Wahey, Umbridge got slapped around.
Interesting scenario: have Harry kill her by dropping a 16 foot Dildo on her.
Had to get that off my chest. I can understand taking the chapters at a more sedate pace.
Anyhoo great chapter!

 

He is more likely to laugh himself silly, but I think a part of him would really care about Amanda being used by Umbridge. Whether that stems from Harry's hate of Umbridge, or actually caring for Amanda I'm not sure.

 

now that is just mean!

 

No, that was evil.

Nice chapter, I love the beach scene (whatever gets Meciel in a bikini can't be anything but great ).

 

Excellent work so far, only a couple of errors that I could see, but Warlocke will cover them when he gets here so I'll leave them be .

And yes, that was just plan evil of you . You have learned well .

Aekiel

 

Moar boobies! Moar I say!

I liked how Harry's little scheme to framing Malfoy fell apart, only to be reconstructured into an even more diabolical plan. Well done.

 

I love this stuff.

More Harry/Meciel interaction, please!

 

lol

That was just epic but then you went and shattered the dream
Anways great new update and Im really looking forward to the action finally.

 

Morgoth is most pleased with the first part of chapter 20.

 

Maybe the Amanda/Meciel/Harry shippers are at rest now, but I am not. I want some Voldemort/Vesper smut!

Nah, well, not really, but I'd like to know what Voldemort and that bitch are plotting while Harry's enjoying framing people, playing with Umbridge, etc. I doubt Big V is taking vacations right now and certainly has things on the agenda other than torturing randomlessly Death Eaters and making babies with Vesper.

I hope your next chapter will really have some real action =)

 

I second Inky. Maybe not a full chapter dedicated to it, but a Kotor style cinematic with Voldemort wooing Vesper, err plotting to overthrow the wizarding world and create a 1000 year lasting empire.

Harry/Meciel interaction is as always, much appreciated.

Congratulations are in order once more.

 

While I have to agree with what he said...I'm going to ask that no one ever put the words Harry's enjoying playing with Umbridge on anything, anywhere, anytime. SICK!

Bad mental images...bad...

 

Makes me want to get my own hands around Meciel's boobies... never mind she isn't real. *grins lecherously

Anyways, nice bit with framing Malfoy, and the owl shitting was funny.

 

...What's skeet?

Jking, another good chapter as always if a bit dull. I especially liked how Harry's plan fell apart. It's not very often we read in stories that the main character fails at something, only to turn it to their advantage. My favorite part was the failing though. Well...maybe it's tied for the boobies....

 

... What's "it"?!

 

Jon is a... huh, we all know what.

I second that bit about Voldemort/Vesper smut. It'll be interesting.

What was it again? ... Oh yeah, nice one Shezza. Complete it soon, please.

Edit: Can't believe I forgot to add it...

Bewbies!

 

Wildfeather, you really should have just googled it. NSFW.

Skeet is short for skeezer, a dirty whore, soked in cum! So to skeet is the action that causes a skeezer. - http://www.faqs.org/qa/qa-11666.html

To release a massive load of sperm, To remove the semen from a male body. Or in slang terms: to cum all over that bitch.
"Oh my! I got skeet in my eye", said Mildred.
"I'm terribly sorry.", said Eugene. - http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=skeet&f=1

Always happy to educate,
Yak.