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Old 11-05-2007, 03:38 PM   #1
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Contemplating Clouds by Tehan - T

Title: Contemplating Clouds
Author: Tehan
Rating: T
Genre: Romance/Humor
DLP Category: Romance
Pairing: Harry/Luna
Chapters: 5
Words: 8,222
Updated: Jan. 5, 2010
Published: Oct. 28, 2007
Status: Abandoned

Summary: Apathetic Occlumency teacher twisting your mind out of shape? Never fear, there's a charming young girl in the year below to twist it back in the opposite direction. Just hope it doesn't snap.
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3862145/...plating_Clouds
Link: WbA thread: https://forums.darklordpotter.net/showthread.php?t=7517

There are no doubts, it's definitely worthy of DLP library.
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Old 11-05-2007, 03:43 PM   #2
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Yeah, no dout. 5/5 DLP goodness.
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Old 11-05-2007, 04:57 PM   #3
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5/5, very entertaining.
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Old 11-05-2007, 05:33 PM   #4
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Man, my gauge of total fluffyness and pure awesomeness just completely sky-rocked.

It's an Light, Unequaled, Nice and completely Atypical read. In short it's the perfect L.U.N.A's story. ^^
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Old 11-05-2007, 05:38 PM   #5
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Original, un-clichéd, inventive. Grammar and spelling are good. Plus, it's entertaining! 5/5
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Old 11-05-2007, 05:51 PM   #6
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I like it, I love it, and I want some more of it. 5/5
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Old 11-05-2007, 05:55 PM   #7
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I little fluffy for DLP... but I'll give it a 4.5/5. You can't help but like a good Harry/Luna fic.

Very original as well. I liked the umbrella skimmer... very strange and chaos causing.
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Old 11-05-2007, 06:00 PM   #8
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Normally, this isn't my type of fic. Somehow, Tehan made me love it anyways. Well done, Tehan, well done.

4.5/5 (It's too short to garner a 5/5 at the moment)
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Old 11-05-2007, 07:42 PM   #9
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A bit fluffy, but it's in-character Luna fluff, a tremendous feat for any fanfic author.

This fic is so full of not OOC win it's crazy....

5/5
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Old 11-05-2007, 08:47 PM   #10
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Old 11-06-2007, 08:33 AM   #11
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It's awesome so far, and while the chapters are very short, they are satisfying. 4.5/5 so far.

You should probably correct this though:

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Luna was just starting to describe her illicit campaign to burn off all the mistletoe on the school grounds

to stop the nargle population boom every Christmas when Harry realized that his brain had somehow un-crimped itself... and that it was gone half six.
Keep it up.
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Old 11-06-2007, 09:32 AM   #12
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Love this story, I've been following it in WBA. 5/5!
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Old 11-07-2007, 12:26 AM   #13
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Quirky and lighthearted, just what the Doc ordered.

5/5.
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Old 11-07-2007, 01:33 AM   #14
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First prize for best portrayal of Luna Lovegood.
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Old 11-07-2007, 01:45 AM   #15
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Yeah. That's what impresses me the most about this story. Tehan's portrayal of Luna Lovegood, something a lot of authors totally fuck up, even good authors. She isn't an easy character to write, not by a long shot.

You make her more human while still keeping her weirdness, which is how she should be. She isn't some emotionless doll that is never surprised, never angry, never sad... she has feelings. She nearly cried on the spot when she found out Dumbledore had been murdered.

Good work, Tehan.
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Old 11-07-2007, 01:41 PM   #16
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I agree with everyone else. Great writing, fast easy reading, quality Lovegood. Been awhile since I read a fic with the characters still solidy based on canon that was this good.

4/5...I reserve one for the plot that is still pending development, though fully expected to occur.

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Old 11-07-2007, 04:55 PM   #17
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5/5 so long as you keep updating. Even if the updates are small, they're so satisfying.
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Old 11-07-2007, 05:14 PM   #18
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The character portrayal of Luna is about all I can find worth reading in the story. The rest is utter tripe, you bandwagoning cunts! This barely deserves a one out of five! the scene with Cho? Fail! Jetski Umbrellas?! How utterly retarded.

You have failed your /b/ culture, Tehan. You are now Anti-/b/.


BTW: Great Job, niglet. 4/5. Maek it longer nao, plox? Longcat demands it.
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The character portrayal of Luna is about all I can find worth reading in the story. The rest is utter tripe, you bandwagoning cunts! This barely deserves a one out of five! the scene with Cho? Fail! Jetski Umbrellas?! How utterly retarded.
This coming from the person that gave "You're a wizard, Potter" a 4 out of 5.

A story where Snape quotes the fucking magic schoolbus (how very gay), where Harry turns himself into a fucking girl and goes prancing around Diagon Alley and calls Snape "daddy".

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I dont see the hype in this. It wasnt BAD. It was decent but meh. Snape was too eager to curse, and while he may hate Harry, I doubt he is going to hex him for such idiotic reasons.

4/5
Vash, you fucking hypocritical scrotum monkey , you got nowhere to criticize on this score.

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This coming from the person that gave "You're a wizard, Potter" a 4 out of 5.

A story where Snape quotes the fucking magic schoolbus (how very gay), where Harry turns himself into a fucking girl and goes prancing around Diagon Alley and calls Snape "daddy".



Vash, you fucking hypocritical scrotum monkey , you got nowhere to criticize on this score.
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