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Abandoned Master Potter by Draco664 - T

Discussion in 'General Fics' started by Muttering Condolences, Mar 7, 2008.

  1. QuaziJoe

    QuaziJoe Dolphin Boy

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    Well I was wrong...

    I'm not sure I feel about it in terms of plot but good chapter none the less.

    As to the Hermione pregnancy bit. I like How Harry dealt with it. He wasn't automatically "ZOMG, the fruit of my loins is dead, I've wanted to be a farther blah blah, angst, blah..."

    The fact that he saw some positives was both shocking and humanizing. I was pleasantly surprised.

    I'm still waiting on the Dumbledore Harry Duel.

    Like our Blaise said, not Fap worthy, but still pretty good.

    Though I want the flower delivery persona to show up again.

    Cartman immediately comes to mind...


    "Que Passo...!"
     
  2. Ragon

    Ragon Dark Lord

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    Nice update.


    List of people to die:

    1. Fudge
    2. Anastasia Royston
    3. Croaker
    4. A Bunch of people I just really dont like
    5. Possibly Dumbledore.
     
  3. dontdeleteme

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    Just reread the series, and the only thing that's annoyed me is how often Harry gets knocked out and captured. Examples include getting captured by the Vatican, Italian Aurors, Fudge, and Voldemort. I suppose it may have been necessary to keep the story going but it would've be nice to see it done differently.

    It'll be interesting to see how the Hallows will come into play. HomicidalMasterOfDeathHarryPotter ftw?
     
    Last edited: Jul 10, 2008
  4. Chadrew

    Chadrew Second Year

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    Just wanted to say, this series is one of the best I've read. Extremely well-written and entertaining.
     
  5. Kthr

    Kthr Unspeakable DLP Supporter

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    I just cant go further than half the first fic of the 3 (apprentice potter). Harry bitches around to much about being lied to and all that crap.
    That stuff seriously kills any fanfiction to me.
     
  6. Demons In The Night

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    Damn you. And here I thought there was an update.
     
  7. Ragon

    Ragon Dark Lord

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    Then basically you read what .0000000000000000009% of fanfiction cause at some point in atleast 99.99% of fics Harry bitchs about being lied too.
     
  8. Kthr

    Kthr Unspeakable DLP Supporter

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    Yes I know. It sucks. I think there's a fine line between harry bitching and Harry getting pissed off about those things. There are a couple of Fics that Harry does get mad at all that crap manipulations and all that dumbledore-bashing that people love and all and decides to actually DO something about it.

    And by that I dont mean some Godlike powers that shows up in the middle of nowhere and have no explanation whatsoever ( like all those banishing spells and his amazing occlumency that he somehow manage to pick up in two months.)

    However, i do enjoy the concept of Harry freaking out and unleashing some kick-ass legimency attack at the person attacking him... authors should just try to build up that sort of powers, not shove them in the middle of the fic out of nowhere

    Well, I'm ranting so I belive I'll go back to reading dresden files. At least we find a non-idiot harry there :)
     
  9. Seer

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    I've always found it odd that no author has ever just handed his character some enchanted pendant or something that mimics occlumency.
     
  10. QuaziJoe

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    I've read that happen actually... usually in super harry fics.

    The story usually sucks as well... Beast speak fairie centaur alliance sucks...

    Also I Hate you!

    I thought this story was updated.
     
  11. Innomine

    Innomine Alchemist ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    I'd love it if you started putting actual thought and care into posts that are months old.
     
  12. Seer

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    Overly long, complicated posts aren't really needed to get the point across all the time. They were discussing occlumency, so I gave my opinion.
     
  13. Innomine

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    They were discussing occlumency MONTHS ago. The debate or w/e it was, was finished.

    If you added something engaging, and well thought out, maybe it would be better accepted.

    If you can make occlumency pendants, why not have other shit? Like legilemency pendants, Oh, how about a stick that auto throws AKs? No, i'd rather have mental disciplines stay mental, thanks.
     
  14. Seer

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    And yet the most recent posts are still discussing it. