[Abandoned] Secret of the Male Veela by mrriddler - R/NC17

ip82 · 12-28-2005, 01:21 PM

Title: Secret of the Male Veela
Author: mrriddler
Rating: R / NC17 (censored smut on FFN)
Chapters: 16
Words: 98,332 (ff.net)
Updated: July 8, 2006
Published: December 28, 2005
Pairings: Harry/Fleur (with more to come)
Status: Abandoned
Summary - AU from 4th Book canon. When Voldemort forcibly took Harry's blood, he didn't quite know the what he had helped unleash. Harry Potter, first male Veela in a millenia is about to take the world by storm. Nonslash, dark, independent, playboy HFleurmany.

R Link - ff.net: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2723114/1/
NC17 - FicWad: [/b]http://www.ficwad.com/viewuser.php?uid=6593
NC17 - aff.net: http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=544210793

New story from mrriddler, which means we can expect a lot of OC's, sex and dark arts...

It branches off the GOF and features Veela!Harry (hopefully the first veela story without two male sex organs ever touching one another). For now, Harry kills several DE's instead of running away like a pussy, gains Voldemort's knowledge, rapes Fleur and bonds her as a sex slave.

A little rushed, yes, but has potential.

Note: Smut parts are cut off from FFN version. There's no NC17 version online at the moment. I'll edit this once it's up.

Edit: I added NC17 link, thanks DarkPhoenix2500.

Edit: I added NC17 link(s) changed.

Checked July 24, 2012: aff.net link corrected.

DaytonDeusBlack · 12-28-2005, 01:36 PM

Yes, it is a bit rushed but I really want to see what he can make out of this. I'll be waiting for an update.

MadEyes · 12-28-2005, 03:11 PM

Holy mother of Merlin! A Veela story that’s not slash? That’s unheard of! I can practically hear the slashers rioting as I speak, cursing this and shouting ‘blasphemy!’ But I don’t rightly care; those bastards can go decompose somewhere else or face me and my poisoned cookie cutters of death!

I say, I’m going to go read this right away and I demand that an update be made quickly.

*Nods before stalking away towards the doors where the screams of outrage are coming from and getting into a fighting position, the rust in his cookie cutters catching the light as the steady sound of dripping poison and acid fill the room, making the drenched kitchenware look more dangerous then its Christmas shape may suggest.*

cmuylistoooo · 12-28-2005, 06:18 PM

^
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with u on that one, a veela story that is not slash is hard to find...there is another one though, can;t seem to remember where harry attracts both tonks and fleur...

Lord Necros · 12-28-2005, 10:06 PM

Finally no s;ash veela!harry I hate when good fics go slash

Lord Osiris · 12-28-2005, 10:30 PM

Oh im giddy from exceitment at not having to read a faggoty veela harry! thatnk you Mrriddler your a champion! another good point is that it's pre-OOtP so more points for you.

zUzaque · 12-28-2005, 10:35 PM

sweet, hey, cmuylistoooo, if you ever remember that fic, drop me a link.

Dark Syaoran · 12-29-2005, 12:43 AM

I was going to write a Veela!Harry story ages ago but never did. I had the first four chapters down but deleted them... meh. I've always looked for a good Veela!Harry story where it's not slash. Finally we have one in the making. It is rushed but if he goes back over it a tweaks it then it'll be cool.

DarkPhoenix2500 · 12-29-2005, 01:18 PM

>_> For those who want it, he posted the uncut version on adult fanfiction heres the link

http://www.adultfanfiction.net/aff/s...p?no=544210793

Goddess of Ran · 12-29-2005, 01:37 PM

Hallelujah!! Veela!Harry but not slash. This should be a good read. I'm only 16 but hey, that's never stopped me before.

Hope to see more good fics from mrriddler.

MysterioX · 12-29-2005, 01:50 PM

I really like this fleur then again who wouldn't? I just hope this doesnt conflict his time with the other fic

Dark Syaoran · 12-29-2005, 08:13 PM

They dont look any different... the uncunt version and the 'cut' version. Or maybe I was just to tired when I looked at the uncut one... ahh well.

the sad panda · 12-29-2005, 08:21 PM

it's nice to finally have a non-slash veela fic. now we have to wait for more... and pray that it doesn't go slash....

nonjon · 12-29-2005, 08:51 PM

For those wondering, Icedragonmo3 started a male slash-less Veela fic and abandoned it over a year and a half ago. That's probably about the only other one I've seen.
It's Emergence of Heritage and it's here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1623658/1/

Same author has probably the best 2 chapter start to a HP/X-men crossover abandoned too. Man, I hate unfinished fics.

DaytonDeusBlack · 12-29-2005, 11:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by the sad panda

it's nice to finally have a non-slash veela fic. now we have to wait for more... and pray that it doesn't go slash....

mrriddler is a member of DLP so he'll know better than to write slash.

