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Any good Dragon Ball (SI) fanfics?

Discussion in 'Story Search' started by Mordr4d, Apr 8, 2019.

  1. Mordr4d

    Mordr4d Second Year

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    I've read the most popular ones like Bringer of Death, Break through the limits and The Long Road.

    Anyone got any not so popular ones?
     
  2. DarthBill

    DarthBill The Chosen One

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  3. TheWiseTomato

    TheWiseTomato Prestigious Tomato ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    I'm seeing warning signs.
     
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  5. Jon

    Jon The Demon Mayor Admin DLP Supporter

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    Goku reads like he has aspergers.
     
  6. Dresden11

    Dresden11 Fifth Year

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    I'm not sure if I have ever read a good fic that proclaimed itself as 'rational'. Something about that label sucks out all the fun of the original material.
     
  7. Agayek

    Agayek Dimensional Trunk DLP Supporter

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    I read this a while back when it first started, and it's a pretty good story, but something about the authors style/prose drove me up the wall. It's been long enough i don't remember details, but if memory serves the writing was just bad mechanically and the small annoyances built up until I couldn't keep reading it.

    Par for the course with DBZ this though.
     
  8. Psychotic Cat

    Psychotic Cat Chief Warlock

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    It's because rationalwank fics aren't about fun. They're about making sure everyone knows how super smart the author avatar is for being a metagaming munckin instead of an interesting character.
     
  9. DarthBill

    DarthBill The Chosen One

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    I don't really read it for Goku. My favorite part of this story is what was done with Puar.

    He's a psychopath who ends up trying to kill Bulma and her parents for "stealing" Yamcha from him. It gets really horror-movie-ish with them running through their giant house trying to hide from and outsmart a shape-shifting monster.
     
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