
“Just…let me check again,”

Enjoyed it so far (well, what there is to enjoy). Evil of Fleur to leave Harry to his fate...

Shezza sound feminine because it ends in an 'a' (but most of the crowd knows that Shezza is no gal).

(Maybe Blood and Shezza could exchange names ;))

That Wench
01-20-2007, 07:39 AM
Guys, this story rocked :P
I lol'd so many times whilst reading it :D
4.5/5 for me (Don't want you guys to get big heads :P)

oh, and I agree with World about the switching names thing - 'cause I thought Shezza was a female too, at 1st. uh.. that was before IRC.

Anna Banana :D

Dark Syaoran
01-20-2007, 10:19 PM
Going to continue, eh? Awesome. I enjoyed this.

Lord Osiris
01-22-2007, 03:46 AM
HA fantastic little piece you have here fellas, im glad to see that you will continue it on. I found it amusing to read your French, though i think the ending took the pie or is it cake? anyway trying to look menacing with his pants down was funny, i laughed silly and i thank you for it.

I hope that now that your finished Azkaban Shezza you and Surarrin can get this moving.

Dark Syaoran
01-22-2007, 04:52 PM
Indeed. Tinn can help with the French.

Tinn Tam
01-25-2007, 09:49 AM
Indeed. Tinn can help with the French.

Tinn has. And Tinn will.

...And Tinn needs to stop talking about herself in third person...

Jon
01-25-2007, 11:00 AM
Jon doesn't completely agree with Tinn, he thinks that everyone should start talking in third person.

Falcon
01-26-2007, 03:25 AM
Falcon thinks....ah, fuck it. Nice start, you two, keep up the solid work.

Yeah, I thought Shezza was a female when I first read his work a few years back. Imagine my surprise when I amble onto this site and see he's a male. Ah...oops?

Jon
01-26-2007, 03:29 AM
OH SNAP!
hahahahah snap snap snap.

timaynz
01-17-2008, 09:02 PM
ha ha! poke a boobie.
Good start but seriously who hasn't looked at an attractive 11 year old girl and gone "No way"?

PsyckoSama
01-18-2008, 01:21 PM
I'm holding back on the voting because this is currently too short to count for much of anything

ForsakenOne
01-20-2008, 02:39 AM
I have but one request good sirs.


http://icanhascheezburger.files.wordpress.com/2007/02/moar-moar-moar.jpg

Wildfeather
01-21-2008, 05:24 AM
Falcon thinks....ah, fuck it. Nice start, you two, keep up the solid work.

Yeah, I thought Shezza was a female when I first read his work a few years back. Imagine my surprise when I amble onto this site and see he's a male. Ah...oops?

I thought that too at first....Creepy..

Redd Lenses
01-23-2008, 04:43 PM
http://www.hookahforum.com/uploads/1165808825/gallery_2063_3_17264.jpg