Dark Lord Potter Forums Dark Lord Potter Forums  

Go Back   Dark Lord Potter Forums > Library > Almost Recommended
Donate Register Rules Library List IRC Chat FAQ Members List Social Groups Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Donor Bar
PatronusCharm Banner

 
Thread Tools Display Modes
Old 06-02-2006, 01:55 PM   #1
ip82
Prisoner
 
ip82's Avatar
 
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 2,921
A Nice Cup of Tea and a Lie Down by Bernice - T (ONE-SHOT)

Title: A Nice Cup of Tea and a Lie Down
Author: Bernice
Rating: T
Genre: General/Humor
Status: ONE-SHOT
Pairings: None
Link: http://members.ozemail.com.au/~brussell/tea.htm

Great one-shot. Sort of a dark humor, for those who like that.
__________________
IP82 stories:

Potter's Resistance 1: Breaking Ties -> DLP Thread
Yin and Yang -> DLP Thread

Ficwad Profile || HP Recycle Bin || Crap filter C2
Rule no. 1 - You do not talk about Alpha Fight Club...
ip82 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 06-02-2006, 02:38 PM   #2
Zero
Seventh Year
 
Zero's Avatar
 
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Sailing the bermuda triangle...
Gender: Male
Posts: 201
Send a message via MSN to Zero
That was great.

This line really cracked me up.
Quote:
"Well, waste not, want not. Besides, it won't be like yer dead then, will it? I'll feed yeh to the hippogriffs. Yeh always liked them, didn't yeh?" Hagrid suddenly beamed, as if he was doing Harry a favour. "It'll be like yer not gone, then."

"I'll be still around as hippogriff shit, you mean."
__________________
Quote:
Originally Posted by ?
The dumber people think you are, the more surprised they're going to be when you kill them.
Zero is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 06-03-2006, 12:50 AM   #3
Amerision
Heir
Galactic Sheep Emperor
 
Amerision's Avatar
 
Join Date: Apr 2006
Location: The Gardens in the Desert Sand
Posts: 2,541
DLP Supporter Donor Star
WTF?

Harry shoulda been protected by the prophecy. Stupid boy never stands for his rights and is clueless as always.

In honor of Harry Potter, I will continue this fanfic with a brief extension.

--------------

"I really am very sorry, Harry. I'll name one o'me kids after yeh, if that'll help?" Hagrid's voice came from a great distance, and Harry thought, as he rested his head on the table, at least he hadn't been lying, there was no pain and it really was quite peaceful. Just like going to sleep.


But as his eyes closed and hearing faded, he felt a burst of light sear through him, yanking him from the deceptive warm blanket that had clouded his senses.

He sat up with a jolt, aware of a fading green aura around his body.

His fading vision returned to normal and the world crashed back into sound.

With only a massive headache, Harry looked up at the suprised face of Hagrid.

"Guess they were right, calling you the boy-who-lived an all. 'Tis a shame though, I'll have teh kill you meself," he said almost regretfully.

Drawing his wand, he dove out of the way as the traitorous half-giant flew at him with surpising agility, his massive arms aimed for his neck.

The gamekeeper crashed into the couch where he had been sitting only moments before. The oak wood broke clean in half under his weight.

In a flash, Hagrid was on his feet again.

Harry raised his wand against him, aiming it at his head.

Hagrid chuckled, amused.

"Magic won't do yeh any good Harry, thought you'd know that by now!"

Harry's face darkened, and he sent a powerful cutting curse at Hagrid's exposed neck.

The pale blue light simply dissapeared against the half-breed's skin, leaving no trace behind.

Harry was too stunned by the sight to see Hagrid's fist crashing into him, sending him careening to the floor.

His wand skittered away, rolling under the table.

He could only watch as his first ever friend stood looming over him, his hands raised high above.

"I'm sorry Harry, you know that..."

And with that, he brought his hands crashing downwards.

"REDUCTO!"

A massive beam of reddish-orange light filled his vision as Hagrid was blasted off his feet. The hut shook heavily as the large man slammed into the wall, sliding to the floor.

Looking toward the source of the blast, Harry was rewarded with Albus Dumbledore in all his glory, his wand smoking from the powerful curse. Stepping forward, he conjured thick metal bands to bound Hagrid's limbs.

He looked on his former employee with pity and dissapointment.

Hagrid averted his eyes, unable to face his one time idol.

Placing a sticking charm on him to keep him earthbound, Dumbledore turned to Harry, helping him up and summoning his wand for him.

"I never did like that stupid oaf..." Dumbledore muttered. Clearing his throat, he went on. "It is unfortunate that Hagrid here has turned Dark, Harry. With his abilities, he can not be allowed to return to Voldemort. Do you understand?"

Harry nodded, his eyes flickering toward his first friend. He found it strange that the headmaster spoke as if Hagrid wasn't there.

Dumbledore continued.

"I trust you will use the training I provided you with and carry out what needs to be done? To fight against evil? You won't fail me like you did with Mr. Lupin?"

Harry looked downwards, emabarassed.

"I will, sir."

"And you understand what I mean now, correct?"

"I do."

Dumbledore clasped Harry on the shoulder, looking him straight on.

"Very good Harry. I am proud of you. Now, I will leave you to your duties. Just remember, magic does not work very well on giants, so you will have to use your surroundings."

