My time is more precious then yours . Ill go check it out.

 

The girl his the fallen angel that Laciel gave to Harry.

BTW nuhuh good chap, but I hope you get thing going again because right
now its fells like everthing has been at a stand still for a few chaps.

 

I think he's just been setting things up. Michael and his family, the Denarian factions testing the waters, Harry's denarian demon, Karrin's cross, the White Council, Harry's time in the void that he doesn't remember... everything is building up.

Hold on to the seat of your pants Mellow. I think this shit about to get nasty.

Yak
nasty like your mum

 

Completely off topic: Yak, have you ever been Moose?

 

It looks like the shit is about to hit the fan...

Here's hoping to you feeling obligated enough to crank out the other half by bedtime.

 

doubleyouteaeff? No, I've never been or used Moose.

Wax, yes. Never mousse.

I'm a Yak today. A Yak forever.

Yak
don't moose with me

 

That's because Jon is a massive tease, and he loves holding that over everyone, trust me. But he is great at brainstorming ideas too, so I keep him around for inspiration

Don't worry guys, there's a lot more to come. I am working on several plot lines simultaneously.

1. Fallen Angels and Potter. This is the overarching plot which will spread over two more books.

2. Outsider vs White Council. The main theme of this book. More of that coming soon.

3. Dresden vs Merlin/Mai. You've seen a bit of this, more is coming.

4. Secret plot, not going to spoil rest


btw, you guys like Roqariel so far. Seen only a little. I'm going for the adorably homicidal personality here.

 

Excellent start and I'll take your word that it only gets better.
Gotta love the bloodthirsty little thing.

Update soon

 

I'm too out of it to comment on her character right now. But there isn't much Roqariel there anyway. Do you have any more of her written that we can look at?

Yak.
burning at both ends

Edit: The candle! Burning the candle at both ends O_O

Edit2: I just realised how retarded my post is. You aren't asking for an indepth character analysis of Roq and her motives; just whether or not she comes across as adorably homicidal. I don't need more Roq fic to weigh that.

Further proof of my retardedness: As I was re-reading the last passage of Ch 12 (for Roq) I suddenly realised why you decided to have Dresden and Murphy locked out by the Fidelius. I had just assumed that you'd reveal the reasons for it later in the chapter. I don't know how I ever missed that.

I'm not writing another damn word until I've had some sleep. I hope this edit makes some sense. I've rewritten it in bits and pieces several times now.

Yak.
incoherently misfiring on all cylinders

 

So...why am I having Dresden and Murphy locked out?

and brother get some sleep. Seriously.

 

I just hope that Harry doesnt become some bloodthirsty monster that slaughters everything in its path. That would kinda kill the cool character interaction that we've seen so far. Anyway...is Roaqiel one of the lesser Fallens? I've just started reading Dead Beat so I haven't read anything about her yet.

 

She's nuhuh's creation.

 

Roqariel.
..and yeah, what Ryuugi Shi said.

To Nuhuh: So ... what's this I hear about some hella fucked up Deirdre/Potter smut?

 

Nice chapter, blah blah blah. When we has-ing the next part?


I'm wondering about the 'forbidden breath'. 'Tis a nice concept, I'm waiting to see how you use this.

 

Wench! The bed time stories I tell you are only for you.

Just remember to wear that cute green number you have next time.