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Naruto Fanfiction List

Discussion in 'Fanfic Discussion' started by Tinder, Feb 11, 2006.

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  1. Aensland

    Aensland Third Year

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    Yeah, and as much as I love zabuza and haku, I get tired of reading it over and over again, so I'm trying to think up another suitable mission to subsitute instead. [Edit: Which I think I may have just found, I'm off to write this down.]

    Oh, and here's a fic I found a while back:

    Title: Shrouded Orange
    Author: Vesvius B
    Rating: M
    Summary: Naruto and Sasuke died in the Valley of the End. Almost as soon as death takes them, they're attacked by a giant monster with a hole in it. And who the hell's that kid with the white hair? NarutoBleach Xover

    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3343424/1/


    It has some issues with the timing of when certain people were in the Shinigami academy, but other than that it was a fairly entertaining way to kill some time.
     
    Last edited: Feb 13, 2007
  2. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    What's with all the Bleach crossovers lately? Urgh. I've yet to read one I like.
     
  3. Aensland

    Aensland Third Year

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    Heh, sorry, but here's another one. Though, there is only one bleach element in this one. No other characters will be showing up in it.

    Title: Crimson Edge
    Author: Fosfor
    Rating: M
    Summary: Uzumaki Naruto always knew he was special. He always knew he was important. He thought it was because of the Kyuubi. Turns out he got two out of the three right. [Bleach crossover]

    Link: http://www.ficwad.com/viewstory.php?sid=47381

    This guy has one of the best characterizations of Temari that I have ever read. From what I understand he's also dyslexic, so a few spelling errors might have gotten through the editing process. Edit: Though it looks like he has someone else helping with the editing now, so that may not be an issue.
     
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  4. Stalicon

    Stalicon High Inquisitor

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    The Bleach xovers haven't been very good quality so far, and I'm starting to wander if there is going to be a good one.

    Interesting ideas, bad execution. In either flat writing style or just lack of characterization.

    EDIT: I'll add on if this one seems any better, if not my statement stands.
     
  5. Ranatama

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    I really like Tempered In Water, can't wait for the next update!
    I've also never read Bleach Xovers that I liked, but there are a few that I can stand. I have to read something, or I'll go crazy.
    I'll go read Fata Morgana right now, the concept of Genjutsu!Naruto is very interesting...(Wasn't it mentioned in the Naruto Challenge thread?)
     
  6. Stalicon

    Stalicon High Inquisitor

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    I take it back about the bleach cross overs, this one rocks. You my friend, will be getting rep for a job well done.

    Seriously, this is just my kind of writings style, good vocabulary, awsome flow.
     
  7. Ranatama

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    What happened to adding onto your previous post? ;)

    As for Fata Morgana, I like it, but Naruto seems a little too accepting of the need to be killed if he goes "kyuubiistic". Other than that, it appears that I now have another story to watch for updates. Still have Shrouded Orange and Crimson Edge (what's with all the colors?) to read, will probably do that later.
     
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  8. Aensland

    Aensland Third Year

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    Yeah, someone else had mentioned that to me too, so I'm going to have to add some internal dialogue somewhere showing his thoughts on the matter.
     
  9. Dango-Fetish

    Dango-Fetish Fourth Year

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    I've just finished reading the encounter with Benihime and I already love it. Benihime is my favorite zanpaktou (sp?), and this fic' depicts her personification exactly how I imagined. Very vivid language too.Top stuff. :D

    I'm somewhat saddened that someone beat me to this idea, but i doubt I would have done it as much justice as this. Again - great stroy.
     
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  10. Ranatama

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    It's sad, but I can't remember all the different Captains and vice-captains, and their zanpakutos. It's been like a year since I last watched an episode of Bleach (and Naruto for that matter), but I am enjoying Crimson Edge. Naruto is a little too overpowered, I think. I can understand being able to use the high powered attack on instinct, but being able to beat TenTen?

    BTW, what are Benihime's abilities? The name struck me as familiar but the only ones I know the abilities of are Senbonzakura and Zabimaru.
     
