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Old 06-20-2009, 04:20 PM   #1
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One Hundred Days by Aaron Nowack - T - Naruto

Title: One Hundred Days
Author: Aaron Nowack
Category: Adventure
Rating: T
Chapters: 18
Words: 368,971
Updated: April 1, 2008
Published: November 16, 2005
Status: Complete
Summary: Naruto leaves on his three year training trip, and Sakura begins the struggle to improve herself. How much will they have changed when they meet again in one hundred days?
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2663204/1/One_Hundred_Days

This story shows how Naruto and Sakura develop in parallel, one through his travels with Jiraiya, and the other through more focused tutelage. One of the best stories where Sakura is mentored by Anko. Author introduces OCs (especially on the villain end) that are pretty good with some backstory on the Haruno family. Naruto and Jiraiya are great wandering adventurers.

My only regret is that this story doesn't have a sequel.


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Old 06-21-2009, 02:08 AM   #2
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Well-written. Those are some really long chapters.

Sakura's development was good, but I was disappointed with Naruto's progress. It's about as annoying as what happened in canon. He doesn't get nearly enough focus either.

The ending also feels inconclusive.
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Old 06-21-2009, 05:48 AM   #3
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Well-written. Those are some really long chapters.

Sakura's development was good, but I was disappointed with Naruto's progress. It's about as annoying as what happened in canon. He doesn't get nearly enough focus either.

The ending also feels inconclusive.
Pretty much that.
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Old 06-21-2009, 02:16 PM   #4
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Wait what? This story was actually finished? Hells yes!
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Old 06-21-2009, 11:01 PM   #5
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I liked it more when it wasn't finished. One could have hoped it'd get better.
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In case anyone is still interested in this fic, the author is writing a sequel titled One Hundred Weeks.

20k words per chapter. Holy shit.
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Old 07-29-2011, 03:39 AM   #7
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The sequel is shaping up to be pretty great so far, and the part about the worlds misconceptions re: Team 7 and Sakura are hilarious.
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Read it and thought it was decent. I have to say I don't know if I have ever read a sasuke closer to canon: annoying little bitch.

My two main complaints are the enormous chapters get it old. Would have been better if they were broken atleast in half. Complaint #2 is the characters from other villages who I really don't give a shit about. Sakura's cousin, the people from waterfall, the genin team from the rock. Didn't like them or rye parts from their pov.
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