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Harry Potter and The Child of Prophecies by deconneur - M

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by RagefulLlama, Dec 6, 2005.

  1. RagefulLlama

    RagefulLlama Seventh Year

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    Title: Harry Potter and The Child of Prophecies
    Author: deconneur
    Rating: M
    Pairing: looks to be a Harry/Ginny eventually
    Category: Action/Adventure
    Summary:post HBP. Harry is framed and sent to Azkaban for ten years. The wizarding world is in ruins. The 'Power he knows not' has been destroyed. Will an unwilling hero be enough to save them all? Dark!Harry but Light sided.

    Link:http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2657662/1/

    Very cliche but some 'new blood' as it were. It's ok, and so far there isn't to much Harry/Ginny but it will eventually lead there.
     
  2. ip82

    ip82 Prisoner

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    I've read the first chapter. I was so pissed off by Harry being a complete pussy and awarding people that had betrayed him, that I dropped it the moment he had returned from dead. Has a high potential of being totally gay.
     
  3. Perfect Insanity

    Perfect Insanity First Year

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    ugh

    im sorry, i like the general premise of the story but i am getting so infuriated at this line "Oh… You know it came to me as a shock that you still remembered my name", from griphook. now that thats out of my system, okay story although has a lot of gramatical errors.
     
  4. Mrriddler

    Mrriddler High Inquisitor

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    ....Harry got kneed in the groin by Hermione... :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:

    The fact that he didn't slice up that bitch good makes me give this story a two thumbs DOWN!!!!

    Seriously like ip82, totally pussywhipped. And wtf...read his profile?
    -------------------------------------
    What to say?

    I'm a guy.

    I'm french (so sorry in advance for grammar mistakes, etc)

    I'm 22

    And I love Harry Potter Fan Fics.

    As I don't know what to write, that's it for now. I'll try to edit when I'll know what I want to put there. ;-)
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    eh...no comment?? lol Seems like that French girl Naia also his age has way more balls than him...
     
  5. darklordmike

    darklordmike Headmaster

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    This story belongs in the trash bin. It's nearly unreadable, partly because the author isn't a native speaker, partly because it just sucks. No one behaves with any logic, Harry and Griphook become BFFs, and later there are dwarves who make prophecies.

    Fail/5
     
  6. Admonkeystrator

    Admonkeystrator Seventh Year

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    The fact he seemed to spend his entire incarceration in Azkaban unconcious, except for @ christmas, would mean he didn't have time to brood.


    Or it could just be chapter with zero planning put into it...

    2/5 because, well Hermione kneed him in balls.
    I don't think i've read that anywhere else, ever... assorted villans yes... protagonist, no.

    Oh and Ron's dead. Can't fault that.

    /neglected fic
     
  7. Fiat

    Fiat The Chosen One DLP Supporter

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    It should probably die. Preferably in a fire.

    It is pretty fucking terrible and should GTFO.
     
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