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WIP 4 out of 5 DADA Professors Reccommend by wwwendy -K

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Giovanni, Jan 3, 2006.

3.3076922893524/5, 13 votes
  1. Giovanni

    Giovanni God of Scotch

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    Jan 3, 2006 #1
    Title: 4 out of 5 DADA Professors Reccommend
    Author: wwwendy
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2366263/1/
    Rating: K
    Summary: 4 out of 5 DADA professors reccommend... KILLING HARRY POTTER!!! Harry's summer essay

    Review: Funny in its own way
     
  2. Xiph0

    Xiph0 Yoda Admin

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    Jan 3, 2006 #2
    It could've been more funny, the topic was amusing but they wrote it to seriously, nonjon could prob. do this concept well - I think.

    The bookworm was a downside to..
     
  3. sirius009

    sirius009 Minister of Magic

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    Feb 13, 2006 #3
    yea nonjon could write this story a lot better, even rorschachs? blot could've made it a lot funnier...
     
  4. Rahkesh Asmodaeus

    Rahkesh Asmodaeus THUNDAH Bawd Admin DLP Supporter

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    Feb 13, 2006 #4
    Yeah, a little funny, but nothing worth mentioning.
     
  5. Giovanni

    Giovanni God of Scotch

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    I am mad at the author... They went and introduced a plot.
     
  6. Element

    Element Seventh Year

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    I agree. Could have been fantastic, but now they've turned it into a serious story. Darn, if they had just added a little more sparkle to the first chapter, and then either left it there or wrote the teacher's reactions to the essay, that would have been fine. Now there is all these new chapters which aren't funny at all :cry:
     
  7. Scrittore

    Scrittore Groundskeeper

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    Aug 3, 2009 #7
    This story was a little funny at first, and had an awesome concept. However, the author had to go and make it serious, killing any chance of it being humorous. Also, I felt like the essay itself was just a rehash of the first couple books, which was a bit eh.

    I'm going to have to go ahead and give it a 2.5/5.

    Also, on a related note, the story is incomplete.
     
  8. Memory King

    Memory King Order Member DLP Supporter

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    Aug 5, 2009 #8
    Light-hearted read, strong beginning but didn't manage to keep the pace up.

    3/5
     
  9. KingRoger

    KingRoger Second Year

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    Nov 5, 2012 #9
    Definately would have been better as a one-shot. The grammar was fairly decent, but it wa lacking good characterisations. It just felt too sterile. 3/5.
     
  10. bombdiggity92

    bombdiggity92 Temporarily Banhammered

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    Nov 5, 2012 #10
    KingRoger the necromancer. First chapter was alright. But, as mentioned above authour introduced a plot. 2/5
     
  11. yak

    yak Moderator DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Nov 6, 2012 #11
    There's no such thing as grave digging when it comes to library review threads. Re-visiting old stories and reviewing them is a good thing.
     
  12. bombdiggity92

    bombdiggity92 Temporarily Banhammered

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    Nov 7, 2012 #12
    Oh, sorry than my bad. I thought the no reviving thing was applied here.
     
  13. Innomine

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    Nov 7, 2012 #13
    It does if the post made is short and pointless, and while his post was short, it said all that really needed to be said about the fic.

    Also, at the top of the page while in any library forum, you'll find a link to this encouraging people to go through and review all the old stories to make sure that they're still library quality.