The Volleyball Tournament (M)

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  1. ZeroTheDestroyer

    ZeroTheDestroyer Auror

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    Title: The Volleyball Tournament (M)
    Author: Keita And Kitty
    Rating: M
    Genre: Humor/General
    DLP Category: Naruto
    Pairing: Naruto/?
    Status: WIP
    Summary: All the females compete in a volleyball contest on the beach with everyone watching, the prize? why a bathing suit made of spakling jewelery & Sasuke of course. Watch them compete in two man teams, Rated M, Nudity, sexual, lemons, cursing,read more inside

    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5118268/1/

    No idea what to make of this. It is like some funny smut fic. Thought I would put it out for review.
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    Last edited: Aug 3, 2009
  2. EsperJones

    EsperJones Death Eater

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    As smut it's boring, as humor it's not that funny. Granted I only read three chapters, but it didn't really interest me in the least.

    2/5.
     
  3. Zarent

    Zarent Seventh Year

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    Bad. Very bad bad bad. 1/5.
     
  4. Snarf

    Snarf Squanchin' Party Bro! Prestige DLP Supporter

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    I swear to god, Zero, do you just sit around and fap all day to anime smut? Whenever I see a post by you, it's either praising all things harem or ... well, that's about it.
     
  5. Krogan

    Krogan Alien in a Hat Prestige DLP Supporter

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    Read the fic his sig links to, go ahead.
     
  6. Snarf

    Snarf Squanchin' Party Bro! Prestige DLP Supporter

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    MILF story for the win, actually. I massive lol'd.

    But still, it just proves my point. Zero, you're a fucking perv. :D Good work.