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On a Thin Leash by TheOtherWhiteSheep - M

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Zevrillion, Nov 12, 2005.

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  1. Zevrillion

    Zevrillion Founder Retired Staff

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    Nov 12, 2005 #1
    Title: On a Thin Leash
    Author: TheOtherWhiteSheep
    Rating: M
    Category: Action/Adventure/Romance
    Pairing: Harry/Tonks/Fluer
    Summary: Harry and his power. Both held back, held down, oppressed. And now, Harry decides to make sure both are free. Independent!Harry, Possible Dumbledore and Ron bashing, HarryMultiple PostOoTP
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2605731/1/

    Maybe not the best but a good read if you have some time over. Might turn out to be an all-powerful Harry fic but so far that hasn't happened, and it hopefully won't.
     
  2. Lord Ravenclaw

    Lord Ravenclaw DLP Overlord Admin DLP Supporter

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    Nov 12, 2005 #2
    Not too bad so far. Will have to see where it goes.
     
  3. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Kinda weird how Harry just doesnt jump the both of them and start banging them like they want him too. Meh. It's alright, better than some of the shit i've been reading lately.
     
  4. Lord Osiris

    Lord Osiris Auror

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    Nov 13, 2005 #4
    I quite like it, but yeh suprising he doesn't just pump the two considering his more then likely had a wet dream over atleast one of them! are well good stuff so far.
     
  5. zUzaque

    zUzaque Seventh Year

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    Nov 13, 2005 #5
    quite good
     
  6. Lleu

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    Nov 29, 2005 #6
    Hmm, pretty good. This has alot of potential.
     
  7. ip82

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    Nov 29, 2005 #7
    I was watching this for some time now... Actually, I was waiting for another chapter to post it here.

    Very good story. His Dumbledore is amongst the best - well written, smart, manipulative & unscrupulous. Harry is also OK. Tonks and Fleur are like any guy's dream came true, but at least he had described why would they want to form a harem.

    Generally speaking, very promising fic. Hope he keeps updating it.
     
  8. SmacksKiller

    SmacksKiller First Year

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    Nov 29, 2005 #8
    Like ip82 said, it's nice to have fic that gives a reason why the girls suddenly try to jump Harry all at the same time
     
  9. Lord Osiris

    Lord Osiris Auror

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    The fics all good and that but where's the up date? yeh his Dumbles is good but i have to say i like seeing the more analytical side of Harry. Seeing him form logical answers is so much better then all the shit where he either whines or decides to just suddenly brutally slaughter them.
     
  10. Mrriddler

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    Dec 4, 2005 #10
    Hear hear to that. Might not make the most sense but his idea about the nature of a metamorphus's (sp?) ability is really original. Definite points for that. Though Harry's rational for being "noble" and not do anything seems a bit off... but oh well.
     
  11. Hubert

    Hubert First Year

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    I've been watching this, there is certainly potential for a good fic, though i'll reserve my final judgment for a few more chapters yet.
     
  12. darkinferno9908

    darkinferno9908 Second Year

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    Dec 20, 2005 #12
    I like this one, it's written pretty good to me. And it explains alot of stuff and it doesn't have Harry being a Shinji Ikari incarnite aka a sissy whimp.
     
  13. LT2000

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    Dec 20, 2005 #13
    To be fair, canon Harry at his absolute worst doesn't even enter the same galaxy as the sheer wussiness that is Ikari Shinji. To call that boy a pussy would be to give him undue credit. NGE is a great anime, but it has just about the crappiest main character ever.
     
  14. SmacksKiller

    SmacksKiller First Year

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    Dec 20, 2005 #14
    Yeah, but for that reason, I love NGE fanfics where Shinji takes control of his life. Now that I think about it, it's kinda the same reasons that I love Indenpendant!Harry
     
  15. Nymph

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  16. MysterioX

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    Jan 6, 2006 #16
    the new chapter was good I like the insane but cool deatheater
     
  17. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    That gave me an idea. I want an insane cool Death Eater in my story now.
     
  18. oldmagic

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    Mar 1, 2006 #18
    from the looks of it, it looks good. i'll try it.
     
  19. Vassago

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    Mar 3, 2006 #19
    yeah, I like the story, but it's been ages since the last update. And i've never been know for my patience :p
     
  20. Rain

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    They updated quick in the beginning, and then the updates dropped off. Happens alot, actually. *shrugs*

    It's a fun story.
     
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