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Old 05-11-2006, 07:14 AM   #1
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Bluer Than Indigo by Vash - NC17

Title: Bluer Than Indigo
Author: Vash The Unholt
Rating: NC-17
Words: 33,175
Chapters: 5 (PatronusCharm)
Status: Abandoned
Pairing: No True Pairing, but Harry will get alot of action
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Summary: When pressure mounts, something is sure to give. It has.

This is a replacement for lust since I felt bad for killing it. Fun first chapter i thought. Let me know what you think.

Not posted on DLP yet as vB wants to limit me to under 10K characters and I dun have the time to change it right now as I've got to head off for work.
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Old 05-11-2006, 06:11 PM   #2
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You outdid yourself this time, you sick, sick, f-er. You definitely have a flare for portraying the most morbid and disturbing of human tendencies in our young hero.

The little bit in the end where we managed to get in Marietta's head was very well done. Interesting...in a disturbing kind of way. Personally, I'm curious if whether you read any psychotherapy reports lately or checked in for one. ^.^

PS: Not sure, but maybe you should slap a warning of somesort in there.
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Old 05-11-2006, 08:48 PM   #3
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**BOW DOWN TO VASH LORD OF SMUT MAY HIS REIGN BE LONG**

but fur surious. sick shit. real sick shit. but why else do i come to this site.
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Old 05-12-2006, 12:44 AM   #4
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Vash- You really disturb me sometimes. I really wonder about whats going on in your head to write such twisted smut. Keep it up, its wildly entertaining.
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Old 05-12-2006, 12:46 AM   #5
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Seriously entertaining, got to love classic Cold!Harry.
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Old 05-12-2006, 01:15 AM   #6
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It's great! In a disgustingly sick sort of way. But sick and disgusting is the best so yeah! Awesome piece of ass!...umm... fanfiction... yeah that's what I meant.
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That was really good. I can't wait to see the next chapter.
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Old 05-13-2006, 12:27 PM   #8
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very good, would hate to get some hate male from you vash, might disturb me just a little to much. Looking forward to see what, or who, happens next. Keep up the work you un-forgiving genius.
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Old 05-13-2006, 11:55 PM   #9
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*Froths at Mouth*

In this world, I am addicted to two things:

nonjon's stories and Vash's sick fantasies.

*Goes off and does whatever Amerision does when he is frustrated*
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Old 05-14-2006, 06:09 PM   #10
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*Froths at Mouth*

In this world, I am addicted to two things:

nonjon's stories and Vash's sick fantasies.

*Goes off and does whatever Amerision does when he is frustrated*
Why Thank you Amerision. I am quite fond of your stories as well.

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very good, would hate to get some hate mail from you vash, might disturb me just a little to much. Looking forward to see what, or who, happens next. Keep up the work you un-forgiving genius.
Hate mail from me? Nah... I dun do that. Mailbombs and thermite are my thing. Not hate mail. I thank you for the compliment, however, and wise you a good day.

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You outdid yourself this time, you sick, sick, f-er. You definitely have a flare for portraying the most morbid and disturbing of human tendencies in our young hero.

The little bit in the end where we managed to get in Marietta's head was very well done. Interesting...in a disturbing kind of way. Personally, I'm curious if whether you read any psychotherapy reports lately or checked in for one. ^.^

PS: Not sure, but maybe you should slap a warning of somesort in there.
*Bows* What can I say to that? Its a gift, I suppose. Marietta's point of view probably was the best bit of that chapter, I think, and I loved writing it. If that is any indication of the quality of a chapter, the next one should be superb. I love almost the entire thing.

No, ive never had any psychotherapy, or read any of the reports, but I am curious about them. Maybe Ill go look up a few one day.

And Im sure I will slap up a warning at one point.

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Vash- You really disturb me sometimes. I really wonder about whats going on in your head to write such twisted smut. Keep it up, its wildly entertaining.
Not alot actually. Generally the normal stuff. I dun think about this stuff all day unless I intend to write a chapter that day, then I spend hours meticulously going over every small detail. Most never make it into chapters or it would be FAR to long. Seven chapters for one scene ish bad.
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Old 05-15-2006, 11:10 PM   #11
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Second chapter is here. I havent had so much fun writing in a long time.
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*jawdrop*

Holy fucking God, Vash. That was fucking incredible. I'm inspired.

That was fucking Slytherin to the core. I love Harry!

You are officially my favorite Author.

Ever. In all fiction and nonfiction.

I'm so inspired, I'm gonna go start Chp 4 for Temptations.

