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God Save the Queen By Xiph0 - K+

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Xiph0, May 3, 2006.

2.3846154212952/5, 13 votes
  1. Xiph0

    Xiph0 Yoda Admin

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    May 3, 2006 #1
    Title: God Save the Queen
    Author: Xiph0
    Rating: K+
    Genre: Humor
    Pairing: None.
    Status: Complete. One-shot.
    Summary: England is in the midst of a heat wave when we find young Harry with too much time on his hands. What happens when the Royal family visits nearby Sandhurst?
    Link: Fanfiction.net


    Enjoy!
     
  2. Amerision

    Amerision Galactic Sheep Emperor DLP Supporter

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    May 7, 2006 #2
    I'll be blunt, it's not very funny.

    It would be if you extended it to a series of prractical jokes that BUILDS humor. Rorchsach's Blot does this. He takes alot of small funny things, that, TOGETHER, make it hilarious.
     
  3. Zoopsa

    Zoopsa Card Captored and buttsecksed

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    Oct 18, 2007 #3
    Laughably bad. See the reviews on ff.net for details.
     
  4. bornagainpenguin

    bornagainpenguin DLP Archivist

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    Mar 3, 2008 #4
    This fic can be found on PatronusCharm.net. The FF.nutz link no longer works.


    --bornagainpenguin
     
  5. Xiph0

    Xiph0 Yoda Admin

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    Mar 3, 2008 #5
    All my stuff got moved to PatronusCharm, my FF.net profile is empty.
     
  6. bornagainpenguin

    bornagainpenguin DLP Archivist

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    Mar 4, 2008 #6

    Then perhaps you could update the links to your stories on the board to reflect their new locations? Also, not all your stuff got moved.....there are several fics (whose names escape me but I know I posted a message in their threads--I'm not at home at the moment so I can't just look it up...) that have not been added to PatronusCharm.net yet.

    --bornagainpenguin
     
  7. Xiph0

    Xiph0 Yoda Admin

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    Mar 4, 2008 #7
    I cannot, you can not edit posts after a 24 hour window.

    Only the abandoned ones.
     
  8. mfoolen

    mfoolen Squib

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    Mar 17, 2008 #8
    sorry but this storry was so wrong.
    i mean come on.
    and lacks everyting.
    no story line.
    instand """""""""'dark"""""""" harry.
    first he is a gooddy good doer and than his is trowing imperius curses.
    yehh right.
     
  9. Reyhkt

    Reyhkt Groundskeeper

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    Mar 17, 2008 #9
    You know, people might take you more seriously if you write this in english...
     
  10. Korisovra

    Korisovra Headmaster

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    Mar 17, 2008 #10
    *points and laughs at mfoolen*
     
  11. Inziladun

    Inziladun First Year

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    May 4, 2008 #11
    I was expecting much more interesting when you said that "he had built a bug farm in one of his Aunt's frying pans". Instead all he does is put a prince under the imperius which is stupid and un-intelligent. I admit that I'm spoiled by reading Rorschachblot's humor, so maybe its not that your fic is that bad but that it pales in comparison.
     
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