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  1. ChuckDaTruck
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    I agree about Harry having to answer to someone, IF that's the case. I don't know. Frankly, I've gotta re-read a lot of previous chapters. Anyway, I'm glad to see that you've updated! Ciao!!! :wink: :wink:
    Post by: ChuckDaTruck, Feb 24, 2006 in forum: Restricted Section
  2. ChuckDaTruck
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    ahhhhhh, thank you.
    Post by: ChuckDaTruck, Jan 10, 2006 in forum: Restricted Section
  3. ChuckDaTruck
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    I LOVE your AVATAR!!! On a side note, is your story abandoned?
    Post by: ChuckDaTruck, Jan 10, 2006 in forum: Restricted Section
  4. ChuckDaTruck
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    Donde esta el "New Year's Update?" :( :( :( :D :wink:
    Post by: ChuckDaTruck, Jan 3, 2006 in forum: Restricted Section
  5. ChuckDaTruck
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    Yeah. Snape was REAL good. Don't worry so much. Just update soon. God I hate cliff-hangers. Now I'm DYING to know what happened. :evil:
    Post by: ChuckDaTruck, Oct 9, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  6. ChuckDaTruck
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    I LOVE Snape's reaction. "Its a Potter, and there was nothing to fear." HA! I Hope Harry tortures the SHIT out of that fuckhead. Really. Slowly. :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:
    Post by: ChuckDaTruck, Oct 9, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  7. ChuckDaTruck
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    you're right. Last thing and I'm gone. Fayr Warning has anothyer GREAT story, so I'll post it. CHECK IT OUT!!! :D See you guys later
    Post by: ChuckDaTruck, Oct 8, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  8. ChuckDaTruck
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    I just saw the movie "Hook" again starring Robin WIlliams and DUstin Hoffman. I was thinking about the lost boys catch-phrase "BANG-ARANG!" I think Harry's deatheater's should have a catch-phrase. SOmething like, "SNARE-BARE!" Tell me what you think. THis may not be such a good idea, as I am at a party and more than a little fucked up.
    Post by: ChuckDaTruck, Oct 8, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  9. ChuckDaTruck
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    :runs screaming away from rapists: "KEEP MY ANUS CHASTE!!!" he cried out into the night! :wink:
    Post by: ChuckDaTruck, Oct 7, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  10. ChuckDaTruck
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    GET SNAPE!!! :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: (also update soon please!) :D
    Post by: ChuckDaTruck, Oct 7, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  11. ChuckDaTruck
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    FIrst one. Seems most plausible. KILL SNAPE!!! :twisted: :twisted:
    Post by: ChuckDaTruck, Oct 7, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  12. ChuckDaTruck
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    THAT'S MY CHOSEN APPLIANCE!!! Use it wisely. You have a reputation to uphold (This includes at LEAST bitch-slapping Draco with it.) :D :wink:
    Post by: ChuckDaTruck, Oct 6, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  13. ChuckDaTruck
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    Gio, go for it if you want. Man, I dig this story. Vash, I just re-read it, and it is SO fucking OUT THERE!! (Its SICK in the best possible way!) :D Anyway, I wanted to tell you to keep writing. Your writing has gotten MUCH less disturbing as its gone on. I can't tell if that's me getting used to it, or you being less graphic. Its NOT a bad thing, though. ANyway, I hope you update soon. :D :wink:
    Post by: ChuckDaTruck, Oct 2, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  14. ChuckDaTruck
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    Brilliant!! I would have liked to see him torture VErnon and PEtunia some more as they are ones who TRULY fucked up his childhood.
    Post by: ChuckDaTruck, Oct 1, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  15. ChuckDaTruck
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    Never Read it. I plan to though.
    Post by: ChuckDaTruck, Oct 1, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  16. ChuckDaTruck
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    Yeah, I've always wanted Draco to get it. One thing I've noticed in your story is that Harry isn't as powerful as Voldemort or Dumbledore were. Not that its a bad thing. I mean, they're both dead so it doesn't matter. Just something I've noticed. Whenever I think of Dumbledore's power I think of how he was able to EASILY corral 8 wizards in the DoM. Harry struggled against two trained wizards. And remember the ones that Dumbledore bitch-slapped were BEATING the aurors (see Moody...
    Post by: ChuckDaTruck, Sep 28, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  17. ChuckDaTruck
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    I was thinking he should let Draco out. Draco begins to have doubts (this is based on HBP) Harry questions his doubts publicly. Draco reacts hostilely upset anyone would question his loyalty to the cause. Harry reprimands him for talking to him that way. After being "reprimanded" Draco fires a curse at Harry who reflects back at Draco. Fun good and intense. Adds conflict because people are terrified of him, and fucks up Narcissa making their relationship more dynamic.
    Post by: ChuckDaTruck, Sep 28, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  18. ChuckDaTruck
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    You tease, you. :wink: But I agree with Lord Serapheth. Draco is too stupid. Kill the bastard. Lucius I see, but reluctantly. Unless he's totally nuts like Bella WAS. Then he could work. Crafty but crazy and only able to see the destruction of Mudbloods and his own survival.