MysterioX · 12-30-2005, 10:20 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by nonjon

For those wondering, Icedragonmo3 started a male slash-less Veela fic and abandoned it over a year and a half ago. That's probably about the only other one I've seen.
It's Emergence of Heritage and it's here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1623658/1/

yep it was excellent and in it I think he bangs the Patil twins

DaytonDeusBlack · 12-30-2005, 10:35 AM

yes Emergence of Heritage was really good. Too bad it's abandoned.

Mrriddler · 01-03-2006, 10:43 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DaytonDeusBlack

Quote:

Originally Posted by the sad panda

it's nice to finally have a non-slash veela fic. now we have to wait for more... and pray that it doesn't go slash....

mrriddler is a member of DLP so he'll know better than to write slash.

That's true. I'll be lynched ... probably in real life as well unless I move and change school.

hehe, I can't believe there's only been two non slash male veela stories ever...the emergence one and one by aramand someone told me. I'm not linking it, it's disturbing...

I'm not sure exactly where you mean by rushed? The sex scene? the battle? or what. If you mean the male veela concept, then wait a bit for chapter 3. I also revised chapter 1, which was really bad as some noticed. Also chapter 1 on ff.net wasn't suppose to have the indicated lemon part (only like a page though) but I forgot to cut the part when I uploaded the revised part...lucky me no one reported me...yet.

As always, keep the comments, reviews, criticisms coming. Oh, I'm also willing to take suggestions for which other canon girls or any specific criterias you guys might like.

PS: Other story...eh, I'm revising the plotline and probably deleting a third of everything I have so far. I think it may be easier to start small and get large than start large and...yeah

zUzaque · 01-03-2006, 03:08 PM

hmmm... Tonks mabie... Oh! and Malfoys mom. The twins too. All good pairs.

Lord Necros · 01-03-2006, 03:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by zUzaque

hmmm... Tonks mabie... Oh! and Malfoys mom. The twins too. All good pairs.

no bella and cissa

12-28-2005, 01:21 PM	#1
ip82 God of Magic Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 2,899	Secret of the Male Veela by mrriddler - R/NC17 Title: Secret of the Male Veela Author: mrriddler Rating: R / NC17 (censored smut on FFN) Chapters: 16 Words: 98,332 (ff.net) Updated: July 8, 2006 Published: December 28, 2005 Pairings: Harry/Fleur (with more to come) Status: Abandoned Summary - AU from 4th Book canon. When Voldemort forcibly took Harry's blood, he didn't quite know the what he had helped unleash. Harry Potter, first male Veela in a millenia is about to take the world by storm. Nonslash, dark, independent, playboy HFleurmany. R Link - ff.net: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2723114/1/ NC17 - FicWad: [/b]http://www.ficwad.com/viewuser.php?uid=6593 NC17 - aff.net: http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=544210793 New story from mrriddler, which means we can expect a lot of OC's, sex and dark arts... It branches off the GOF and features Veela!Harry (hopefully the first veela story without two male sex organs ever touching one another). For now, Harry kills several DE's instead of running away like a pussy, gains Voldemort's knowledge, rapes Fleur and bonds her as a sex slave. A little rushed, yes, but has potential. Note: Smut parts are cut off from FFN version. There's no NC17 version online at the moment. I'll edit this once it's up. Edit: I added NC17 link, thanks DarkPhoenix2500. Edit: I added NC17 link(s) changed. Checked July 24, 2012: aff.net link corrected. __________________ IP82 stories: Potter's Resistance 1: Breaking Ties -> DLP Thread Yin and Yang -> DLP Thread Ficwad Profile \|\| HP Recycle Bin \|\| Crap filter C2 Rule no. 1 - You do not talk about Alpha Fight Club... Last edited by Dark Minion; 07-24-2012 at 03:04 PM.

12-28-2005, 03:11 PM	#3
MadEyes DA Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Some Tropical Island Age: 30 Gender: Male Posts: 238	Holy mother of Merlin! A Veela story that’s not slash? That’s unheard of! I can practically hear the slashers rioting as I speak, cursing this and shouting ‘blasphemy!’ But I don’t rightly care; those bastards can go decompose somewhere else or face me and my poisoned cookie cutters of death! I say, I’m going to go read this right away and I demand that an update be made quickly. Nods before stalking away towards the doors where the screams of outrage are coming from and getting into a fighting position, the rust in his cookie cutters catching the light as the steady sound of dripping poison and acid fill the room, making the drenched kitchenware look more dangerous then its Christmas shape may suggest. __________________ *Contra felicem vix deus vires habet* Against a lucky man a god scarcely has power

