I stumbled across this sometime in the spring, good lil story, I like the start to it alot.

 

the hinting at the harry/hermy at the beginning was irksome to me but the entire story over all was pretty good i thought... i had started reading back when there as like ... three chappies to it...

very good i think... i recommend it

 

it does go a bit over the top towards the end, and the constant need to end names with -aka is annoying, but after the reread I just did, it's still an alright fic

 

I love this fic to death. Any author willing to openly and unapologetically slap Christianity in the face the way this guy did is awesome in my book. And yeah, his Harry is like my Dakaath one sort of. Incredible power and extremely willing to slaughter anything in his path with said power.

 

lol why? :? That makes no sense lol.

 

I'd rather not get started on my feelings regarding organized religion. Suffice to say that I have nothing positive to say about it.

 

Yeah but why rate a story because of that? lol.

 

While at least free of cliches and an interesting read, it didn't provide any sort of catharsis at the ending and was riddled with lots of little spelling errors. 6/10, especially because it was short.

 

it was an interesting concept....but when the other god dude was like..MUAHAHAHAHAHA I'M NOW YOUR NEMESIS... i was like...just let the kid kill everyone and leave him in peace...i REALLY didn't enjoy this fic (although it was well written)

 

Because it added to my enjoyment of the story. A similar device in another story would likewise add to my enjoyment of that story.

 

Yeah, I agree that it didn't really make any sense why Iceraka was going to kill Dearaka BEFORE he finished killing everyone off. I mean what Dearaka was doing was going right along the rules Iceraka was following.

Another peeve I had was adding raka to all the names couldn't the author at least make a different suffix for the Demons of Creation or vice versa?

Other then that I enjoyed it.

 

HA! I GOT IT RIGHT! I knew the guy's name was Icesomething but i didnt want to go back to the fic to check because it pissed me off BUT I WAS STILL RIGHT! *dances*

 

I've seen at least one other, where he was obliviated of his memories and he honestly thought he was a muggle rapist. I think it got pulled from FF.net thou, wasn't any good anyway tbh, lol

 

Heh Heh

 

yeah... i saw that one... interesting conceptually... but like 90% of FF.net... it was executed poorly... get a decent auhtor behind it and it ould have been great... but... it wasnt...