Ah.. no link?

 

sorry, fixed it.

 

This is a little off-topic, but I believe there's a Naruto-centric site similar to DLP which I believe many of you are a part of. I was there a little while back but completely forgot the name or URL of the webpage. Can anyone provide a link?

 

If the site you are talking named 'A Demons Desire', click the link under my sig.

 

That's the one! Thank you very much.

 

The fic "A Demons Desire" is pretty good. I like it.

 

Can I get a link to that fic? I could never find it.

 

First off, I guess I should say that 'Mirage' has come a long way from 'throwing ice needles'. Actually, now that I think if it, it's been a long time since I've even thought about those. For those of you who hated it, I can't change your mind, but I will say that things have changed in my story (yes I am the same person who writes Naruto of the Mirage) and so I disagree with that view of my story, even though it was probably true around the time.

Secondly, I think that Naruto NEEDS some kind of bloodline, considering that Sasuke can shut down the Kyuubi at will now. The belief that the Kyuubi is as good as a bloodlimit is kinda lacking. So what if he has unlimited chakra, it doesn't do him any good, and besides, he can and does get tired, that's been shown many times. Secondly, the Kyuubi has been slacking in the healing department based on the latest manga chapters (350 still has his arm in bindings from the Fuuton: rasengan shuriken). I think that he'll need more than just a lot of chakra and a sometimes healing factor to beat Akatsuki, and that something would be a bloodline.

Just my personal opinion, but like most people, I think I'm right.

 

The best thing you can do in a Naruto story is ignore the majority of Post Time Skip content and plot, because for the most part its complete shit. Unlimited chakra and healing is plenty for Naruto all you have to do is have him use it properly.

 

I personally like the idea of Naruto having the Iron Sand ability or, Shikotsumyaku, or have Naruto learn Tsunade's strength and be a taijutsu tank.

 

...BRILLIANT! XP

Alright, rec time:

Title: What's The Worst That Could Happen?
Author: Legendary Legacy
Rating: T
Chapters: 1
Category: Parody/Humor
Status: Complete
Summary: Kyubi's been acting strange, and it's making Naruto nervous. When the demon makes a strange request, Naruto's against it...that is, until he no longer has a choice. But hey, what's the worst that could happen? Mockfic. I'm still awesome at summaries.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3474784/1/

Commentary: It's a slightly goofy fic that rips into Super!Naruto and Fem!Kyuubi, mainly. Good for a chuckle.

*WARNING! SELF-PLUG ALERT!*
Title: Kunoichi Returned
Author: Revanant Dragoon
Rating: M
Chapters: 1
Category: Mystery/Humor
Status: Incomplete
Summary: The Final Battle. Sasuke summons the Edo Tensei. Naruto counters. Kyuubi, Murphy’s Law Incarnate, decides to intervene. “Hey, teme, your mom is HOT.” [NarutoMikoto]
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3485240/1/

Commentary: Something I got shanghied into writing. Could use some honest feedback.

 

I wasn't going to post this until I finished more chapters on it, but since everyone is self-plugging recently I thought I would.

Title: Demonic Days
Author: Wild Thing8
Rating: M
Pairings: Possible Naruto/Yugito
Link:A Demon's Desire, FanFiction.Net
Summary: Kumo kidnapped Naruto during the treaty signing. Two jinchuriki are at their disposal. Will Kumo become the next great power among the Shinobi nations, or will their weapons fail them? After all...who can trust a demon?

 

Title: Guardian
Author: Thelow
Rating: Listed as 'M' but has yet to go beyond 'T'
Pairing: Naruto/Hinata
Category: Drama/Humor
Summary: Naruto returns from his fight against Orochimaru in a great depression at the loss of a friend and bad news from the demon. Hinata tries to help him through his pain. NaruHina
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3227392/1/

I questioned this one at first, especially with the mediocre summery, but the person who gave me the link has rarely led me astray. It would seem that this was no exception. Fairly predictable plot in places, but very well written.4-ish/5

 

Huh theres a part in the story where its a little funky

uh what?

Edit: Not my kind of story so Ill reserve my judgement. On the technical aspect, its well rounded. Though the above quote is, apparantly, the only time it occured.

 

{shrugs}

My best guess when i got to that part was that it was supposed to be snippets of conversation.

 

Yeah I can kinda see that. Its like the author cut out a part and forgot to alter it to make the story flow better.


Also it doesnt explain this:

Textremely. The superlative form of extremely. At least I think that's how you use that word(superlative).