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Naruto Fanfiction List

Discussion in 'Fanfic Discussion' started by Tinder, Feb 11, 2006.

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  1. Poytin

    Poytin The Arby's Hipster DLP Supporter

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    I'm really only following The Melt and Paid in Blood. The others just started to suck after a while.
     
  2. Manatheron

    Manatheron Headmaster

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    Title: Senju Naruto
    Author: Baal of Yarns
    Rating: M
    Pairing: -Unknown
    Link: Here
    Author Summery:You'd think being brought up by his Sannin mother instead of as an outcast would make Naruto's life a little easier. Not so for a guy with a demon trapped in his belly, even if he's genetically predisposed to handling it. Mokuton!Naruto

    Comments: An interesting take on AU Naruto I thought.

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    Title: Stray Bullet
    Author: setyourgoals
    Rating: M
    Pairing: -Unknown
    Link: Here
    Author Summery: What if Orochimaru missed? Instead of Sasuke, Naruto was the one that recieved the Cursed Seal. The consequences of this one action stands to change the fate of Naruto, as his life makes a drastic change.

    Comments: Interesting Concept, but It looks a bit abandon. Worth looking at anyway

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    Title: An alternative path
    Author: zessei
    Rating: T
    Pairing: supposedly N/Sak
    Link: Here
    Author Summery: Kakashi thinks his team might not be so ready for the Chunnin exams after all...

    Comments: I've always wondered what the hell kakashi was thinking.

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    Title: Dance of the Kitsune
    Author: SelenaWolf
    Rating: T
    Pairing: NA
    Link: Here
    Authors Summery: If Naruto were placed with Hayate as his sensei and Shino and Hinata as his teammates, how would his life be different? First chapters nearly the same as the manga slowly deviates from cannon on chap 2.

    Comments: I have only very rarely found people that didn't find this fic entertaining.

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    Well, that's all for now, Happy Hunting

    ~Me~

    Edit: Ninja edited the sleep deprived comments!
     
  3. Chime

    Chime Dark Lord

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    Just finished the first chapter of paid in blood...

    Ideas are good, writing is good, but execution stinks. Sarutobi and "all the ninja population" just appear out of nowhere, as if all of them were waiting outside of Naruto's apartment. The hell? Naruto also says way too much, there's no reason to explain himself to his ex-peers (or if there is one, it could at least be stated or hinted at).

    Pudgy's stories are... at least in comaprison to DLP's standards, average. His other one (the one with Temari and the plant powers) is without conflict and is just a lot of fluff. Not that they aren't fine to read when one has time, but I would hardly say 'best'.
     
  4. Poytin

    Poytin The Arby's Hipster DLP Supporter

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    Title: The Melody of the Fox
    Author: Jetslinger
    Rating: T
    Pairing: Naruto/Tayuya
    Link: Here.
    Summary: Naruto is determined to bring Sasuke back to Konoha. However, someone he didn't expect wants to help. NarutoxTayuya. T for language.

    Just got updated after a few months. I don't know about this... Only thing I know is that I like it.
     
  5. FollowTheReaper

    FollowTheReaper Professor

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    @Chime: Yes, by DLP standards, maybe it is mediocre, but compared to at least 99,99% of the Naruto fiction in teh netz...
    Edited for the lulz.
     
  6. Mage Ronin

    Mage Ronin Groundskeeper DLP Supporter

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    @FollowTheReaper: Go read Fosfor/Case13 Naruto fics. Then compare it to Pudgy's. And you'll see why it's mediocre.

    I agree with Chime. Pudgy has interesting ideas but he lacks the skills to fully present them. The writing is bland, has no distinctive style, and reads more as a skeletal draft than the full juicy story it can be.
     
  7. Cxjenious

    Cxjenious Dark Lord

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    Not only that, but you people are posting fics that have been posted before.
     
  8. FollowTheReaper

    FollowTheReaper Professor

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    Don't know if this has been posted before:
    name:Soul of the Seal: The Ninja Adventures
    Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 6 - Words: 121,274
    Summary:EpFic1 The same village, the same life, but having one foxy friend will make all the diffrence. Please review, it's the whole point.

    link:http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4090674/1/Soul_of_the_Seal_The_Ninja_Adventures
    Fairly good, the first chapter was a bit meh-ish at parts. I kind of liked it, but it's still Super!Naruto so...
     
  9. Poytin

    Poytin The Arby's Hipster DLP Supporter

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    Yeah well they haven't been put in the list yet and Thread Search fails for me...
     
  10. Iztiak

    Iztiak Prisoner DLP Supporter

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    Ahh, I'm working on it, stop rushing me...

    I've been a bit busy though, I'll probably get a bunch of it done this weekend.
     
  11. Robo Jesus

    Robo Jesus High Inquisitor

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    Fuck, I totally forgot about this. Uhm, fuck.

    I have the pages setup so I see fourty posts per page, and it looks like the last time I updated the main list was somewhere on page 15 or so. With the thread now up to 28 pages (at fourty posts each page), I seem to have a shitload of text to once again wade through. God dammit.
     
  12. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    You can work with Iztiak if you want. He's been collecting the data.
     
  13. Iztiak

    Iztiak Prisoner DLP Supporter

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    Yeah, I've gotten pretty far with it, so I could probably post the updated list late this weekend.
     
  14. Janus

    Janus Groundskeeper

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    Started reading this one, using the paragrasp addon for firefox. Got past the Uchiha massacre and it struck me as odd that I hadn't had to reconfigure paragrasp yet.

    >> So I checked the word count on the fic, it only has six chapters but its up to 120,000 words. No wonder I was going "wow, long chapter"

    Not epic or myth worthy so far, but a nice long read to turn your brain off to.
     
  15. LogrusMage

    LogrusMage Supreme Mugwump

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    GAH! Altered History is broken. I can't get to chapter 19 ;_; Help me someone!
     
  16. Iztiak

    Iztiak Prisoner DLP Supporter

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    It's working fine for me, but I've found in previous mix ups that if you enter a few 0's right before the chapter number in the URL (Example "3149411/20/" becomes "3149411/00020/") sometimes it'll get the chapter to work.

    I'll send you a copy/paste of the chapter if that doesn't work.
     
  17. Chime

    Chime Dark Lord

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    Anyone want to kill the author of Time and Again for that horrible cliffhanger (chapter 37)?
     
  18. liath

    liath Seventh Year

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    Lol. Most definitely. It was definitely one of the worst cliffhangers I've ever had the pleasure of experiencing.

    He'd better update *soon*.
     
  19. FollowTheReaper

    FollowTheReaper Professor

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    liath, Update ILoSM, nao!
    Yes, I'm gonna go kill him now.
     
  20. Chime

    Chime Dark Lord

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    Dunno if this was already posted or not...

    The True Monster » reviews
    A Rosario Vampire and Naruto cross over. Naruto, the hated Kyuubi jinchuuriki, is sent to a school for monsters to complete his education before he can return to Konoha. But in a place filled with monsters he wonders just who the true monster is. Nar X Mok
    Naruto - Fiction Rated: M - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 24 - Words: 82,677 - Reviews: 1129 - Updated: 9-6-08 - Published: 8-5-08

    http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4450082/24/

    S'pretty good. I knew of the Rosario shounen, vaguely, when I started this, so I didn't have much hopes coming into this story, but it's surprisingly good, and you don't need to be familiar with the crossover to read it.

    Warning: Raep, Secks, a spattering of emo here and there, potentially Dark!Naruto; updates DAILY, or has been for the last week I've had it on my alert list. I wonder how long that will be maintained? Worth trying the first 10 chapters or so.
     
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