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Don't Look Back by AngelofDarkness1605 - M - HP/BL

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by dragon_89, Mar 22, 2008.

  1. Archer

    Archer Fourth Year DLP Supporter

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    Everyone says that the story is shit.

    So I just won't even waste my time to see if they're overreacting or not and just not read it.
     
  2. Snarf

    Snarf Squanchin' Party Bro! ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Then why post anything at all? .... fail.

    This story, in essence, sucks in many shades of fail. Sadly, I spent many precious minutes of my life writing a scathing review to the author only for it to be deleted with a slipped elbow. Depressing, yes, but not as much as this troll still chilling out in our forums. He's posted multiple stories full to the brim with fail and my Troll-o-Meter is almost going hay-wire. Mid, please, slip him the banstick and watch him go boom, bye bye.
     
  3. BioPlague

    BioPlague The Senate DLP Supporter

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    Wow, this is a piece of shit.
     
  4. The Doctor

    The Doctor Unspeakable

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    You'll find that's its a favourite of many DLPers.

    That being said, I tried the first chapter, and Yoda sums it up best:

    [​IMG]
     
  5. Narion

    Narion Slug Club Member

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    As bad as the first chapter was, I made the mistake of trying to read the second. It only avoids being epic fail because it's too pathetic to be epic in any way.

    Narion
     
  6. dragon_89

    dragon_89 Squib

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    yea yea ok...i don't really like the story now that i read it again....so ill generously give the two minutes of the life back to all that need it ;p. And belladona - I LOOOVE HP/BL

    hey and whats with this troll stuff? :'(
     
    Last edited: Mar 23, 2008
  7. Illnill

    Illnill First Year

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    What on earth made you think that pile of unrealistic bullshit was worthy of us even looking at it?

    I read the first couple of paragraphs. So, am I supposed to believe that Harry, after raping the woman who killed his godfather, would apologize? That's without Bellatrix suddenly turning sappy and accepting his apology. The author has no idea how human beings interact.

    0/5

    GTFO. Yes, you idiot, you are a troll.
     
  8. Rahkesh Asmodaeus

    Rahkesh Asmodaeus THUNDAH Bawd Admin DLP Supporter

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    All I have to say is: what the flying fuck?

    Recycle binned.
     
  9. Augurey

    Augurey Backtraced

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    Harry should've Cruciated the slag while he was raping her, and hit her with a Killing Curse as soon as he pulled out. Once he didn't do that, I stopped reading.

    0/5
     
  10. Blaise

    Blaise Golden Patronus

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    Fix'd that for ye.
     
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