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Complete The Denarian Knight by Shezza88 - M - Dresden Files

Discussion in 'The Alternates' started by Rehio, Oct 26, 2007.

  1. Chime

    Chime Dark Lord

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    I think the point is that, for Meciel/Harry to develop further, she needs a corporeal body. I guess she could stay in his head, but, Harry's a kid. He might see that it isn't enough. He probably wants someone physical, knowing that they truly exist; a partner that isn't just a fooling of his senses.

    Only, Meciel can't have a physical body unless she possesses somebody through the transfer of her coin, unless there's some ritual I don't know about. So I dunno.

    The best ending to the "lol I <3 Amanda/Meciel" issue is to contrive a situtation where Meciel takes Amanda's body as her own, of Amanda's own free will.
     
  2. LegalAlien

    LegalAlien Denarii Host

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    An awesome chapter, as always, Shezza!

    I really liked Harry's rude, but nevertheless very effective method of teaching the brats! It seems that Meciel can see the possibility to gather some minions as very promising for her future endeavours, which proves that she's sneakier than any Slytherin. And the whole bet about getting to see Meciel naked was just too awesome and fitting! I demand pictures! :D
     
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  3. BloodRedSword

    BloodRedSword High Inquisitor DLP Supporter

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    It didn't happen...yet.
     
  4. Jon

    Jon The Demon Mayor Admin DLP Supporter

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    Jeez, I go to all the trouble of making a new sig on my busted computer and no one notices, well fuck you guys. <_< -refuses to make sigs for stories anymore.-
     
  5. Mindless

    Mindless Big Boss DLP Supporter

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    We love you Jon.
     
  6. Link

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    I noticed. Though I liked more Cessbulby. Meciel is kinda... too old. Too mature. For me, that is.

    Beside, Meciel's a mean bitch. She makes Harry think she's not wrinkled and crusty down there and all...
     
  7. malaga

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    "Alright, naked time!"
    "Are you sure?"
    "What kind of a stupid question is that?"
    "Fine, here goes. My real form, naked:"
    [​IMG]
    "Oh God... You look so hot right now!"
     
  8. darkendlight

    darkendlight First Year

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    Problem is that when I am readling this from the office most of the sigs don't show up. No idea why. Like the new sig but I would also like an update.:D
     
  9. Methene

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    I am almost afraid to ask, Malaga. Where in God's name (pun intended) did you get that err... thing.

    I for one think Meciel's real form is pure divinity and will clear Harry's mind of thoughts about another woman for all eternity.
     
  10. malaga

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    I think I found it sitting on Vash's shoulder.

    No angels there though.

    Meathole will conquer the world!
     
  11. MellowYellow

    MellowYellow Fourth Year DLP Supporter

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    Harry's a teenager so the part about no thoughts about another woman for all eternity is not likely to happen.
     
  12. Jon

    Jon The Demon Mayor Admin DLP Supporter

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    <_< Actually

    Meciel can make it so seeing her naked = Ectasy and seeing other women naked = makes him sick.
     
  13. dakorma

    dakorma Second Year

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    I hadn't thought of that yet Jon also I like your sigey(both the one you use and the new Mecial). Its wonderful how fast you update shezza absolutely wonderful thank you.
     
  14. LegalAlien

    LegalAlien Denarii Host

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    Thanks for the new signature pictures, Jon! :D

    Of course, we still have to demand more pics... ;)
     
  15. QuaziJoe

    QuaziJoe Dolphin Boy

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    I always appreiciate your sigs and avatars but frankly I just want to know where to find the originals...

    Your Inari looks like a "sweet" girl with a great "personality".

    And by personality... I mean breasts.

    And by sweet... I mean fap fap fap

    In conclusion.... "sweet"
     
  16. SerDel

    SerDel Third Year

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    New chapter is up and everyone is waiting for little smut in next yeah? :D

    Seriously, I like when there is peacfull period in fanfiction, when you can simply enjoy originality of characters. Your sense of humour is brilliant.

    I'd say that this fic is supercalifragilisticexpialidoucious :p My absolute fav.
     
  17. Datakim

    Datakim Chief Warlock

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    Great chapter. Loved it :)

    Harry seemed to enjoy showing off and training his newfound minions. I suppose that makes it easier for him to continue doing DA if thats what you intend. It was rather fun to see Harry totally crushing Hermione though it was also a nice touch that Amanda almost caught Harry offguard. Might lead to Harry feeling atleast a tiny bit of respect towards her.

    In any case, looking forward to the next chapter. I wonder how you will deal with the whole naked Meciel issue? Might be hilarious if you did the whole scene offscreen, except that most of DLP would probably lynch you for it. ;)
     
  18. Boofers

    Boofers Groundskeeper

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    I just hope she doesn't have cobwebs in an over-grown bush
     
  19. syrioforel

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    Loved it! Really like the harry-amanda interaction and can't wait for the rest of the chapter. keep up the fantastic work please!
     
  20. Jon

    Jon The Demon Mayor Admin DLP Supporter

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    I lol'ed, i honestly did.
     
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