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Old 06-10-2008, 12:33 AM   #1
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Chance To Get It Right by Black Knight 03 - K+

Title: Chance To Get It Right
Author: Black Knight 03
Rating: K+
Genre: Romance
DLP Category: Romance
Pairing: Harry Potter and Padma Patil
Chapters: 3
Words: 19,271
Updated: April 15, 2008
Published: March 17, 2007

Status: Complete
Summary: Harry Potter and Padma Patil cross paths at the Ministry’s New Year’s Celebration and find the potential for the something else. PP-HP
Link: Chance To Get It Right

Short fluff story. Read it earlier, fairly enjoyable read.

Keep in mind that this is fluff, if you don't like it that much, I suggest you not read it.

That about sums it up.


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Old 06-10-2008, 01:19 AM   #2
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Read this one a while ago. I'll give it a 3.5/5
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Old 06-10-2008, 02:06 AM   #3
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I read that a couple of months ago. It definitely is a fluff story and naught more. It is well written and an enjoyable quick read. 3.5/5
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Old 06-10-2008, 02:42 AM   #4
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I enjoyed this one a lot. An excellent read. 4/5 from me.
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Old 06-10-2008, 12:22 PM   #5
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In before Seratin and this story was alright, nothin' special. 3/5
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Old 06-10-2008, 12:25 PM   #6
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Old 06-10-2008, 03:05 PM   #7
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I was in the mood for fluff but this felt empty. Maybe it's because I like a little humor in my fluff and this was closer to angsty fluff than fun, cute fluff.

But it's a pretty standard little romance fic, written well, and seen through to its conclusion. 3/5 sounds about right, but this isn't one I'll be recommending to others.
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Old 06-10-2008, 04:19 PM   #8
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Well written fluff, but nothing too original or nonstandard. 3/5 from me.
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I like it. The author didn't have any annoying grammatical errors and neither Padma nor Harry dropped down to their knees professing their undying love to one another in the first or second chapter. 4/5
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Old 06-10-2008, 07:28 PM   #10
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3/5
Nothing special, and somewhat confusing at moments. But still, something to pass the time with.
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Old 06-10-2008, 08:10 PM   #11
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Pretty good. It doesn't go too far afield. Everything's pretty grounded. I'll say 4 stars because it's nice to read something that's not too syrupy.
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Old 06-10-2008, 11:04 PM   #12
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Not bad, a bit ill-defined in certain places. A good short read.
3/5.
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Old 06-11-2008, 02:14 AM   #13
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Was a well-paced romance and an enjoyable read. I felt it left off too abruptly though, could have done with some semblance of a conclusion.
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Old 06-11-2008, 07:54 PM   #14
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Not bad. The first fluffy fic I've read in a while and it was good enough to hold my attention. 4/5.
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Old 06-11-2008, 08:06 PM   #15
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The end was unsatisfying. It's like, Harry's going to go kill people for committing terrorism. But Padma tells him to let the incompetent Ministry handle it. He does as he's told. The end.
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