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Complete The Denarian Knight by Shezza88 - M - Dresden Files

Discussion in 'The Alternates' started by Rehio, Oct 26, 2007.

  1. Rahkesh Asmodaeus

    Rahkesh Asmodaeus THUNDAH Bawd Admin DLP Supporter

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    ... centre is the British spelling for center. Leave the betaing to the grammar whores, don't just press spell check and then tell us here. Shezza can easily do that himself.
     
  2. Datakim

    Datakim Chief Warlock

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    Shezza, the latest part and Meciels spell were without a doubt one of the coolest things I have ever read! I salute you! :D

    Though you might want to add a mention of Harry summoning his wand back. Now it looks as though he left it inside the Death Eater.
     
  3. Skeletaure

    Skeletaure Magical Core Enthusiast ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Curse you, automerged doublepost! There was no notification of the update!

    T'was good, but you're teasing us :p Get to the main event already lol.
     
  4. Fuegodefuerza

    Fuegodefuerza Minister of Magic

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    I enjoyed the humor in that section immensely, as you already know, but...

    QTF.
     
  5. Skeletaure

    Skeletaure Magical Core Enthusiast ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Now that's what I'm talking about :)

    Awesome chapter. Its greatness will be out shined only by the next.
     
  6. XxEnvyxX

    XxEnvyxX Groundskeeper

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    Awesome!
    Merciel's own spell was great and Harry's behavior just cool and funny, well "harryisch"^^


     
  7. Jibril

    Jibril Headmaster

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    QFT

    This chapter was awesome and brilliant.
    The next one will be made of pure golden win. No matter the outcome of the duels.
     
  8. QuaziJoe

    QuaziJoe Dolphin Boy

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    Voldemort
    Vesper

    Dumbledore
    Harry

    I think I skeeted a little at what I can imagine is to come next.

    The death eaters running at the sight of harry was hilarious. This is the only harry I can imagin garnering that kind of reaction.
     
  9. Fuegodefuerza

    Fuegodefuerza Minister of Magic

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    Basically, you're amazing. When I grow up, I want to be Shezza89. :D
     
  10. QuaziJoe

    QuaziJoe Dolphin Boy

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    I fixed that for you...


    ...I'll stop :(
     
  11. Dethklok

    Dethklok Order Member

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    What can be said? The Royal Rumble is gonna happen. Harry vs. Vesper and Voldemort vs. Dumbledore. Harry has increased in skill, but he is still not at Voldemort's level, as indicated by the fact that Voldemort caught Harry's spell and destroyed it.

    That was cool.
     
  12. Cathal

    Cathal Sir Nils' Right Hand

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    I was waiting for this battle from the very moment Dumbledore asked Harry for information about Vesper.
     
  13. Chengar Qordath

    Chengar Qordath The Final Pony ~ Prestige ~

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    And ... it looks like the stage is set for the final epic battle. Harry vs. Vesper should be interesting, but I'm really curious to see how Shezza re-imagines the Dumbledore vs. Voldemort fight.
     
  14. Skeletaure

    Skeletaure Magical Core Enthusiast ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    It'll also be interesting to see if the two duels are kept separate from each other or if it will be a full on 2 vs 2 fight.

    The difference between 2 sets of singles and a game of doubles, to put it in tennis terms.

    Both ways could be good. I think the best way would be to keep the fights mostly separate, but with occasional crossfire.
     
  15. Orm Embar

    Orm Embar Auror

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    I know Sree told me not to, but Shezza DID ask...

    A rather weak streak of light
    she would have marveled at
    sending a letter to Potter, but knowing him
    Unless you're immune to a pulverising curse
    growing weary of the games and feeling more
    When Harry cancelled the spell, a small smile on his face
    as her wand movements went through a skin-peeler, a bone-gnasher, a teeth-cruncher and a blood-boiler at him in no more than a second
    Neville none-to-gently to the side as the third one
    through his veins, his vision took

    I left the parts with foreign spelling alone this time, and went through looking for other errors.
     
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  16. Random Shinobi

    Random Shinobi Unspeakable DLP Supporter

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    You guys seem to be forgetting that Bellatrix is still there... Well, Neville too, but he doesn't count. Even though she is not as powerfull as the other four duellists, she still has some serious firepower.
     
  17. eXcalite

    eXcalite Seventh Year

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    Goddamnit man. This is going to be epic.
     
  18. XxEnvyxX

    XxEnvyxX Groundskeeper

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    This isn't just gonna be epic, this is going to be the definition of epic!
    Will Vesper and Harry both transform? Crossfire, Neville, Bellatrix etc.

    Well, in canon the Ministry had to repair this fountain and the timeturner were history, but imagine what kind of damage such a fight can do!
     
  19. Grubdubdub

    Grubdubdub Supreme Mugwump

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    Hopefully, there will be nothing left to repair.
    I would really like if Neville/Bella would try to distract their enemies. Bella flashing to Dumbledore, Neville shouting to Voldemort he loves him... It's all good in love and war. Epic indeed.
     
  20. Chengar Qordath

    Chengar Qordath The Final Pony ~ Prestige ~

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    I forgot about Neville and Bellatrix; I could see Neville still trying to take her down as he does have a strong desire for revenge, but he would be badly overmatched. It would make an interesting addition to the fight if Harry and Dumbledore would occasionally have to intervene to keep Bellatrix from killing him.

    On the other hand, if Bellatrix is beaten/running before the epic battles are over then Neville might manage a brief moment of glory by distracting Vesper or Voldemort at a critical moment in the duel; one of the few good things about DH was that Neville did finally grow up into a real badass in that book.
     
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