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Oneshot Subject: Chilling by DarkGoddess2002 - M - One Shot

Discussion in 'General Fics' started by fatthom, Feb 1, 2007.

3.875/5, 8 votes
  1. fatthom

    fatthom Squib

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    Feb 1, 2007 #1
    Title: Chilling
    Author: DarkGoddess2002
    Rating: M
    Genre: Angst
    DLP Category: General
    Pairing: HHR - but no details or anything
    Words: 6,794
    Published: January 11, 2007
    Status: Complete
    Summary: Hermione is willing to do anything to get Harry back from Voldemort. Dark!Hermione
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3336533/1/

    This may well get me in trouble here as it is not DLH, bit I liked this short quite a bit, and I feel it may appeal to some others here. I particularly like Pansey's fate. 4/5.


    Checked by Minion, June 20, 2013
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  2. Aekiel

    Aekiel Angle of Mispeling ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Feb 1, 2007 #2
    I liked it, wasn't the usual sort of thing we get around here, but still very good. It has all the qualities I like in a fic - liberal use of the Dark Arts, torture, Ron dead. Great. Despite that it was a bit too clinical, needs more feeling, if you get what I mean.

    I give it a 4/5, cause its good but it could be great.

    Aekiel
     
  3. Nuhuh

    Nuhuh Dastardly Shadow Admin Retired Staff

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    Feb 1, 2007 #3
    This was a fun read, enjoyed it greatly. Was cheering on dark Hermione in several scenes. Definitely DLP material, except of course the non-Harry centric aspect.

    Could have used a little more back story for the setup though.
    4/5
     
  4. yojorocks

    yojorocks Seventh Year

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    Feb 1, 2007 #4
    Very nice story, although I would have liked it a great deal more if it was a wee bit more graphical in the Ferret's or the Rat's torture. Regardless, very nicely done Dark Hermione. I would love to see a followup oneshot with Hermione turning Harry down the dark path, but I doubt we will ever see such a thing.
    I would say 5/5, but I was disappointed by the open ending without the hope for a sequel. Kind of a let down...

    The piece of blood magic was genius; I would love to have someone write something like this into the annual Kill-Draco-Off festival. Giving his magic to the mudblood he hates so she can find his childhood nemesis, utter genius in psychological torture, not to mention the ritual was probably pretty damn painful...

    4.5/5
     
  5. mcatrage

    mcatrage Raptured to Hell

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    Feb 2, 2007 #5
    Damnit why is this only a oneshot.

    4/5 I like dark Hermione and I feel like this would be a cool starting point with Harry recovering and Voldemort winning.
     
  6. Jon

    Jon The Demon Mayor Admin DLP Supporter

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    Feb 2, 2007 #6
    It was nice.
     
  7. sincostan

    sincostan High Inquisitor

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    May 29, 2009 #7
    Fic sucks. None of characters are recognizable except Hermione "studied" Dark Magic. Whips through a whole bunch of scenes. 2/5. I hope it is removed from the library to the Recycling Bin.