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Oneshot The Day the Nightmare Ended by Bragg247 - K+ - Oneshot

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Lady Ghiradelli, Feb 13, 2006.

1.6666699647903/5, 3 votes
  1. Lady Ghiradelli

    Lady Ghiradelli First Year DLP Supporter

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    Feb 13, 2006 #1
    Title: The Day the Nightmare Ended
    Author: Bragg247
    Rating: K+
    Genre: Parody/Suspence
    Pairing: None
    Status: Complete
    Summary: Post-Hogwarts humour-parody fic. It is the year after Harry leaves Hogwarts, and Voldemort is tightening his grip on the Wizarding World. However, just when everyone thinks all is lost, Lord Voldemort finally meets his match... {One-shot}

    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1910878/1/


    Eh, I found it funny at least. Figured I might as well drop a post about it.

    Ame - Evil *spoiler*
     
  2. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    Feb 13, 2006 #2
    What'scary is that it's true.
     
  3. Gullible

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    Feb 25, 2006 #3
    :O_O:
     
  4. Lunarian

    Lunarian Third Year

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    Feb 25, 2006 #4
    Thats freaky... I would just bumrush her, chop off her head, then dump it in the artic. Even if she did 'live' like she seems to here... that'd be a large inconvenience.

    The Voldemort and Harry squibbling like school boys is humorous though.
     
  5. Rahkesh Asmodaeus

    Rahkesh Asmodaeus THUNDAH Bawd Admin DLP Supporter

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    Feb 25, 2006 #5
    That was...interesting to say the least.
     
  6. Dark Lord Rostam

    Dark Lord Rostam Button La Famiglia Midknight

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    Mar 4, 2006 #6
    I wold have blasted her with an AK not that hard
     
  7. tridentwatch

    tridentwatch Looked into the void

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    May 5, 2006 #7
    this story is just stupid. Plain stupidity. How OOOOOOOOOOOOOC can these characters get? There should be another genre called stupidity. This just isnt humor. I dont find it funny.
     
  8. darklordmike

    darklordmike Headmaster

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    Aug 4, 2009 #8
    God help me, but I find myself agreeing with a post by Tridentwatch.

    Suspension of disbelief is one thing, but Umbridge as a witch who strikes fear in the hearts of Voldemort, Dumbledore, and Harry? No damn way. The whole showdown at the Ministry was ludicrous, as an entire room full of hardened fighters suddenly forgets that they can blast Umbridge to smithereens. Why the hell would Dumbledore ever try to run from Umbridge?

    The premise doesn't work, even as humor. 2/5 for being well-written.
     
  9. Korisovra

    Korisovra Headmaster

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    Aug 5, 2009 #9
    'nuff said. 3/5 Recycling bin maybe. It just stretched credulity too far.
     
  10. Scrittore

    Scrittore Groundskeeper

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    Aug 5, 2009 #10
    This. Suspension of disbelief is one thing, however this is beyond believable in any sort of fashion. The humor was non-existent in my opinion, and I thought it was a failure for originality. I'll give this fic a 2/5 for being well-written, but get this out of the Library.