Thank you for reintroducing me to the world of Harry Potter.

I'll have the chapter out within a week.
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Old 05-15-2006, 11:43 PM   #13
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Oh man! I think this story would far surpass your other story in terms of sickness because it is so fucking more believable. I only read half way but omg, it's fantastic. You can literally see the corruption spreading and it's not overblown with pointless bashing.

More more more!!! The only con is that fuck! YOU are stealing all the things I wanted my Harry to do. Damn you :P.
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Fucking brillaint... That's all I can think to say.

Damn. *wide-eyed*
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this is fucking cool. awsome awsomeness. but i have a question. are the chicks staying with him because hes good at sex, because they are all masochists, or because they are afraid of him.
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*jawdrop*

Holy fucking God, Vash. That was fucking incredible. I'm inspired.

That was fucking Slytherin to the core. I love Harry!

You are officially my favorite Author.

Ever. In all fiction and nonfiction.

I'm so inspired, I'm gonna go start Chp 4 for Temptations.

Thank you for reintroducing me to the world of Harry Potter.

I'll have the chapter out within a week.
Why thank you. Though, I would REALLY like it if you would write another chapter of Across the mirror. Maybe a oneshot where Harry crosses into her world. Ill give ya a snip of the next chapter if ya do!

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Fucking brillaint... That's all I can think to say.

Damn. *wide-eyed*
*bows again* Thank you. Thank you. And now for my next trick, I shall render you speechless!

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"People don't respect weakness, and even if you aren't weak, that's how you come across."

Oh man! I think this story would far surpass your other story in terms of sickness because it is so fucking more believable. I only read half way but omg, it's fantastic. You can literally see the corruption spreading and it's not overblown with pointless bashing.

More more more!!! The only con is that fuck! YOU are stealing all the things I wanted my Harry to do. Damn you :P.
Indeeeed. *steeples fingers like Mr. Burns* Excellent. My plans are in full swing. Just dont remove that plant that is sitting next to your computer. It isnt really reading your mind and emailing me its findings.

But your compliments are very welcome and I thank you for spoiling my ego.

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this is fucking cool. awsome awsomeness. but i have a question. are the chicks staying with him because hes good at sex, because they are all masochists, or because they are afraid of him.
A little bit of B and a little bit of C, actually. Until Marietta, the closet Harry got to pussy and sex was Playwizard and soon a Wizarding Kama Sutra book.

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Its so bad. I couldnt stop GIGGLYING like a bitch the entire time i was writing this chapter. I enjoyed it so much. But Im sure im going to disappoint many people by telling you this. There will probably be very little smut in the next chapter. None at all actually.Probably just character development and plot building.
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Excellent story, but Ugh @ Little Huffelpuff fuckwit Smith getting a blowjob from Hot Slytherin Daphne. I found that extremely annoying.
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genius but can you have harrys harem kill that little slut weasly
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Why thank you. Though, I would REALLY like it if you would write another chapter of Across the mirror. Maybe a oneshot where Harry crosses into her world. Ill give ya a snip of the next chapter if ya do!



*bows again* Thank you. Thank you. And now for my next trick, I shall render you speechless!



Indeeeed. *steeples fingers like Mr. Burns* Excellent. My plans are in full swing. Just dont remove that plant that is sitting next to your computer. It isnt really reading your mind and emailing me its findings.

But your compliments are very welcome and I thank you for spoiling my ego.



A little bit of B and a little bit of C, actually. Until Marietta, the closet Harry got to pussy and sex was Playwizard and soon a Wizarding Kama Sutra book.

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Its so bad. I couldnt stop GIGGLYING like a bitch the entire time i was writing this chapter. I enjoyed it so much. But Im sure im going to disappoint many people by telling you this. There will probably be very little smut in the next chapter. None at all actually.Probably just character development and plot building.

NOOOOOOOOO. NO SMUT? how in gods name will we survive without our wekyl dose of vash smut? and btw, does that mean hes gonna find the kama sutra or that he has already found one.
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Its so bad. I couldnt stop GIGGLYING like a bitch the entire time i was writing this chapter. I enjoyed it so much. But Im sure im going to disappoint many people by telling you this. There will probably be very little smut in the next chapter. None at all actually.Probably just character development and plot building.
Cool. Your probably, imo, one of the better Cold!Sadist!Harry writers out there, would be a shame if you only wrote smut.

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Dont you think it's beautiful irony though? The haughty, snobby Slytherin down on her knees for a Hufflepuff of all people.

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