I never said that being full of win is wholly convenient. I pity Shezza in that regard.

 

I'm very much enjoying DK it's a great sequel and I also hope for Harry/Amanda.

 

Sheeze i worthip you.

Cessbulbly was prorably going to tell him that Maeve is pregnent.

 

Lol, bite your tongue in excitement?

But yeah, I concur. Very good chapter.

 

Yet again a masterpiece Shezza. I had no problems, only praises for Denarian Renegade, and the same for Knight, except for one little thing. You've kept me hanging on the pairing for over 250,000 words, when will you tell us? Oh well, in good time I suppose. One of these days you will us.

Any plans to use the other Harry more, or are these brief scenes you've given us so far most of what you are doing with him?

 

So Harry has a kid with queen?

Nice to know.

With differences in flow of time he could be now even older then Potter.

 

Or the same age, but on another side... and wouldn't that be interesting?

I've changed my mind on pairings. Harry/Meciel, Harry's son/Amanda (or possibly Maeve...)

 

Yay, a another Harry/Meciel shipper. I think we outnumber the Harry/Amanda ones. I wonder if Shezza is going to pull a JKR on us and pair Harry with a previously undeveloped character.

 

Totally sucked, just horrible.

Not really. Good job.

 

It sure get a little repetitive to always write : Good job, you rox, I want you baby etc. But eh... he is good so just congratulate him.

About Vesper curse, it is a decaying one? or something else because it was not really clear.

 

Bouncer

Your, his, distorted

I believe the "it will" should be an "it would"

Slightly repetitive

My French teacher always talked about sex change operations at this point.

Expressing or to express

Drop the last 'it'.

 

How can Poldriul be Vesper's servant and also follow whoever gives it blood at the same time? Also that 'and' should be replaced with 'are'.

Reading part 2 now.

drop the first comma and etc. etc. World is better at this than me. Didn't even notice half of those.

Nice chapter, Shezza. As always, want moar.

 

I like how he molested her.

That was funny.

 

There is a difference between copping a feel and molesting.

Though the fact that he copped a feel and then said "Bah, you're not worth it" was a nice insulting touch. After reading that, I get the mental image of Harry saying this line.

"Every night, when I go to bed, I lay awake thinking of how I'll irritate them. Then I wax my moustache and kick some babies."

 

Wow, i just blasted reading through this, and the previous story in one day. How i missed it is beyond me, it's probably the best fic series i've read this year.

It's annoying sometimes thats harry is such a self absorbed twit, but at the same time refreshing that you gave him a real weakness. The characters actually feel like.... well, characters.

And the absense of some scheming Dumbledore set out to ruin Harry's life is a kinda nice touch too....


Cant wait for the next chapter.

 

He used the cheese grater line twice, which made me go, 'Is he desperate to shove his dick into a cheese grater or what?'

A different thing he'd rather do might be better. Other than that, you seem to be getting back into the Denarian witty-banter mood.

 

That was nice.

A bit stupid to go and anger the evil overlord but she already wanted to kill him, so.