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Complete Harry Potter and the Phoenix's Flight by The Velvet Ghost - K+

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Rahkesh Asmodaeus, Nov 15, 2005.

2.5714299678802/5, 7 votes
  1. Rahkesh Asmodaeus

    Rahkesh Asmodaeus THUNDAH Bawd Admin DLP Supporter

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    Nov 15, 2005 #1
    Title: Harry Potter and the Phoenix's Flight
    Author: The Velvet Ghost
    Summary: Why is Snape acting so oddly? Who is causing the mysterious disease sweeping Hogwarts? What's wrong with Draco Malfoy? And what is the Dark Lord planning for Harry Potter's sixth year? AN ALTERNATIVE 6th BOOK, WRITTEN PREHBP, now complete.
    Link:http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1420986/1/
    Genre: Action/Adventure/Humor
    Pairings: Harry/OC (A Slytherin) R/Hr

    - I really liked this fic. One of the best I've read so far. Good length, good grammar, good enough plot. And it's finished. :) There's also a sequel up.
     
  2. Lord Ravenclaw

    Lord Ravenclaw DLP Overlord Admin DLP Supporter

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    Nov 15, 2005 #2
    I read this story long ago...I liked it. A bit fluffy in parts, but at least it's with a Slytherin. And a sequel eh? I'll have to read it.
     
  3. Rahkesh Asmodaeus

    Rahkesh Asmodaeus THUNDAH Bawd Admin DLP Supporter

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    Nov 15, 2005 #3
    Yes, it was a bit fluffy in parts, but eh, it's better than Harry/Ginny fluff. And this story had a redeemable Malfoy, and Harry started to like Snape, things I don't usually like in fics...but this fic pulled it off rather believably.
     
  4. Rahkesh Asmodaeus

    Rahkesh Asmodaeus THUNDAH Bawd Admin DLP Supporter

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    Nov 16, 2005 #4
    I've been reading the second story, and though I still like it, I just realized that this Harry is such a coward. I mean, he can't defend himself against anything. When Hogwarts was under siege, he staed with the other students and then got himself tied up. He didn't even do anything in the battle. He was just sitting there crying. And then in this story, he sees Snape, with whom he has gotten closer with, protect him from a Vampire, by turning into a vampire himself. He can't even take his wand out and protect himself. All he does is scream like a pussy and try to run away. Bah.
     
  5. Memory King

    Memory King Order Member DLP Supporter

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    Aug 16, 2009 #5
    From chapter two:
    I definitely don't intend to read any more of this shit.
     
  6. Mercenary

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    Aug 19, 2009 #6
    I use ellipses a lot. At least I think I do but... there appears to be an obsession with it in this fic.


    Harry seems a bit, I dont know. I would say OoC but thats not quite the phrase I'm looking for.

    Its not a fic I would say should be in the Library. Maybe the Recycle Bin.
     
  7. happilyeverafter

    happilyeverafter Sixth Year

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    Mar 7, 2010 #7
    It's ok, I wouldn't say a master piece though.
    3/5