Ahhhh well, it has a story.... in 5% of the fic. The rest is just very well written smut. A good story if you want to be turned on but I wouldnt recomend it as long time reading material.

 

despite its smuttyness it was good. very interesting style and i believe its like plot with a gooy smut coating. a lot of gooey smut coating.

 

Its a not bad story, maybe a tad to much smut, but still pretty gd

 

good story that one. It strangely 'killed itself' a few months ago. I dunno if he's continuing it or not.


Mehetabelo fics has a dark quality to it that is really appealing. He wrote a harry/narcissa oneshot once and it was pretty good. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2127558/1/

 

I'm not offering anything. I shouldn't have offered to share in the first place.

 

well, it REALLY well written. Not typical when compared to my nasty birthday or the fucked up things Gio and I wrote in Orgy. So... This I consider legitimate work.

 

Man, this is a legit fic and not some lump of shit porn-fic... its smut, but its quality smut...

You know, you really should have a smut section in the libiary otherwise you're just pidgon holeing this fic for reletive oblivion underneeth the wave of stupidity that is the S&P section...

 

For what it's worth, I think that NC17 fics should be posted within normal categories.

The reason?

Sick & Perverse section contain sick and perverse material (contents). That is NC17 material that is HOSTED on this site, thus the need of a separate section, with NC17 warning on the entrance.

Threads about stories labeled NC17 are NOT NC17 themselves. They are actually R-rated material (swearing and other stuff you can find in any DLP thread) with a LINK to a NC17 material. A link that is clearly marked as "NC17".

So, since the whole problem here is to keep kids from stumbling upon NC17, unless they seek it out themselves, I think that a link to the outside site hosting NC17 content is enough for it, as long as it's clearly labeled as NC17. Simply put, threads about stories posted within Sick & Perverse would quickly get lost amongst other discussion threads there, which is IMO unacceptable, especially considering there's no need for it (legal or moral).

BTW, as for Sick & Perverse, I personally like that section. DLP wouldn't be what it is today without something like that. But I think it should remain a thread for funny discussions and HOSTING ORRIGINAL NC17 work. Links to NC17 stories should stay within normal categories, where they belong.

 

Gio and I rarely agree, but when the demi-god of disgusting thinks something belongs in here, it no doubt does.

It's not open for the peanut gallery guys, the fic's staying here, as will any fic that contains extensive, graphics sex. As a general rule, if it's bad enough to be posted on AFF for it's sexual content, it probably belongs here. It's 2/3+ graphic smut, it's NC-17 it belongs here. Once again, the very definition of it is listed above, "Forum for all things <snip> including but not limited to graphic NC-17 discussion<snip>."

I may change the descript to say fics instead of discussion, but it's not going to be moved out, simply because of an argument that the link to NC-17 is technically safe. The area outside a porn shop is safe, and rated pg, but does that mean it's safe for foks who don't want to see it to sit outside of it?

For what it's worth I'm solidly against smut stories being here at all, it's not part of the site image I'd want for the site. I can't speak for Vash, or Zev, or the mods, but I know Raven feels similiarly. We let this section be for awhile now, and we'll let alot of the stuff in here be, but the childishness that's been on in this thread is going to do nothing but get it deleted.

 

I am only going to say this once because it needs to be said.

If this forum offends you, STAY OUT OF IT.

 

-I've cleaned this out due to noticing so much stupid stuff in here.

Let's make one thing understood, we seem to of had several issues out of this forum as far as sickening pictures, bickering, etc. in the past month or two. Myself and Raven do not enjoy coming in here, I can't speak for the others. When we have to come in here to take care of things that the S&P mods aren't cleared to take care of, it makes everyone in here look bad, and it makes for some very cranky, delete happy admins.

 

I'm intrigued, but the link in the first post was removed and I may be getting senile, but I didn't see another link except for the 5th chapter. So can anyone tell me how to get the whole thing?

 

Its in the files section under BigD's stuff. You can also just search the forum for the other chapters.

 

Smutwise, it was very good.

But honestly, I was more freaked out by Hannah than anything I read by Vash.

 

Hannah was supposed to be a little scary. One of the things I wanted to do in this story was give each of Harry's girls her own voice, and avoid making them cookie-cutter copies of each other. Hannah freaked me out a little too, but that was the way she sounded in my head.

 

I do kinda wonder how the DLP crowd would have reacted to the Ginny/Gabrielle femslash scene I had planned for chapter six.

 

I wouldn't mind seeing Ginwhore get slashed in the throat, if that counts.

 

I ain't complaining. That was a pretty good succession of smut scenes.

Harry's haplessness is great. First, he bonds a psycopath, albeit a hot one, and then he unwittingly bonds to someone who gets addicted to his sperm. I wonder how long he'll last, especially once Narcissa is brought into the fray. Stamina will only get a man so far.

Maybe if Gabrielle panics when Ginny begins removing her clothes, and just happens to have a knife on hand?