Bloody Harry by captain Tungsten - K+

MoPhire · 11-29-2007, 07:23 PM

Title: Bloody Harry
Author: Captain Tungsten
Rating: K+
Genre: General/Spiritual
DLP Category: Alternates
Pairing: Harry P. & Myrtle
Status: Oneshot
Summary: The Bloody Baron is acting very strange. A centuries old promise is finally fulfilled. Dumbledore gets a new toy. [Oneshot Currently no plans to continue]
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3808959/1/Bloody_Harry

One of the few stories I've read that feature a Ghost!Harry. It is well written, and I didn't notice any grammatical errors or anything else that detracted from my immersion in it. On the romance aspect, there is pretty much none (just the way I like it) so don't let it put you off an otherwise extremely enjoyable read.

I think this would be a great addition to the DLP library.

5/5 from me

MoPhire

Antivash · 11-29-2007, 07:58 PM

3 out of 5.

It wasnt all that bad and served as a good waste of time, but nothing really special. Found a few errors in spelling, mostly letter omissions. Still decent writing I suppose.

Solomon · 11-29-2007, 08:59 PM

I like this one. It looks like it would be a good prologue to something. Whether that something is the events that caused Harry to head back in time and remove his core or the events that follow the events of the one-shot directly, it doesn't really matter.

That said, this feels like it's just a prologue. It was good, but not good enough alone to really belong in the library. 3/5

World · 11-30-2007, 03:03 AM

I agree, it doesn't have the completeness of a one-shot, it feels like there needs to be more.

That said, it wasn't bad. 3.5/5

Illnill · 11-30-2007, 04:42 AM

It is a good idea or anyone to adopt and twist to his own fancy. There were some spelling mistakes. It's not a oneshot and nothing is resolved yet, it's more of a plot bunny.

If it were a oneshot I would have given it a 4/5.

But as a plot bunny, you're not going to get more than 3/5 out of me.

deathinapinkboa · 11-30-2007, 09:05 PM

It feels like anot very good Kender challenge

AnnF · 12-04-2007, 04:39 PM

Reads very incomplete, errors, and then the AN arrogance. It's a plot bunny up for adoption.. 2/5

Saint Alia · 12-04-2007, 08:25 PM

Passed the time, didn't really pick up my attention though. Felt like a kind of filler for a longer story. 2/5

Manatheron · 12-05-2007, 01:04 AM

Liked it as a fragment, sadly that's probably all it will ever be. 3/5 for the good bunnie

maidros · 12-15-2007, 07:37 AM

A very interesting take on Harry. I have never seen a well written Ghost!Harry, and this idea of the author is one of the best I have encountered. Full marks from me.
Regards,
Maidros

Link · 12-15-2007, 07:53 AM

It would have been an interesting and probably excellent story.

Still, it's good, and maybe someone will continue this (as the author left it for adoption).

3.5

11-29-2007, 07:23 PM	#1
MoPhire First Year Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Sheffield UK Age: 28 Gender: Male Posts: 34 DLP Supporter	Bloody Harry by captain Tungsten - K+ Title: Bloody Harry Author: Captain Tungsten Rating: K+ Genre: General/Spiritual DLP Category: Alternates Pairing: Harry P. & Myrtle Status: Oneshot Summary: The Bloody Baron is acting very strange. A centuries old promise is finally fulfilled. Dumbledore gets a new toy. [Oneshot Currently no plans to continue] Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3808959/1/Bloody_Harry One of the few stories I've read that feature a Ghost!Harry. It is well written, and I didn't notice any grammatical errors or anything else that detracted from my immersion in it. On the romance aspect, there is pretty much none (just the way I like it) so don't let it put you off an otherwise extremely enjoyable read. I think this would be a great addition to the DLP library. 5/5 from me MoPhire __________________ "Opinions are like ass holes; everyone has them. Some are just bigger than others."