    Post by: ChuckDaTruck, Sep 28, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  19. ChuckDaTruck
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    Kill them. Keep Lucius as He would be half-crazy and wouldn't know any better. Kill Draco. He's unable to get past his school grudge. Plus, he's too much of a pussy if you are going by book 6 (which I believe that you have been) Lucius should try to make some half-assed power-play Speaking of Azkaban crazy, I just realized Bella in your version is cmpletely sane without any of the baby voices and stuff.
    Post by: ChuckDaTruck, Sep 28, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  20. ChuckDaTruck
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    Either way, he's an accomplished OCclumens, for duping Dumbledore. I thought he was playing both sides though and jumped ship when he was FORCED to. He wanted to be on the winning team, whichever that happened to be.
    Post by: ChuckDaTruck, Sep 25, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  21. ChuckDaTruck
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    I thought it said that he was "a Superb Occlumens" nothing mentioned of his Legilimency ability though. Oh well, it doesn't matter. In your world he is, and that's what counts. :D
    Post by: ChuckDaTruck, Sep 24, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  22. ChuckDaTruck
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    That means that Snape COULD get into his head, that means he's GOTTA kill him. he's the only one left, and he's too powerful to be left alive, even in Azkaban. ALso, is Harry gonna get the Dementors, (I love them) ANd Voldemort said they were the natural allies of the dark. Last thing, I was under he impression that Snape wasn't good at Legilimency (Occllumency he may be one of the best in the world). When he did Legilimency on Harry in book 6 (and didn't hold back) Harry could...
    Post by: ChuckDaTruck, Sep 24, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  23. ChuckDaTruck
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    GREAT!! Two things I was thinking about though. ONe, in the first book it is said that Voldemort is such an accomplished Legilimens master that is "impossible to lie to him" we see evidence of this when he knows that the Philosopher's Stone is in Harry's pocket and when he says to Harry in Book 5 "he speaks the truth, Bella. I can see right into his weak mind." Regarding, Harry saying the prophecy was destroyed. My point is Harry has gotta improve his Occlumency/Legilimency...
    Post by: ChuckDaTruck, Sep 24, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  24. ChuckDaTruck
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    Remus is a fucking bastard. Dude, ignores Harry for first 13 years. Doesn't talk to him AT ALL during 4th year, and did very little during 5th year. And he ignores Harry AFTER Sirius dies so he can pine for Tonks. I was never a Remus fan, and I actually hated him MORE (obviously) after HBP. Vash kill the bastard Have Harry make the guy overdose on Wolf'sBane. Or pluck out all of his Hairs in wolf form. Something really fucking vicious. :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:
    Post by: ChuckDaTruck, Sep 24, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  25. ChuckDaTruck
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    Yeah, He should have PUBLICLY punished Bella. Make an example of the bitch. Also, Harry should make at LEAST one Horcrux. I mean, that's the the "most evil" thing a person can do. Dude should do that.
    Post by: ChuckDaTruck, Sep 23, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  26. ChuckDaTruck
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    Wow!! I dig this. I hope he kills the bookworm twat real soon. :twisted: Also, what will happen with the Weasels?
    Post by: ChuckDaTruck, Sep 23, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  27. ChuckDaTruck
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    Excellent! :that was meant to be read like Mr. Burns saying that: (I watch too much TV probably) :? :D :D :D :wink: :wink:
    Post by: ChuckDaTruck, Sep 21, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  28. ChuckDaTruck
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    WHOA!! What about Remus, harry oughta kill that hairy cocksucker. THe Dude ABANDONED him at the Dursleys. HE didn't even visit, or write a letter. ANd what about Snape, is he going to be freed? Killed? join Harry? I Love/Hate Severus Snape and I hope he joins your story soon. And what's up with his kid. Should he teach her? ANd why did the girl listen to Harry at all. HE should kill the kid to show he's the man and make Bellatrix and the others terrified of him. IF he...
    Post by: ChuckDaTruck, Sep 20, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  29. ChuckDaTruck
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    PANSY! PANSY! HOO, HOO!
    Post by: ChuckDaTruck, Sep 12, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  30. ChuckDaTruck
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    WHOA! I REALLY want to see Hermione die. PLEASE! If I were Harry she would be the first one I would kill. She knows Harry, she's VERY clever, plus she's nosy and a busy-body. NOT killing her is stupid of Harry in my opinion.
    Post by: ChuckDaTruck, Sep 11, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  31. ChuckDaTruck
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    SWEET!! :D :D :D Sorry about that. Its just Hermione would be the first or second one I would kill from this point. :wink: :D First person makes it more personal and shocking, so do that, but only when its important. No need to show every death. P.S. your supervisor is going to think you're going off the deep end. I think she's right. :P :D :wink: I have TWISTED kinky suggestions on how to kill people. (Strangled by her own Fallopian tubes! :twisted: :shock: )...
    Post by: ChuckDaTruck, Sep 7, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
  32. ChuckDaTruck
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    Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

    SICK!!! :shock: I LOVE IT!!! The sex stuff is a little disturbing (I know who am I to talk). I think its because you humanize the victims so it feels more real whereas mine is more cartoonish. Still fun. Harry should kill Hermione A.) re-enforce that its deatheaters as she's muggleborn. B.) Prevents the bitch from figuring it out, and C.) She's a target as it is because she is friends with Harry, so her death makes sense. I don't know how he would kill her, but I would. She...
    Post by: ChuckDaTruck, Sep 7, 2005 in forum: Restricted Section
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