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Complete The Denarian Knight by Shezza88 - M - Dresden Files

Discussion in 'The Alternates' started by Rehio, Oct 26, 2007.

  1. Mors

    Mors Denarii Host DLP Supporter

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    As I said, it's all a little hazy. Dresden was too many books back.

    Still, as far as I remember, the White Court specialised in seduction and mind control... I just assumed if Justin could throw them off after being basically mindblazed (love that term), what is Red Court next to that? Then again, Reds use chemicals, not magic... and Justin did have protection.

    So probably owned, yeah.
     
  2. Mors

    Mors Denarii Host DLP Supporter

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    I sincerely hope you were joking.

    Is there a lobby against Harry/Amanda? Otherwise I'll have to start one... Shezza has taken much pains to point out what Harry thinks of Amanda, and I've agreed with Harry so far. (Although I rather liked her at the beiginning of Renegade). No H/A. Ever. Simply because I like Harry being revolted by all the decency and goodness still left in he world.

    Waiting for the next part, Shezza... will we get it today? :)
     
  3. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    This is the absolute worst pile of garbage I have ever had the misfortune of reading. o.o


    Seriously though, nice job, Sherrie. Now update. ^_^
     
  4. Warlocke

    Warlocke Fourth Champion

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    Meh, it was going to end up with a thread eventually. Why wait for someone else to do it?

    If no one here was reading it, nor wanted to, then it would be shameless self promotion. :D

    Keep up the good work.
     
  5. Jon

    Jon The Demon Mayor Admin DLP Supporter

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    I'd let Meciel drag my soul into the fires of hell, if you know what I mean.
     
  6. Erotic Adventures of S

    Erotic Adventures of S Denarii Host

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    England and America are in the same hemisphere so it is the same season.
     
  7. Skeletaure

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    This is news to me. The transition from the one story to the other has been seamless for me. Maybe you're feeling the absence of Amanda, but I shipped Harry/Merciel so I'm happy lol. The Harry/Amanda interaction was one of the best parts of DR though.

    I assume she'll be making a comeback?
     
  8. Shezza

    Shezza Renegade 4 Life DLP Supporter

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    Without giving anything away, she'll be at Hogwarts as an exchange student. Without giving anything away, of course ;)
     
  9. Rahkesh Asmodaeus

    Rahkesh Asmodaeus THUNDAH Bawd Admin DLP Supporter

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    Where the fuck is my Harry/Amanda, slut?
     
  10. Eaglette

    Eaglette Second Year

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    This story is perfect. Absolutely nothing wrong with it. It's an absolute masterpiece.
    It's the nearest to flawless you can get.
     
  11. TheNoise

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    I can only guess, but I personally took that as an allusion to perhaps some dealings went down with Winter. Capital W. Dumbledore meant the season, but Harry's response insinuates potential new dealings with Meave - presumably.
     
  12. Mors

    Mors Denarii Host DLP Supporter

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    Agreed. (Meaning I want more H/M, Shezza. Much more.)
     
  13. CGB

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    Yeah, I'm really glad you decided to write a sequel
    IMO the story starts as good, as the prequel ended, I really liked the Harry/Harry interaction. Keep up the good work.
    Btw: You got me to start reading the Dresden Files ;)
     
  14. Shezza

    Shezza Renegade 4 Life DLP Supporter

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    TheNoise- No, I made an honest boo-boo. Good call Teaos

    Jon: I don't even want to know, really, I don't.

    Mors Mortis: There's a great deal of pressure for me to hook Harry up with what is essentially a visual illusion of his imagination. I can't understand why.... ;)

    Nonjon: Thanks for changing the thread's title. I was tired, so I must have slipped back into routine habits. Have some rep...although I don't think it counts much for you.

    Sree: H/A- You know, I had somebody once tell me that Amanda was like an American version of Ginny. Maybe I should lay off and give her a little rest, no?



    Helpful Hint #3: Always keep the pairing factions warring with each other. That way, they don't put pressure on you and start slashing your tyres.
     
    Last edited: Nov 1, 2007
  15. Nuhuh

    Nuhuh Dastardly Shadow Admin Retired Staff

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    You are such a fucking tease. I play your games no more! You can't lead me on with your ambiguous gender, Sherrie.

    *Applies liberal ego stroke, watches Shezza cream*

    I only read the opening chapter but so far I like it, I'm hooked as always.
     
  16. Erotic Adventures of S

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    I'm shipping Harry/Hand.
     
  17. Robo Jesus

    Robo Jesus High Inquisitor

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    I think you'd make an excelent Dalek, but if you just want a very cool picture to represent you, how does this work for you?:)

    :p
     
  18. Rehio

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    I don't know. Perhaps more along these lines
     
  19. Tarnished Blade

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    That works best when said hand is attached to a hot, ready and willing female.
     
  20. Mors

    Mors Denarii Host DLP Supporter

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    She doesn't even have to be willing, really... nah. You're right. Willing is best.

    I could stay all day long discussing how it doesn't really matter, Shezza. It's all about how his brain interpretes the sensory information. And if Meciel hijacks his nerves halfway to his brain, what of it? She's still a <infinitely large number here> times hotter than Amanda. (Sree will neg me again for this, I know it.)

    More H/M. Nuff said.
     
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