You know what really depresses me?

She has more reviews than I do

 

Hey guys, I dunno whats got stuck up your asses but I find this a really really good fic.

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BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!

 

I CAME

Raven66's sig says it all, really.

5/5

 

It's my avatar person.
I am amused.

 

Why is this bitch not yet banned?

 

Why indeed.

The summary killed it outright. Especially the "lord many times over" part...
Raven's sig helped too.

 

Yeah, the lord many times over did it. And whoever gives one person that many middle (is it even middle anymore by then...?) names needs to get punched in the face. I didn't even bother reading the story. The summary made me gag all by it's little self. Gah, these kinds of stories are the reasons why I gave up my original fandom for Harry Potter. And yes, the amount of reviews did make me a tad depressed. I feel sad now. Trash it, please.

 

Yeah, but hers just might all be trash.

 

5/5 would read again

 

I say don’t bother with lengthy bashing and just delete this thread and be done. I think the shemale knew exactly what type of welcome his story would receive here.

 

OH LORD SPYRO, PUT IT IN MY BUTT, MY PRETTY TWIN!



Epic Fail.
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How does this have two stars, I've taken a crap that is better than this fic. Epic fail, GTFO

 

Either due to the malignant retards who are voting 5/5 out of simple spite for our bashing, or due to those people who chewed on the lead-painted crib bars when they were young wittle infants.

Cause honestly folks, how much more brain-damaged do you have to be to actually enjoyed this shining example of human deficiency?

 

Well then, I see many people have called it bad without even reading it. However to those who bothered to read it and still found it bad, your opinion is noted. You all are going about how shitty it is, and expect me to get but-hurt however the fact is it's freedom of speach and you spoke your opinion. However, have you ever heard of constructive critism?

 

Dear most trollish troll,
please stop trolling in our troll, for our troll is troll, and our troll is troll. We do no appreciate your troll, and the troll of troll might troll on your troll. We only hope that you can see that the troll of your troll has trolled our trolliest troll.

Troll you, troll again.

(Any guesses as to what I just saw on TV?)

 

I believed I constructed a very nice criticism of the author's very very... very, bad writing style.

If it helps... I can give you a picture that has been "constructed" to illustrate the point, since words are obviously far beyond your comprehension level, as displayed by your piece of shit, that I attempted to get more then a few chapters into.

 

There comes a point at which something is beyond the help of constructive criticism...at this point so many things would have to be changed in order to make the story even resemble decency, you might as well just bin the whole thing and start again with an entirely new approach/idea/style/life.

 

Raven66,

You might want to actually spell your comments correctly. And they're right. It's bad. If I were you, I'd bin the whole thing, come up with a plot, non-slash pairings, and start completely over. Oh, yeah, and you might want to re-think your characterization, because it's completely awful.