Harry looked around.

"Well, he does seem to have an affinity to cooking..."

The old man positively beamed at his student.

"On the right track, I see. I will leave you now. Please come to my office when you have completed."

After casting a silencing charm on the entire cabin, Dumbledore left, his last sight being that of Harry summoning a slightly rusted manual blender from nearby.

Closing the door, he walked back to the castle.

Looking back, he was elated to see the specks of blood collecting on the windows.

"A fast learner that one...he will make a good successor..."

fin.
__________________


I dream of gardens in the desert sand
I dream of love as time runs through my hand
I dream of fire
Those dreams are tied to a horse that will never tire
And in the flames
Her shadows play in the shape of a man's desire


Last edited by Amerision; 06-03-2006 at 12:53 AM.
Amerision is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 06-03-2006, 12:59 AM   #4
ip82
Prisoner
 
ip82's Avatar
 
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 2,921
Niiice...

By the way, Hagrid could have killed Harry if it was Voldemort who prepared the poison (or say added some of his blood into it).
__________________
IP82 stories:

Potter's Resistance 1: Breaking Ties -> DLP Thread
Yin and Yang -> DLP Thread

Ficwad Profile || HP Recycle Bin || Crap filter C2
Rule no. 1 - You do not talk about Alpha Fight Club...
ip82 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 06-04-2006, 03:49 PM   #5
Cupspeaker
Fixed
 
Cupspeaker's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2006
Location: home
Age: 72
Gender: Male
Posts: 216
I liked this fic not because of its humor, although it was funny, but for its unique way to kill Harry. Hagrid betraying the light side - LOL! The idea just makes me laugh my head off thinking of big hairy hagrid being evil.
Cupspeaker is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-03-2009, 04:47 PM   #6
Scrittore
Groundskeeper
 
Scrittore's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2009
Gender: Male
Posts: 362
I'd give it a 3.5 or a 4/5 for the Dark humor and the story itself. I was expecting Hagrid's betrayal once I began reading the story but the dialogue was hilarious at points.
Scrittore is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-03-2009, 05:46 PM   #7
Dethklok
Order Member
 
Dethklok's Avatar
 
Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: The power of Christ compels him not to tell you.
Gender: Male
Posts: 839
I love this. And the little continuation by Amerison kind of paints Dumbledore and now Harry as kind of oppressors.

Good stuff.
__________________
"You dare tempt me lackey of Chaos? Save your breath. You will need it to scream when the Emperor judges you in the afterlife."

Katamari Damacy: The Horror...the horror

Harry Potter by J.K. Rowling
A boy finds that life will always be a disappointment. Contains Magic.
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 198 - Words: 1,084,170 - Review: 1,000,000+ - Updated: 8-21-07 - Published: 6-29-07 - Harry P. & Ginevra W. - Complete



Dethklok is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-03-2009, 07:03 PM   #8
Korisovra
Headmaster
 
Korisovra's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: At your mothers house
Age: 35
Gender: Male
Posts: 1,163
Send a message via AIM to Korisovra Send a message via MSN to Korisovra Send a message via Yahoo to Korisovra
Definitely amusing in a dark sort of way. 4/5
__________________
Harry sighed, wiping a tired hand across his face. "I understand why you did what you did, Bruce. The point is you didn't need to blow up three buses, two boats, a nunnery, and a toy poodle."


"I don't like poodles," muttered Batman, looking rather like a child being scolded.



Korisovra is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 12-09-2009, 05:09 PM   #9
sincostan
High Inquisitor
 
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: socal
Gender: Male
Posts: 547
The lighthearted tone feels inappropriate for a story like this 3/5. It took away from the impact of this story.
__________________
"Theoretically, all acts of debauchery are exonerated when performed in the name of science. It is difficult to cry foul when one's pursuit of knowledge is so noble." ~Robo Jesus
sincostan is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-01-2011, 02:07 AM   #10
Xiph0
Administrator
First Tovarisch
 
Xiph0's Avatar
 
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: People's Republic of California
Gender: Male
Posts: 8,768
This is bad. Not funny, and even taking the date into account... not funny. 1/5
__________________
Quote:
Originally Posted by happyg View Post
As far as I can tell, Sree is some kind of racist joke.
Xiph0 is offline   Reply With Quote

Tags
author:bernice, oneshot


Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)
 
Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump

Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
Oneshot - What Was Your Name, Again? by Full Pensieve - K - ONE-SHOT ip82 Humor 12 05-17-2014 09:37 PM
Oneshot - Birth of a Name by nonjon - T - One Shot radioactive Humor 9 01-22-2010 10:10 PM
Dead Link - Paterfamilias by kphoebe and miggy - R (one-shot) Lady Almaren Almost Recommended 17 08-14-2009 04:05 PM
Nice To be Here Opaque Introduction Archives [Closed] 19 03-05-2006 02:18 PM
Sorrows of Lucifer (One-shot) Mrriddler FanFic Discussion 0 01-04-2006 10:59 AM


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 08:37 PM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.9
Copyright ©2000 - 2017, vBulletin Solutions, Inc.
Copyright ©2005 - 2016 DLP Group. All rights reserved.
No personal intellectual property on this site may be used without the credit and express permission of the respective authors.