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Old 01-19-2006, 05:32 PM   #1
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Bound by Brotherhood, Forged in Fire by KnightBlazer85- X -T

Title: Bound By Brotherhood Forged In Fire
Author: KnightBlazer85
Rating: T
Genre: Action/Adventure/Romance
Pairing: N/A
Crossover: Xmen
Summary: Complete After OTP all of Harry’s friends, bar one betray him. Now Harry seeks a new path to revenge. They say the friendships forged in the fires of adversity last the longest. Let’s see if it’s true XMen XOVER Sequel posted
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2258753/1/
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Old 01-19-2006, 07:56 PM   #2
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I tried this one when it started, but I left it for some reason. I think the writing was too choppy or the plot was too clichéd. I really don’t remember, I just know that I don’t think I’ll take it up anytime soon.

I’m not that bored
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Old 01-20-2006, 11:21 AM   #3
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i dont get it why they betray him....
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Old 01-20-2006, 11:29 AM   #4
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It's explained later on.
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Old 05-26-2006, 01:53 AM   #5
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Interesting, but since there are so many of these this one is really up to par with fics like Shattered Mirror.
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Old 05-27-2006, 02:25 AM   #6
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Its an ok story. But the X men xover does't seem to fit. If anything it seems a little forced and secondary. Mind you I like the story but I think it would have been better without the xover.

Then of course there's the cliched animagus and Potter wealth....
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Old 05-27-2006, 11:41 AM   #7
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It's an okay read, but there were too many cliches that I came across to really enjoy the story. Shattered Mirrors set the standard for X-men crossovers for me. Other than that, it's a good story to save for rainy day reading.
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Old 05-27-2006, 02:30 PM   #8
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I like this story but I recognise Harrys mutant power to manipulate energy, either I have read this story before or there is another story were it is harrys mutant power...
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Old 05-27-2006, 07:08 PM   #9
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i liked it. more than the third xmen. that movies sucked.
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Yeah, I wasn't too impressed with the third movie either. Sorta butchered the series for me.
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Old 06-17-2007, 04:00 AM   #11
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I didn't like this fic at all to be honest. I felt there was too many cliches, and Harry's power is somewhat unbelievable, even for a mutizard. And, I don't really like Neville.
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Old 12-18-2007, 03:46 PM   #12
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This fic is average at best. There are quite a few clichés in it, and it jumps around quite a lot. Characterization isn't anything special either, but that's rarely the case in betrayal fics anyway. It's nonetheless a long, entertaining read if you're bored. Perfect Recycling Bin material IMO.

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