11-29-2007, 07:58 PM	#2
Antivash Until we meet again... ...Stay gold. Bang. Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Ghost Planet Age: 34 Gender: Male Posts: 6,930 DLP Supporter	3 out of 5. It wasnt all that bad and served as a good waste of time, but nothing really special. Found a few errors in spelling, mostly letter omissions. Still decent writing I suppose. __________________ Easy to use Fanfiction Download Tutorial by Vash Find out how to use a steam sig like this here! PS: If you PM and ask how to do it, I will ban you. Srsly.

11-30-2007, 03:03 AM	#4
World Oberstgruppenführer Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Axis of Evil (Original) Age: 30 Gender: Male Posts: 3,175 DLP Supporter	I agree, it doesn't have the completeness of a one-shot, it feels like there needs to be more. That said, it wasn't bad. 3.5/5 __________________

12-04-2007, 08:25 PM	#8
Saint Alia First Year Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Wisconsin Age: 26 Gender: Female Posts: 27	Passed the time, didn't really pick up my attention though. Felt like a kind of filler for a longer story. 2/5 __________________ I may be drunk, Miss, but in the morning I will be sober. You however will still be ugly. I am prepared to meet my Maker. Whether my Maker is prepared for the great ordeal of meeting me is another matter. -Winston Churchill

12-05-2007, 01:04 AM	#9
Manatheron Headmaster Join Date: Dec 2006 Age: 32 Gender: Male Posts: 1,166	Liked it as a fragment, sadly that's probably all it will ever be. 3/5 for the good bunnie __________________ Known to be Neutral Good And occasionally DLP's Devil's Advocate Those who would give up a little liberty to gain a little security deserve neither, and will lose both. ~Benjamin Franklin~

11-29-2007, 08:59 PM	#3
Solomon *Heir* Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Minnesota Age: 29 Gender: Male Posts: 2,744	I like this one. It looks like it would be a good prologue to something. Whether that something is the events that caused Harry to head back in time and remove his core or the events that follow the events of the one-shot directly, it doesn't really matter. That said, this feels like it's just a prologue. It was good, but not good enough alone to really belong in the library. 3/5

11-30-2007, 04:42 AM	#5
Illnill First Year Join Date: Nov 2007 Gender: Male Posts: 44	It is a good idea or anyone to adopt and twist to his own fancy. There were some spelling mistakes. It's not a oneshot and nothing is resolved yet, it's more of a plot bunny. If it were a oneshot I would have given it a 4/5. But as a plot bunny, you're not going to get more than 3/5 out of me.

12-04-2007, 04:39 PM	#7
AnnF First Year Join Date: Mar 2007 Gender: Female Posts: 22	Reads very incomplete, errors, and then the AN arrogance. It's a plot bunny up for adoption.. 2/5

12-15-2007, 07:37 AM	#10
maidros Fourth Year Join Date: Sep 2007 Gender: Male Posts: 119	A very interesting take on Harry. I have never seen a well written Ghost!Harry, and this idea of the author is one of the best I have encountered. Full marks from me. Regards, Maidros

12-15-2007, 07:53 AM	#11
Link Order Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: China Age: 29 Gender: Male Posts: 845 DLP Supporter	It would have been an interesting and probably excellent story. Still, it's good, and maybe someone will continue this (as the author left it for adoption). 3.5

Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)

Thread Tools
Show Printable Version Email this Page
Display Modes
Linear Mode Switch to Hybrid Mode Switch to Threaded Mode

Similar Threads
Thread	Thread Starter	Forum	Replies	Last Post
Abandoned - Not Bloody Likely by Nymphe14 - M	thisperson	Almost Recommended	82	08-25-2015 01:41 PM
Bloody Crusade.	Verse of Darkness	Challenges	0	06-27-2007 06:52 PM
Photoshop: Bloody Text	CGB	Graphics Discussion	0	02-23-2007 09:06 PM