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Old 08-07-2013, 01:32 PM   #1
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A Boy and His Cloak by HoosYourDaddy - M

Title: A Boy and His Cloak
Author: HoosYourDaddy
Rating: M
Genre: Erotica
Status: Oneshot
Library Category: Restricted Section
Pairings: Harry/Hermione
Words: 10,621
Published: November 2, 2009

Summary: "Late one night at Grimmauld Place, Harry accidentally stumbles upon Hermione in a very compromising situation. What's a boy under an invisibility cloak to do? Smutty H/Hr Oneshot."
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5485394/..._and_His_Cloak

Link: http://ficwad.com/story/130574

Link: http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600024002

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Old 08-07-2013, 03:46 PM   #2
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This is fantastic H/HG erotica, I've re- read it several times and *enjoyed* it very much.

5/5
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Old 08-07-2013, 04:09 PM   #3
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'It's perfect'. Very believable first time teenage oral sex. \

We need moar of these.

5/5.
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Old 08-07-2013, 04:55 PM   #4
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Read it before quite a long time ago, but it still holds up as the best pure smut fic I've read. The fearful interplay between Harry/Hermione at the beginning makes the actual sexual acts that much more interesting to read. Certainly library-worthy Restricted Section material.
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Old 08-07-2013, 06:06 PM   #5
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I was sure this was in the library.

As good as smut gets I guess. 4/5.
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Old 08-07-2013, 08:52 PM   #6
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I was sure this was in the library.
edit: nevermind, that was a different HoosYourDaddy fic.

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Old 08-07-2013, 08:58 PM   #7
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Different fics, yak. Lol.
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Old 08-07-2013, 09:50 PM   #8
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Definitely a 5/5, specially since is so rare to find readables smut, good one is all but impossible.
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Old 08-14-2013, 06:14 PM   #9
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Excellent, no other word for it
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Old 08-30-2013, 09:25 PM   #10
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Harry didn't go muff-diving. I expected muff-diving. 4/5. That's right, a whole point lost because there was no muff-diving.
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Old 08-30-2013, 09:28 PM   #11
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Harry didn't go muff-diving. I expected muff-diving. 4/5. That's right, a whole point lost because there was no muff-diving.
Can't expect everything to happen the first time around, but yeah, would've liked that as well. Even if it was just a bit of exploring.
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Old 08-30-2013, 11:45 PM   #12
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Can't expect everything to happen the first time around, but yeah, would've liked that as well. Even if it was just a bit of exploring.
She blew him, it's a bit weird to not have him return the action.
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Well, I wouldn't consider it a proper blowjob, but yes, she did fellate him a little. And while I'm sure Harry wouldn't have minded giving her the Lord's Kiss she just didn't feel comfortable enough.
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This is among the best erotica I have ever read, and I must comment despite my late arrival to this thread. I think the author did a great job with pacing and building tension. Too many stories just dive into the 'action'. The characterization of Hermione and Harry felt authentic as well. I also like the fact that it happened over two days - it makes it more believable. I would definitely give 5/5.
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Easily one of the best Harry/Hermione works I've read. I'm not a fan of the pairing, but this fic is truly exceptional. The characterization felt real. The thoughts of the pair were explored before the smut began. That's what sets this one apart.

Obviously, the sex was great too.
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I usually don't like the pairing Harry/Hermione, but this writer wrote it so well.
It was a bit fast-paced, but I can't fault him for that. The story wouldn't be a one-shot, then. Great ending.

4.5/5
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