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WIP Harry Potter and the Lost Archive by Ynyr - M

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Hue City Ranger, Oct 8, 2010.

  1. Hue City Ranger

    Hue City Ranger First Year DLP Supporter

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    Title: Harry Potter and the Lost Archive
    Author: Ynyr
    Rating: M
    Genre: HP/Dresden Crossover
    DLP Category: Other Fandom/Alternates
    Pairing: Harry Potter/Ivy (Archive)
    Status: Work in Progress
    Summary: In the aftermath of the Battle of Hogwarts Harry meets a powerful magical practitioner named Ivy who asks the young hero for a small favor. She wants him to be the father of her children.
    Link: FFN

    This is a story I've been following since I stumbled across it while searching for HP/Dresden crossovers. It's a guilty pleasure for me but just might be library worthy. We'll see.

    I rate it 4/5
     
  2. DarkAizen

    DarkAizen Professor DLP Supporter

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    I don't think Ivy could kill Kincaid.

    I just cant get pass chapter 2. I know Ivy has the knowledge of all Archives before her, but I like that to think of her as just a girl who knows everything, not this super-wizard Mary-Sue who can bitch slap Titania's henchmen.

    Does it get better?
     
  3. MattSilver

    MattSilver The Traveller

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    Not really. Chapter four has Kreacher and Hermione get into a soul bond, and Ron eventually starts having sex with Lara Raith.

    I thought this had some decent potential myself, back when it was first mentioned in the Almost Recommended thread. Even wrote a nice review and hoped like all hell the story wouldn't crash and burn. It did. Competently written, but I just really disliked the direction taken by the author after a bit, mixing both universes with little of the charm of either. It's a shame, and I'll put my vote for this to go to the Recycling Bin at best. Should've stayed in the Almost Recommended thread.
     
  4. Tylendel

    Tylendel Sixth Year

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    The story had great potential. Ivy choosing Harry to father the next archive may have been an interesting idea, but it wasn’t well done.

    The fact that Butcher’s magical word is so much better than Rowling’s in term of balance of power irked me a little. Harry having no choice but to do what Ivy told him. Hermione marrying Kreacher, who’s a dark elf (like all others houses elves). I could continue like that for a long time.

    1/5
     
  5. Aekiel

    Aekiel Angle of Mispeling Prestige DLP Supporter

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    This can only improve if Lara eats Ron, Hermione gets ripped apart by Kreacher's groinsaw and Ivy/Harry decide to say fuck it to the world and attempt every sexual position written down in the history of mankind.
     
  6. Knoq

    Knoq Temporarily Banhammered

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    Oh my god. I gotta read this. It's too stupid. It draws me like a moth to a flame. I must consume the retardedness.