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Old 01-24-2007, 12:20 AM   #1
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The Bird Tongue by Marina Gray - M

Title: The Bird Tongue
Author: Marina Gray
Rating: M
Genre: Drama/Tragedy
DLP Category: Dark Arts
Words: 2,726
Published: August 12, 2006
Status: Complete, Oneshot
Summary: Old Mrs. Cole has since retired from her post as matron of the orphanage where she worked in London...but one day, she receives a caller, someone looking to dredge up a buried past...[One Shot]

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3100511/1/

Tom Riddle centric and a surprisingly good read. Grammar and spelling is pretty good, if not excellent, and it makes an interesting insight into a younger Tom Riddle's mind.

Checked by Minion, Nov. 19, 2012
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Old 01-24-2007, 01:46 AM   #2
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That was very sweet....
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It was so long ago and far away
I have forgotten the very name men called me.
The axe and flint-tipped spear are like a dream,
And hunts and wars are like shadows. I recall
Only the stillness of that sombre land;
The clouds that piled forever on the hills,
The dimness of the everlasting woods.
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Old 01-24-2007, 04:43 AM   #3
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a nice way to spend time.
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Old 01-24-2007, 05:35 AM   #4
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I liked how it ended, gave an interesting insight into Tom's psyche. At heart he's still a child, trying to find out how the world works. On top of that he's still a demented murderer but he'll never truly be human...
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Old 01-24-2007, 06:51 AM   #5
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I thought was really good, it kept me engaged at any rate and that is becoming a hard thing to do these days.
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Old 01-24-2007, 02:33 PM   #6
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I loved this.

The characterization of Tom/Voldemort was pretty solid, and Purdita's sad devotion to him was great. Mrs Cole's confused old mind was not confusing at all; the writer did a good job of describing the shifts in time and place seemlessly. I want to read more stuff by this author. 5/5
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Old 01-24-2007, 02:45 PM   #7
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very nice,i loved it
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Old 01-24-2007, 05:17 PM   #8
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It was good. The author does do a fairly good job describing Tom psyche, not perfect but closer then most authors get. Overall the description and scenery were well done. 4/5
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Old 01-24-2007, 08:33 PM   #9
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That was pretty good, I would give it 4/5. A great one-shot, nice find.

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Old 11-06-2013, 07:35 AM   #10
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Good fic captures Voldemort well. Only Voldemort would kill someone who loves him, take out her heart and put a Horcrux in it. 4/5
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That was quite a necro, but, I think worth it.

I enjoyed the story, especially since it gave a glimpse of the Dark Lord before, when he was still a young man and not the one whose name would not pass the lips of most people. However, I don't think Lord Voldemort would ever have put part of his soul in anything as fragile, literally and figuratively, as a young girls broken heart.
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