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Old 12-24-2006, 12:17 AM   #1
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101 Responses To "Go Out With Me, Evans?" by Dudette13 - T - One Shot - James/Lily

Title: 101 Lily Evans Responses For The Question "Hey, Evans, Will You Go Out With Me?"
Author: Dudette13
Rating: T
Genre: Humor, Romance
DLP Category: Humor/Parody
Pairing: James/Lily
Status: Complete
Summary: 101 Lily Evans Responses For the Question, "Hey, Evans, Will You Go Out With Me?"
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3276736/1/

Pretty funny stuff. Some responses had me chuckling, a few were a bit odd--but if you have nothing better to do, check this out!

I give it a 4/5.

Here is a preview of the first bit of them--gets better and better:

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“No.”

“No way.”

“Not on your life.”

“Potter, if you ask me that again I will rip your tongue out. The answer is no.”

“Are you about to turn into someone other than James Potter?” “No.” “Then no.”

“Go away.”

“I would rather feed myself to a pack of hungry cheetahs.” “…Does that by any chance happen to be one of your favourite hobbies?” “No!” “Aw.”

So not in the mood, Potter!”

“If you never ask me that question again, then the next time you ask me I promise I’ll say yes.”


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Old 12-24-2006, 09:10 AM   #2
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Lol, very, very predictable, but decent anyhow, and somewhat cute due to the last lines.

4/5.

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Old 12-24-2006, 09:14 AM   #3
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It's kind of amusing for the first half, but it tends to get a bit repetitive (read:very). Still, reasonably entertaining. 3/5
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Old 12-24-2006, 09:21 AM   #4
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Thanks for the link, I found that it was worth the time to read.
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Old 12-24-2006, 11:32 AM   #5
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It was very... cute. Not that it's a bad thing, though. 4/5
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Old 12-24-2006, 11:36 AM   #6
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Not too bad I guess, it killed a little time. It did get kind of repetitive though, but it's better then some things I read.
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Old 12-24-2006, 12:22 PM   #7
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I agree. I think 101 is a bit long, and there are only so many original responses.

We all knew what the last one would be.

3-4/5 for making me snicker.
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Old 12-24-2006, 12:37 PM   #8
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Same rules apply to this as does the rules for the list Psychosama posted.

If it had been a fic, or even several ficlettes, written surrounding each point, itd been better. As it is? Dry and boring.

2/5 because some were amusing.
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Old 12-25-2006, 12:10 AM   #9
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Ooh, tough call, really... It's kind of funny, I suppose, but it's not VERY funny, certainly. But it's not long enough for anything specifically good, so I don't think I can't give it anymore than a 2.5/5, 3 tops. On second thought, it is good enough for a small oneshot - nothing more.

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Old 12-25-2006, 06:54 AM   #10
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It was good. 4/5
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Old 12-25-2006, 04:13 PM   #11
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Too many so it gets boring. 2/5
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Old 12-25-2006, 04:49 PM   #12
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Um... well I liked it but its not worshipping quality. 3/5

Last one should have been "Avada Kedrava." Would have been an odd twist. Though now that I think about it, would that count as being cliched?
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Old 12-25-2006, 08:25 PM   #13
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It has potential if it was, say, developed into a series of short ficlets, but as it is, it's kind of.... Meh.

3/5.
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Old 01-09-2007, 12:01 AM   #14
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eh.. It was ok. Not great but it did have some funny responses. I don't get the crying part or why she said yes at the end. It's quite hard to know who is speaking and some answers didn't quite go with "Will you go out with me Evans?" 2/5 at best.
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Old 02-03-2007, 10:48 AM   #15
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I had my fill from the quote you posted.
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Old 02-03-2007, 09:16 PM   #16
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It isn't enough of a fic to be bad. It's good for what it is, but what it is isn't very good.

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Agreed, deathinapinkboa. I honestly think that this author should have put it in chapters. It would have made much more sense
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Old 02-10-2007, 08:45 AM   #18
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They were funny until you get to the last ones. Too fluffy and no backstory.

3.5/5 because it made me chuckle.
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Old 08-03-2009, 08:27 PM   #19
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This is recycle bin worthy. I'll give it a 3/5 because some of them did make me laugh, and some of them were creative. However, it would of done much better if it were an actual fic/story.

And I'm glad to see this:

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“I am not a ‘Tiger Lily’!” “Are too.”
The ending though a bit fluffy, and expected was still good I thought though.
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“Are you fucking serious?” “No… it would be a bit disturbing if I was.” “…Gross!”
it was good to a point

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