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Old 11-02-2005, 01:28 AM   #1
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A Very Thin Line by Lavender Brown - NC17 - JL/LE

Title: A Very Thin Line
Author: Lavender Brown
Rating: NC-17
Status: Complete
Genre: Romance/Drama
Pairing: James Potter/Lily Evans
Summary: Lily Evans can’t stand James Potter. James is determined to change Lily’s mind. A battle of wits ensues, proving the old adage ‘There is a very thin line between love and hate.’
Link: http://www.checkmated.com/story.php?story=2078

the story is in checkmated's bedchamber. so first you need to sign up for checkmated and then wait to get approval for the bedchamber. if there is difficulty, i can upload to dlp. The story is well done. i give it a 7.5/10, then again my opinion might be higher than you peeps.

there are some stupid parts where the characters think to themselves, but the scenes are very sensual and interesting. pretty graphic too.


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Old 01-31-2006, 05:22 AM   #2
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Re: A Very Thin Line by Lavender Brown - NC17 - JL/LE

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Title: A Very Thin Line

the story is in checkmated's bedchamber. so first you need to sign up for checkmated and then wait to get approval for the bedchamber. if there is difficulty, i can upload to dlp. The story is well done. i give it a 7.5/10, then again my opinion might be higher than you peeps.
Bah! I just used bugmenot and it let me right in!

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Old 04-02-2006, 12:38 AM   #3
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This story's great, I really liked it. Thank god for http://www.bugmenot.com/ but, I hate site's like that. ak. So fucking annoying. And yeah, I'd say it's pretty graphic..

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Old 04-02-2006, 06:27 AM   #4
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This story's great, I really liked it. Thank god for http://www.bugmenot.com/ but, I hate site's like that. ak. So fucking annoying. And yeah, I'd say it's pretty graphic..

Well given that its written by someone who takes after Lavender for their inspiration....



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Old 04-03-2006, 07:24 AM   #5
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LOL. Yeah, you definately have a point there.

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Old 04-03-2006, 06:31 PM   #6
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the stories a meh, but the site is a Hermione adn Retard Fanfiction Archive. *Shiver*
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I can't stand Maruader stories for the sole reason that No Matter what happens, Lily and James dies. And because of that, nothing they do is significant. They will die a death at the hands of Lord Voldemort, and any love, no matter how well built or funnily done, ceases to matter.

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