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Harry Potter and the Wanderer by The Shadows [R]

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Alec_potter, Mar 28, 2008.

  1. Alec_potter

    Alec_potter Squib

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    Title: Harry Potter and the Wanderer
    Author: The Shadows
    Rating: R
    Genre: Romance / Action/Adventure
    DLP Category: General Fics
    Pairing: H/Hr
    Status: Completed (Chapters : 41)
    Summary: Harry is starting his sixth year at Hogwarts. When a time wolf appears in his room to help strengthen his mind, he learns of the approach of the Wanderer: Dumbledore found a new Defense Against the Dark Arts teacher. With his friends by his side - and relationships changing - can he face what comes his way?
    Link: http://fanfiction.portkey.org/story/2851



    I couldn't find this fic anywhere amongst the threads.

    Has an OOC Hermione but over all the plot development is very good. Author has imported characters from one of his own original works which works out quite well. It picks up slowly after initial excitement. You will have to read quite a bit into it to develop interest.
    Angst Harry but tolerable.

    Good read.
    4.5/5
     
    Last edited: Mar 29, 2008
  2. canoncansodoff

    canoncansodoff First Year

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    wrong link.
     
  3. Randeemy

    Randeemy Headmaster DLP Supporter

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    I remember reading this a few years back, in my pre-DLP days when Portkey, to my eternal shame, was my only source of fanfiction. It was great, and indeed was in my sig a few weeks back. Certainly worth a read, it is long, well written and an interesting idea. From memory 3.5 -4 /5.
     
  4. Blaise

    Blaise Golden Patronus

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    The summary alone puts me off reading it. "Time wolf"? insta-fail.
     
  5. Oz

    Oz For Zombie. Moderator DLP Supporter

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    Time-wolf wasn't that bad Blaise. Been a while since I read it, but from what I recall, 3/5. It was OK, but nothing spectacular.
     
  6. Skeletaure

    Skeletaure Magical Core Enthusiast ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    I, too, read this many a year ago. I believe I got as far as chapter two before I gave up. 2/5.
     
  7. Zlaker1001

    Zlaker1001 Second Year

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    Do not feel ashamed my good man, when I first started reading Harry Potter, I only read off of Mugglenet. :wall: :O_O: Now thats something to be ashamed of...
     
  8. Blaise

    Blaise Golden Patronus

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    Same here. It's amazing how you think you've stumbled onto something amazing, then when you read the works of talented authors you're like "why didn't I read THIS stuff first?!":confused:

    EDIT: @Oz - "Time wolf". Say that shit out loud, right now. It's almost as faggy as saying "Ginslut" out loud :p

    Also, is it me or is Alec Potter trying to up his post count rather quickly?
     
    Last edited: Mar 28, 2008
  9. Zlaker1001

    Zlaker1001 Second Year

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    Yeah I know what you mean, heres what I thought when I found Mugglenet.

    Holy shit this is awesome!


    Other Sites like FFnet..

    Man I am am such a loser, that shits horrible!
     
  10. Oz

    Oz For Zombie. Moderator DLP Supporter

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    Time Wolf
    IS
    Masteh of teh Universe!!
     
  11. Bratling

    Bratling Professor

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    And here I thought that He-Man was the master of the universe...:devil:
     
  12. Oz

    Oz For Zombie. Moderator DLP Supporter

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    Time-wolf killed He-man and,
    Took his plaec!!!
     
  13. Lucullus

    Lucullus High Inquisitor

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    From memory, I gave up after reading not more than three chapters of this pile of rubbish.

    Nothing really different from your standard Indy-Harry-Gets-A-Mentor fic, and the plot devices like the Time Wolf are terrible.

    Not even the H/Hr pairing could make me stomach this one. 2/5
     
  14. Seratin

    Seratin Proudmander –§ Prestigious §– DLP Supporter

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    Meh, my first journey into hp fanfiction was on wizardtales...This isn't too bad, time wolf is fail though.
     
  15. Nuhuh

    Nuhuh Dastardly Shadow Admin Retired Staff

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    Time Wolf, ahahahahahahahahaha

    And He-Man > Time Wolf, bitches.

    Also, How hot was She-Ra? Am I right or am I right?

    Although Cheetara could give her a run for her money.
     
  16. Seratin

    Seratin Proudmander –§ Prestigious §– DLP Supporter

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    Pfft. Biker mice from mars owned them all.
     
  17. malaga

    malaga Auror

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    Of course, that goes without saying.

    Biker Mice from Mars beat anything.
     
  18. Korisovra

    Korisovra Headmaster

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    Read this one quite some time and it was.....tolerable. I'll give it a 3/5


    That freaky little rabbit thing named Buckwheat was the ultimate!
     
  19. Vengashii

    Vengashii Banned

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    By the power of greyskull, this story is horrific. 2/5
     
  20. Viper

    Viper Fourth Year

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    It's Grayskull, damnit! Yeah, I'm bit of a He-Man fanboy.

    And nuhuh, She-Ra pwns Cheetara.

    As for the story, it fails. Reasons? The Time Wolf and this:

    You are in the village of Vlaine, in the forest of Noyadin. The forest of the elves.”
     
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