12-28-2005, 10:35 PM	#7
zUzaque DA Member Join Date: May 2005 Location: Canada Posts: 241	sweet, hey, cmuylistoooo, if you ever remember that fic, drop me a link. __________________ Fuck fuck fuck, Mother mother fuck, Mother mother fuck fuck, Mother fuck mother fuck, noise noise noise, 1 2 1 2 3 4 noise noise, Smokin weed, Smokin weed, Doin coke, Drinkin beers, drinkin beers beers beers, Rollin fatties, Rollin blunts, who smokes the blunts? We smoke the blunts, Rollin blunts and smokin blunts... -jay rap

12-29-2005, 12:43 AM	#8
Dark Syaoran Once and Future King Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: The Holy Grail Posts: 5,699	I was going to write a Veela!Harry story ages ago but never did. I had the first four chapters down but deleted them... meh. I've always looked for a good Veela!Harry story where it's not slash. Finally we have one in the making. It is rushed but if he goes back over it a tweaks it then it'll be cool. __________________

12-29-2005, 01:37 PM	#10
Goddess of Ran Fourth Year Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Philippines Age: 23 Posts: 173	Hallelujah!! Veela!Harry but not slash. This should be a good read. I'm only 16 but hey, that's never stopped me before. Hope to see more good fics from mrriddler. __________________ If you know the enemy and know yourself, you need not fear the result of a hundred battles. If you know yourself but not the enemy for every victory gained you will also suffer a defeat. If you know neither the enemy nor yourself, you will succumb in every battle. -Sun Tzu, The Art of War

12-28-2005, 01:36 PM	#2
DaytonDeusBlack Seventh Year Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Mumbai, India Age: 22 Posts: 268	Yes, it is a bit rushed but I really want to see what he can make out of this. I'll be waiting for an update.

12-28-2005, 06:18 PM	#4
cmuylistoooo Second Year Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 111	^ \|\| with u on that one, a veela story that is not slash is hard to find...there is another one though, can;t seem to remember where harry attracts both tonks and fleur...

12-28-2005, 10:06 PM	#5
Lord Necros Fifth Year Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: USA Age: 28 Gender: Male Posts: 186	Finally no s;ash veela!harry I hate when good fics go slash

12-28-2005, 10:30 PM	#6
Lord Osiris Minister of Magic Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: The land down under Age: 25 Gender: Male Posts: 677	Oh im giddy from exceitment at not having to read a faggoty veela harry! thatnk you Mrriddler your a champion! another good point is that it's pre-OOtP so more points for you.

12-29-2005, 01:18 PM	#9
DarkPhoenix2500 First Year Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: United States Age: 27 Posts: 68	>_> For those who want it, he posted the uncut version on adult fanfiction heres the link http://www.adultfanfiction.net/aff/s...p?no=544210793

12-29-2005, 01:50 PM	#11
MysterioX Order Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Off the record Age: 17 Gender: Male Posts: 422	I really like this fleur then again who wouldn't? I just hope this doesnt conflict his time with the other fic

12-29-2005, 08:13 PM	#12
Dark Syaoran Once and Future King Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: The Holy Grail Posts: 5,699	They dont look any different... the uncunt version and the 'cut' version. Or maybe I was just to tired when I looked at the uncut one... ahh well. __________________

12-29-2005, 08:21 PM	#13
the sad panda Muggle Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: NY Age: 29 Posts: 6	it's nice to finally have a non-slash veela fic. now we have to wait for more... and pray that it doesn't go slash....

12-29-2005, 08:51 PM	#14
nonjon Super Moderator Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 2,127	For those wondering, Icedragonmo3 started a male slash-less Veela fic and abandoned it over a year and a half ago. That's probably about the only other one I've seen. It's Emergence of Heritage and it's here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1623658/1/ Same author has probably the best 2 chapter start to a HP/X-men crossover abandoned too. Man, I hate unfinished fics. __________________ yahoogroup :: fanfiction.net Lucius waved off the Headmaster with a practiced aristocratic sneer. “I'm trembling in my crushed velvet slippers.” - Now Hiring: Committee for the Disposal of Dangerous Creatures

12-30-2005, 10:35 AM	#17
DaytonDeusBlack Seventh Year Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Mumbai, India Age: 22 Posts: 268	yes Emergence of Heritage was really good. Too bad it's abandoned.

01-03-2006, 03:08 PM	#19
zUzaque DA Member Join Date: May 2005 Location: Canada Posts: 241	hmmm... Tonks mabie... Oh! and Malfoys mom. The twins too. All good pairs. __________________ Fuck fuck fuck, Mother mother fuck, Mother mother fuck fuck, Mother fuck mother fuck, noise noise noise, 1 2 1 2 3 4 noise noise, Smokin weed, Smokin weed, Doin coke, Drinkin beers, drinkin beers beers beers, Rollin fatties, Rollin blunts, who smokes the blunts? We smoke the blunts, Rollin blunts and smokin blunts... -jay rap

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