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The Story of Nicolae Edward Volanté by Taure - T

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Skeletaure, Mar 17, 2006.

  1. Skeletaure

    Skeletaure Magical Core Enthusiast ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Title: The Story of Nicolae Edward Volanté
    Author: Taure (Me)
    Rating: T
    Painings: None as of yet, maybe a few flings along the way
    Summary: AU. What if the Half Blood Prince wasn't Severus Snape, but a man called Nicolae Edward Volanté, born in 1927 to purebloods Elladora Black and Edward Volanté, and classmate of Tom Riddle?
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2830608/1/

    I thought that now I've got a few thousand words built up I'd post my new (and only) fic up here so that you guys can rip it to shreds in a mere matter of minutes. It's not Harry centric (thus posted in General fics) but I'm quite enthusiastic about it, and have done quite abit of research on Hp Lexicon for it.
     
  2. Mordecai

    Mordecai Drunken Scotsman –§ Prestigious §– DLP Supporter

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    it is interesting certainly, and a very original idea for a fic. I look forward to seeing more.

    I would however warn you that many folk will not want to read it due to the short length of the chapters.
     
  3. sirius009

    sirius009 Minister of Magic

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    I like it but the chapters definetly need to be longer, thats really my only compliant..
     
  4. Skeletaure

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    Updated, with a longer chapter, as per requested...
     
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    very nice indeed, it is within my range of prefered chapter sizes now.
     
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    sirius009 Minister of Magic

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    Thank god the chapters are bigger. Quick question, is this story going to follow Volante throughout hogwarts?
     
  7. Skeletaure

    Skeletaure Magical Core Enthusiast ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Its going to follow him through hogwarts and beyond, all the way up to the trial, then shall continue.
     
  8. Skeletaure

    Skeletaure Magical Core Enthusiast ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Updated at last! Hopefully the next chapter will flow better - I really had to struggle with this one, as it was really just going through the motions. Next chapter should have his first lessons in a few of the subjects, and then skim over the rest of the year showing the interaction between Nicolae's new group of friends.
     
  9. Skeletaure

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    Updated again for anyone who wants to read. This chapter covers the whole of the first year at hogwarts.
     
  10. Mordecai

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    i like this new chapter, too many fics try to make too much happen in first year, but you managed to cover it all, giving a basic insight into his character aroud his own age group, introduce a new major character and you did it al in a fairly decnt length chapter.

    well done.
     
  11. Skeletaure

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    Removed by Author. Copy contained in the DLP.net Archives has seven chapters.

    --bornagainpenguin
     
  13. Nytmare

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    Arrrg, Necro!

    Poopy for Taure!
     
  14. DemonDream

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    Nytmare, shut up. In case you have not been paying attention, BAP is DLP's archiver. This means he gets the stories and saves them to a rar file for our benefit. He is entitled to post things like this to tell us that it is in the archives now, or that he cannot find it.
     
  15. Nytmare

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    I know this, read my sig.
    I am over it!
     
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    Lord Ravenclaw DLP Overlord Admin DLP Supporter

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    And I find yet another instance of you overstepping your bounds. Read your PM carefully, as it is the first and last warning you get.
     
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