Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1091195/

Suggested DLP category: Restricted Section (NC-17 material)

Okay, this is something I came across today. It's a link to a FFNet profile, where this Author has some five different stories that are smut-tastic. There's a Harry/Bella, Harry/Tonks, Harry/Hermione/McGonagall and Harry/Fleur.

Not spectacular, but more than decent for sure. Only problem is that once the admins get wind of this, and frankly I'm shocked that they haven't already, this will definitely be deleted. It's quite graphic, which is surprising for an FFNet story that hasn't been pulled already.

I'll give the stories together a 4/5.

 

Yeah. This author is supposedly a female. I don't know about that...

But anywho.

I've read all of these a long time ago. They weren't too bad.

4 / 5

 

Didn't like the Fleur one. Fucking Squig-more? Eww. These are alright though, and even if they're deleted on FFnet, they're still up on adultfanfiction.net. 3/5

 

yeah the harry bella is the only good one. The rest are shit. so i give the Harry/ Bell story a 4/5.

 

Enh, they got me up, 4/5

 

. Too much information, man. Eh, they are okay, but the writing is shit, and it takes forever for them to fuck. Even then, I have to skim it to see if there is anything worth reading.

2/5.

 

Darius... thats jut wrong. Keep that info to your self in the future.

 

:Twitch:

She/He Will post smut on FF of all places, but they won't write curse words? Wtf?

I couldn't read them, mabey I'm just letting negative opinion get the better of me.. I think I'll try it again later.

Edit: Surprisingly I like the Harry/Mcgonagall one, forgive me if my spelling is off.. I don't normally have need to spell her name <_<

Edit2: I know this may come off as a mite sexist, which I hate. But I do have a problem with all her stories being women dominated... its not that bad and doesn't usualy bother me, but when in every one its The. Exact. Same. God. Flippin. Sentence/Discription. it gets a hell of a lot more annoying. :/

Spoiler

look. She would smile at her own cruelty, loving the fact that she had the upper hand on the situation, that　she, and only she, could satisfy him

.....It may just be my personal taste but I think this woman has some real control issues :/

 

It is pretty amazing admin haven't found any of that yet, or someone like a kid or somin hasn't stumbled on them....neways, some scary thoughts go through lookin at that, still...alright i guess, 3.5/5

 

lol. I'll give it a 5.5 just for managing to keep from being erased.

Darius- TMI

 

I thought the Tonks one was pretty good. The place where the author choses to split chapters could have been done a lot better, but w/e.

The Fleur one was okay, the Tonks one was good, as was the Bella one. The McGonagall...he/she tried, but it didn't come off as being serious in any sense of the word.

 

Not to bad. 4/5

But please Yarrgh!, follow the right posting format.

http://forums.darklordpotter.net/showthread.php?t=101

 

Yeah, apologies for that. I didn't put in a genre and whatnot because it was a collection of 5 stories, so I just recc'ed them all.

 

I thought that these fics were pretty good in comparison to most of the crap i have read recently. 4/5

 

OK......

eventhough the splitting of chapters is bit off..... the story surprisingly is good. i especially liked Harry/Bella and Harry/McGonagall/Hermione ones...... overall a nice piece of smut i'd say......

 

LOL

Now, I thought these were a bit boring, but that's not that big of a deal. The smut took too long to get to and by the time you got there you were limp again and their was just no point in continuing *sigh*. I give it a 2.5/5 and a still clean paper towel.

 

...You don't... actually jerk off to fanfiction do you?