Title: The Legacy of Ancients
Author: EvilKender (aka KenderCleric)
Rating: M (mostly to cover future violence if any)
Genre: Crossover
DLP Category: Alternates
Pairing: N/A, but only mild and Het if any in the future
Published: January 2, 2008
Chapters: 2
Words: 31,895
Status: Abandoned
Summary: [HPxSG1SGA]Harry Potter has a lot to live up to, but more than anyone ever realized. When Harry begins his fourth year at Hogwarts his life begins to change and a Legacy is reborn.

New link: http://www.patronuscharm.net/s/45/1/

From my A/N in the prologue:

Checked by Minion, Nov. 28, 2012

 

I was slightly saddened to hear that 'Ascension' was handed off, but I wish you luck on your latest venture. It's an excellent start.

4/5

Edit: Wergan has shown me that I must speak more literally, therefore this post has been edited to reflect what I meant in layman's terms

 

No Ascensions has been written by a different author for at least I think last 4 chapters at least. I quite like this story hope to see more.

 

I give you a credit for two things:
The idea of an ancient device enchencing human womb (or rather the baby inside) as the reason for Harry's lantian knowledge
The way how Harry is going to join the Stargate Program, by being recruited... that's a good one.

From what I've seen it has a lot of potential... don't waste it and don't abandon it. Good work.

 

The one problem I have with this is the fact that Harry and Sirius got into America far too easily -- I gather they don't quite have the same ties as in the muggle world?

I'm not going to rate this as of yet, but I shall, hopefully, after a few more chapters. If it keeps on the current track it's on the way to a 4.5 though.

Good work!

 

I think this a very well written piece. I just hope that the author doesn't take forever to get up dates out for it.

I'd give it 4/5 for now and hope that the rest of the story continues to be good.

 

The story is well written, but it is in dire need of some characterization and a bit of descriptive detail. I'm not an SG1 fan so I have little to no idea what's going on. If you could add a bit of information that will help me to understand the story better, I would appreciate it.

Besides those issues, mostly stemming from my own lack of SG knowledge, it is well written with very little grammar and punctuation mistakes. Keep up the good work.

4.5/5

Kolskit

 

I have to agree. I couldn't really get into it, because you kept bringing in people and things which I had no idea about, and I got really confused. I'll try to pick it up later, when I'm not so tired, and maybe will be able to understand better.

 

As a Stargate and Harry Potter fan i really enjoyed this start, well written and flowed well enough to capture my attention. One thing that puzzled me though, was the thing Lily fell into a repository of knowledge? thus because harry is so young, and magical, he can handle it where others cannot?

 

4.5/5 Rounds up to a five.

Great job Kender. I particularly enjoyed the arguing with Mckay in your most recent chapter. The ideas in this are interesting. His recruitment was a unique way of having him join the Stargate Program, nicely done. His having a backing in Engineering is also unique and I find it a nice twist, as well as his compulsion to design the 'Cityscape/Mindscape.' If it at all possible, can you add more and more tidbits of information about the city? Nothing long winded but short hints?

The only things that bugged me was the sped up way you had Jack trust Harry, Ancient possession or no. And for some reason I don't like Dr. Weir calling Harry, Harry, but I don't quite know why. I also noticed a few errors and in spelling however they were very minor.

All in all a great job.

 

Indeed it's been a while since i've last reviewed anything, and well i've come to like this quite alot. You have chapters at an excellent lengh with quality writing. Even more excelent is the fact you dont wait an age to get your chaps out while haveing only minor errors but still not skimping on any important details.

I've never really been a fan of stargate and because of that i dont really follow the episodes, though i've managed to grasp onto the concepts your putting forth and for that i give you 4/5.

Keep up the good work, im hanging out for the next update.

 

EDIT: Woops, made a reply in the wrong thread! Please remove this post

 

This is honestly one of the better crossovers around. I really liked how you dealt with Voldemort here, and your plot is brilliant! Harry's characterization is also pretty good, and your rewrite sounds quite promising so far. I can't wait for more, and I'm very happy that I found this!