I am a big fan of Harry/Lily so was always going to like this, brilliant as always vash, dont know how you do it but looking forward to anything you deem worthy to write in the future.

 

Yeah, I definitely wouldn't seek out Harry/Lily fics ... but this is great.

Very well done

 

This is certainly the best Harry/Lily I've read. Great work.

 

probably the best harry/lily fic out there......a must read for all smut fans

 

My first time reading any Harry/Lily pairings, and already I know that it is ruined for me. I will likely never find one that can even compare with this, I look forward to the announced sequel.

 

The M on the letter he sent to Sirius would of stood for Mordrid (sp?) i would think. Since he said that was his (darklord) name


Anyway, i thought the story was excellent. Definatly a 10/10 and i look forward to the sequel.

 

It's not Mordrid. It's Mordred. Look it up in mythology you will get the meaning.

 

cool as hell

 

Very, very cool

 

I loved this story. Thanls for the entertainment Vash. 5/5

 

Claps

Great story though it's a shame that Harry was stupid and forgot to wipe remove evidence of the last spells he did.

 

Bravo!

A very, very well written story. Generally, Lily/Harry isn't my cup of tea...but the way this story was written overpowered the genre.

Honestly, Harry could of been a little bit less arrogant.

Other than that, good work.

 

It's really a chef d'oeuvre

 

Masterpiece.

Vash, you know you scarred me for life with that fiction, so I won't comment on it. I may want to chop off my fingers afterwards if I did.

 

I really loved this one but don't you think Black would have interfered if he was in same house???????? otherwise this one was greatest smut ever written

 

Heheheh. I do. And it only gives it that much more of a special feeling in my .. er.. stomach.. that you posted here ^_^

 

cant find an edit button, but oh well...




Spiffehness. I won two awards for this! ^_^

Now if only someone would do some fan art for it like Lut did for Lust.

 

I loved this piece of fanfiction and it drastically changed me.
Before this I had never read incest and while reading, Oedipus originally created some sick pleasure in reading it.

Well the plot was incredible and I really liked the way your Harry is all....Slytherinish?, but apart from that the way he seduces his own mother and sister is something that just fazes me every time I re-read it.

There were a few grammar mistakes which I'm sure occured due to the first person pov

Something that I need cleared up.
Harry says that he has never cheated on his partner,
so why is it that we see Megan as a girlfriend yet he still sleeps with his mother and sister?
Or is it that she was just a fuck-buddy per se and they have no other ties to each other?

I realize that Megan is never actually said to be his girlfriend, but from the dialogue I thought she was....


"What's this?" My mother asks in a amused and curious voice. "My son has his first girlfriend?"

Megan blushes while I give mother a bored look. "No, Mrs. Potter. I'm not Harry's first..."

She only says she's not Harry's first girlfriend, yet never denies being his current one.


P.S. I apologize if I angered anyone by nominating this story for a one-shot award.
I assumed that two-part one-shots, or two-shots, were a real thing.
I guess I should have read all the rules for nomination.
(Yes I'm using the word assumed knowing, fully well, all that it implies)

Edit: Silly me, I forgot to give a rating.
Ok then I would give this story a 4.5/5 because alas, nothing is perfect. (meaning you have grammar mistakes)

 

This story made me want to vomit by the end. To get that big a responce from me it has to be a very good story!