  11. Jon

    Jon The Demon Mayor Admin DLP Supporter

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    Benihime is uruku's or whatever the guy's name is. The Shop owner. It has the ability to create a shield, and to 'sing' Which is an energy blast.
     
  12. Dango-Fetish

    Dango-Fetish Fourth Year

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    In the canon, Benihime belongs to Urahara ("sandal 'n' hat") Kisuke. From what we have seen, Benihime has a "Bloodmist shield" - which is basically a large hexagonal red blob of reiatsu used as a shield, as well as being able to release a large blast of spirit energy, similar to that of a "Cero" or zangetsu's "Getsuga tenshou".

    Hope that was enlightening for you. If you need BLEACH info, I recommend http://www.bleachexile.com/

    Edit: Surarrin beat me to it... but you get the idea.
     
  13. Ranatama

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    Thanks for the info, I'm thinking something is wrong with my internet connection. Google only just now started to work for me o_o
     
  14. japanese_jew

    japanese_jew High Inquisitor

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    It's interesting, since Naruto and Bleach are pretty similar, except that Naruto focuses on the Ninjutsu (Kido/Demon Arts in Bleach), while Bleach focuses on special attacks and quickness. Two sides of the same coin, with more actual training in Naruto. HunterxHunter and Naruto are pretty similar too, although it seems like Gon starts out a little too ridiculously powerful. I wouldn't mind seeing a HunterxHunter x Naruto crossover, potentially very interesting.
     
  15. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Indeed. It seems that someone has finally written a decent Female Haku story. And it looks like they'll probably end up together later in the story, when they are older. At least the author has brains and doesn't try to pair them off now.

    As for this other Bleach crossover, I think I'll give it a try based off Stal's comments. I do hope I'm not disappointed.
     
  16. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Well, I have to admit, that's the best Naruto/Bleach crossover I've read. Well written, good fights, and very interesting.

    The talking sword gets on my nerves a bit, though. It's just like Kyuubi in most stories, where it talks nonstop. But whatever.

    Tenten got a decent amount of screen time. The bitch almost orgasmed when he revealed his sword. That freak has it goin' on. Probably one of the only stories around where I liked her character. I was expecting Temari, however, since that is what Aensland said.
    Did you mean Tenten? Because all Temari really did was beat the living crap out of Sakura, which I have to say, was awesome to read. Broke both her arms. I loved it. She did everything but piss on the girl.

    Anyway, I'll be keeping an eye on this.
     
  17. Jon

    Jon The Demon Mayor Admin DLP Supporter

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    Tut, tut, Double Post Syao.

    Benihime needs to talk and interact alot or else it wouldn't be Benihime ;) I know she seems like Kyuubi but give her a chance, she is basically an integral part of Naruto, more so then Kyuubi is, by far. Consider her an extension of his soul, if you would.
     
  18. Aensland

    Aensland Third Year

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    I actually did mean Temari. There are very few fics (that I've read at least) that I feel do Temari justice, and it was the way she destroyed Sakura, both verbally and physically (both with, and without her fan) struck a cord with me. Especially those ending lines. "Well, I guess I'm through... there's nothing left to break." That fits perfectly my image of Temari.

    Though I do agree, that Tenten is a very well developed character in this one, too.
     
  19. Stalicon

    Stalicon High Inquisitor

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    I didn't like Temari, does she talk like that in the manga?... I havent' gotten to far in it and seriously the speach pattern gets on my nerves.

    It reminds me too much of an anime that had all american voices with a strong Texas accent...

    >_<

    Later y'all
     
  20. Jon

    Jon The Demon Mayor Admin DLP Supporter

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    Not sure if i've recommended it yet, but Demon in the Closet <~ The latest of my Naruto stuff.

    Also, if any of you want to talk about my Naruto stuff, or help me, or ask for help or anything. A Demons Desire is not the one stop shop for it. Also for Bleach and other anime stuff., oh, and before I forget, the theme isn't done, but what do you think so far? I made it myself. :D
     
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