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ZeroTheDestroyer
08-03-2009, 11:23 AM
Title: The Volleyball Tournament (M)
Author: Keita And Kitty
Rating: M
Genre: Humor/General
DLP Category: Naruto
Pairing: Naruto/?
Status: WIP
Summary: All the females compete in a volleyball contest on the beach with everyone watching, the prize? why a bathing suit made of spakling jewelery & Sasuke of course. Watch them compete in two man teams, Rated M, Nudity, sexual, lemons, cursing,read more inside

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5118268/1/

No idea what to make of this. It is like some funny smut fic. Thought I would put it out for review.
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EsperJones
08-05-2009, 08:35 PM
As smut it's boring, as humor it's not that funny. Granted I only read three chapters, but it didn't really interest me in the least.

2/5.

Zarent
08-06-2009, 02:35 AM
Bad. Very bad bad bad. 1/5.

Snarf
08-06-2009, 03:13 AM
I swear to god, Zero, do you just sit around and fap all day to anime smut? Whenever I see a post by you, it's either praising all things harem or ... well, that's about it.

Krogan
08-06-2009, 04:49 AM
I swear to god, Zero, do you just sit around and fap all day to anime smut? Whenever I see a post by you, it's either praising all things harem or ... well, that's about it.
Read the fic his sig links to, go ahead.

Snarf
08-06-2009, 07:56 AM
Read the fic his sig links to, go ahead.

MILF story for the win, actually. I massive lol'd.

But still, it just proves my point. Zero, you're a fucking perv. :D Good work.