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Complete What Would Slytherin Harry Do? by bigdonadiet - R

Discussion in 'The Alternates' started by thisperson, May 29, 2007.

  1. Jeram

    Jeram Elder of Zion ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Saw it first on PP3 - Loved it - Wanted more - Glad to hear that more is coming.

    Whew, all that succinct text took a lot out of me... I'll try to write a better review after I got some rest.

    4.5/5

    -J
     
  2. Jamven

    Jamven Headmaster DLP Supporter

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    There is nothing wrong with Pimp!Harry as long as it is done right. Well actually, crack = bad for you...
     
  3. Snarf

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    I agree, but how often is it done right? Usually Harry becomes a master ninja vampire and goes around slapping his bitches and pimping his ho's. It's alright, just get's old when he has seven chicks in his bed at the same time who all 'love' their pimp and would do anything for him. Including, of course, giving him the thirty STD's they all possess. Rant over.
     
  4. DreamRed

    DreamRed Seventh Year

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    This was really very decent - a lot better than I was expecting, and it had a few twists that I didn't see coming. Very nice perspective on Slytherin Harry while also making it believable (how often do you see Slytherin Harry friends with Ron/Hermione and not at odds with the rest of his house after all?) 5/5
     
  5. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Amusing. Both were good, but the first one felt surreal in some areas.
     
  6. Xanatos

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    I enjoyed both of them, but preferred the First one, Daphne was well done and I liked double agent Ron!

    4.5/5
     
  7. Tehan

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    The only complaint I have is length, or rather the lack thereof. Especially entertaining was Harry manipulating the Hermione/Tracy rivalry. Also good was poking fun at super!Harry with Dumbledore's help.

    4.5/5
     
  8. Kari Black

    Kari Black DA Member

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    I really liked Harry's characterization, and it was pretty funny. 4.5/5
     
  9. InfernoCannon

    InfernoCannon Seventh Year

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    At the end of the 4th chapter, in case you didn't read it.

    But, I never knew that we had a Draco Kill-Off. I suppose it most be an old thread which i'll go dig up.

    Other than that, 5/5. Poor Victor in the 3rd one.
     
  10. Big D on a Diet

    Big D on a Diet Minister of Magic DLP Supporter

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    Look at Jeram's sig. There's a link there. That's where I found it.

    I read a couple and figured I'd try my hand.

    Big D
     
  11. InfernoCannon

    InfernoCannon Seventh Year

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    The time spentn searching was useful though. I also found a Ginny kill of thread, which was great.
     
  12. ip82

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    Definitely one of the best Slytherin!Harry's I've ever seen. Funny, intelligent and cool at the same time.
    5/5
     
  13. MysterioX

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    4.5/5, would have been great if it was a complete fic.
    Can't wait to see the way he's going take care of Fleur.
     
  14. Gabrinth

    Gabrinth Chief Warlock DLP Supporter

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    The only thing that annoyed me was the out-of-order timeline. And I fucking want to know what happened during the rest of fifth year! Ah, well, it was a good little series of one-shots and most of it was pure gold. 5/5
     
  15. Jamven

    Jamven Headmaster DLP Supporter

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    Story updated to chapter 5, this time... mud wrestling. I want even MOAR. 5/5
     
  16. Mindless

    Mindless Big Boss DLP Supporter

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    This is a damn good story. I really think the way it's written, jumping around to varied scenes, is better than it would be as one long continues chain.

    Edit: Oh yeah, 5/5
     
  17. Big D on a Diet

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    I'm enjoying doing it that way, as well. There's something invigorating about skipping over the details and going straight to the good parts.

    Glad you liked it.

    Big D
     
  18. LT2000

    LT2000 Heir

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    Off-topic, but any chance we'll ever see more of The News? I wanted to see where that went...
     
  19. Big D on a Diet

    Big D on a Diet Minister of Magic DLP Supporter

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    Never say never, but I doubt it. I have some of Chapter Six written, but very little urge to go back and add to it at the moment.

    Big D
     
  20. Snarf

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    That mud fight was epic, especially showing how Super!Slytherin!Harry could still get his ass punked by a bunch of naked, mud covered girls. Just epic.
     
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