Hmm. I've never seen a fic where HArry is PURPOSELY drained of his powers. It's a little confusing with all the Demons and Immortal Being, but I can cope. Good fic.

 

Everything is gone from his author page.

Chapters 01-13 are in the archives though, so at least it can still be found for now.

--bornagainpenguin

 

wow, Look ma a Necro!
How do you find all the dead ones that need fixing? and then still look for aditional links?

 

Where'd it go???

This sounded really good, but when I clicked on the link, it wasn't there. I searched for the title, it wasn't there. I searched for the author twice, and it wasn't there. Gimme a link please!

 

Can't be bothered to read the post two above yours?

 

Obligatory mention that the fic isn't on FFn and that it is in the DLP archives.

The best part is Harry himself. He's vicious and his dialogue is cutting and genuinely hurtful. The writer isn't another fourteen year-old dumbfuck trying to be hardcore through fanfiction (two mutually exclusive concepts). This guy means business.

The writing however is way too sparse - Harry is actually taken to Hell and only a single sentence of description is given.

The demons' naming convention (-aka as a suffix) and history are uncreative as hell (if you'll forgive the pun).

Some elements are a little too ridiculous and out of line. Case: Hermione suddenly regretting being impregnated by Ron. I don't like the ginger but at one point the baby in her womb kicks out and it's describe as blunt, cold, and careless.

The massive plothole is that people can be turned into squibs, yet this was never administered to captured Death Eaters.

I feel a certain measure of sympathy for this story, but it still wavers between bad and average, and is certainly not worthy of the library.

2.5/5.

 

Much lulz. I'm not sure if this makes me want to read it or run away.

 

I tried to get to the link but found nothing. Darn.

Help?


.... okay, thanks to Google (bless you) I searched a bit and found a link. Enjoy.

http://ficdom.net/viewstory.php?sid=107&chapter=1