I see only one problem with this chapter... The title .

Rest was great and you're a fucking insane updater so no problems there .

Aekiel

 

A thousand Galleons... mmm. Lovely.
Looking forward to your next update, as usual.

 

As opposed to, you know, silver Galleons. They aren't worth as much as the gold ones.

Good chapter, Shezza, keep those starving orphans in your basement writing so we can read more.

 

So DD is using Harry's Tri-Wizard winnings to hire him into service? That's fucking sneaky.

DD FTW.

 

Am I the only one that is confused over the title. Shouldn't it be Denarian Knight chapter 5.

 

Shezza made a mistake when when entering the Thread Title....other people have pointed it out.

Great chapter shezza, I want MOAR!

 

Ahh I didn't see anyone point it out so I thought I would.

 

Someone did point it out:

I concur. Harry/Amanda FTW!

 

I thought he was offering Harry the winnings just to be let in and have a talk for five minutes, not to hire him for anything.

 

That is all I found, but I was not really looking.

Also, technically, capturing him and taking him to Hogwarts is not "harming" him.

 

I renamed the thread title. I'm hoping Shezza doesn't mind. And I finally got around to reading this storyline (I was waiting on the "COMPLETE" tag on the first.) Fucking excellent. I'll give it a nice and proper review one of these days, but this chapter's start keeps everything flowing nicely.

I'm just curious how many chapters there will be before we reach the 'four months later' Prologue.

Though I will admit to snickering over the phrase "Be very wary." Not sure if you want that or not. Be very wary, Cheri Oteri. Be very wary.

 

I was just thinking that “Must you revolve everything back to sex?” seems kind of awkward. Maybe "around" instead of "back to"?

No. Shezza is a god. Of fanfiction, at any rate.

 

Nice but aren't those a bit small for chapters?

 

It's part of a chapter

 

The Denarian Knight by Shezza - M

Title: The Denarian Knight (Sequel to 'The Denarian Renegade')
Author: Shezza88
Rating: M
Pairing: Uncertain
Status: WIP
Genre: AU- Fifth Year / Spiritual
DLP Genre: The Alternates
Summary: Sequel to The Denarian Renegade: Harry, the new and reluctant Knight of the Cross, finds himself fighting against new enemies as he is dragged into conflict. He will have to use all of his power to overcome new obstacles, some more surprising than others.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3856581/1/The_Denarian_Knight



Hey DLP,

I'm just placing this here to see what other people think of the story so far, despite the fact that it seems like shameless self-promotion. I'm well aware that the story seems to be missing something that DR had that made it so liked and I'm also aware the the first few chapters seem a little...lacking. That said, I have worked out a plot and there are a lot of twists throughout the story that I hope you will enjoy.

 

Humour...Seriously?