Shezza, the latest part and Meciels spell were without a doubt one of the coolest things I have ever read! I salute you!

Though you might want to add a mention of Harry summoning his wand back. Now it looks as though he left it inside the Death Eater.

 

Curse you, automerged doublepost! There was no notification of the update!

T'was good, but you're teasing us Get to the main event already lol.

 

I enjoyed the humor in that section immensely, as you already know, but...

QTF.

 

Now that's what I'm talking about

Awesome chapter. Its greatness will be out shined only by the next.

 

Awesome!

Merciel's own spell was great and Harry's behavior just cool and funny, well "harryisch"^^

 

QFT

This chapter was awesome and brilliant.
The next one will be made of pure golden win. No matter the outcome of the duels.

 

Voldemort
Vesper

Dumbledore
Harry

I think I skeeted a little at what I can imagine is to come next.

The death eaters running at the sight of harry was hilarious. This is the only harry I can imagin garnering that kind of reaction.

 

QFT

Basically, you're amazing. When I grow up, I want to be Shezza89.

 

I fixed that for you...


...I'll stop

 

What can be said? The Royal Rumble is gonna happen. Harry vs. Vesper and Voldemort vs. Dumbledore. Harry has increased in skill, but he is still not at Voldemort's level, as indicated by the fact that Voldemort caught Harry's spell and destroyed it.

That was cool.

 

I was waiting for this battle from the very moment Dumbledore asked Harry for information about Vesper.

 

And ... it looks like the stage is set for the final epic battle. Harry vs. Vesper should be interesting, but I'm really curious to see how Shezza re-imagines the Dumbledore vs. Voldemort fight.

 

It'll also be interesting to see if the two duels are kept separate from each other or if it will be a full on 2 vs 2 fight.

The difference between 2 sets of singles and a game of doubles, to put it in tennis terms.

Both ways could be good. I think the best way would be to keep the fights mostly separate, but with occasional crossfire.

 

I know Sree told me not to, but Shezza DID ask...

A rather weak streak of light

she would have marveled at

sending a letter to Potter, but knowing him

Unless you're immune to a pulverising curse

growing weary of the games and feeling more

When Harry cancelled the spell, a small smile on his face

as her wand movements went through a skin-peeler, a bone-gnasher, a teeth-cruncher and a blood-boiler at him in no more than a second

Neville none-to-gently to the side as the third one

through his veins, his vision took

I left the parts with foreign spelling alone this time, and went through looking for other errors.

 

You guys seem to be forgetting that Bellatrix is still there... Well, Neville too, but he doesn't count. Even though she is not as powerfull as the other four duellists, she still has some serious firepower.

 

Goddamnit man. This is going to be epic.

 

This isn't just gonna be epic, this is going to be the definition of epic!
Will Vesper and Harry both transform? Crossfire, Neville, Bellatrix etc.

Well, in canon the Ministry had to repair this fountain and the timeturner were history, but imagine what kind of damage such a fight can do!

 

Hopefully, there will be nothing left to repair.
I would really like if Neville/Bella would try to distract their enemies. Bella flashing to Dumbledore, Neville shouting to Voldemort he loves him... It's all good in love and war. Epic indeed.

 

I forgot about Neville and Bellatrix; I could see Neville still trying to take her down as he does have a strong desire for revenge, but he would be badly overmatched. It would make an interesting addition to the fight if Harry and Dumbledore would occasionally have to intervene to keep Bellatrix from killing him.

On the other hand, if Bellatrix is beaten/running before the epic battles are over then Neville might manage a brief moment of glory by distracting Vesper or Voldemort at a critical moment in the duel; one of the few good things about DH was that Neville did finally grow up into a real badass in that book.