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Oneshot Twisted Roses by Lady Salazar - ONESHOT - T - HP/LE

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Amerision, Jul 15, 2006.

3.25/5, 16 votes
  1. Amerision

    Amerision Galactic Sheep Emperor DLP Supporter

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    Jul 15, 2006 #1
    Title: Twisted Roses
    Author: Lady Salazar
    Pairing: HPLE
    Rating: T
    Words: 624
    Published: January 9, 2006
    Status: Complete/ONESHOT
    Summary: Even though it means her death, Lily just can't let Harry go. Mild HP/LE
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2745133/1/

    This was the first oneshot I read, and will always stay as my favorite.

    Just give it chance.



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  2. Jheph

    Jheph Groundskeeper

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    Jul 15, 2006 #2
    It was okay, but it was a bit too short and it was not very satisfying compare to those good oneshot fics.
    Average!
     
  3. Deamon Deathstone

    Deamon Deathstone Squib DLP Supporter

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    Jul 15, 2006 #3
    I agree. I would rather see it as a prologue of a longer fic then as a one-shot.
    It's just to damn short and it really doesn't bring that much new to the table so to speak.
     
  4. Niffler Lord

    Niffler Lord Headmaster

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    Jul 16, 2006 #4
    Its good but unsatisfying. This would make a great start to a story if the author continues. 3/5
     
  5. Ryuu Ken

    Ryuu Ken Second Year

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    Jul 16, 2006 #5
    It was an okay story but too short to get a pass in my book. If the author chooses to continue it'll be probably be worthwhile reading but not in it's current length.
     
  6. Fuegodefuerza

    Fuegodefuerza Minister of Magic

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    Jul 16, 2006 #6
    For a oneshot, I would say that it's pretty good. 3/5. But if I were to rank it against any other multi-chaptered story of the same quality, it would be the trash bin for this story.
     
  7. Nexus

    Nexus Denarii Host

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    Jul 23, 2006 #7
    I read this story some time back and it seemed like it was going somewhere and it might have been better if the one-shot was a prologue to a continued story. I'll give it 3/5
     
  8. Alexx

    Alexx Card Captored and buttsecksed

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    Nov 15, 2013 #8
    I thought it was ok, very much a thing Lily would do. Harry going back in time, making Lily fall in love with him, fathering himself and letting Lily sacrifice herself so he could live was full of win. 3/5
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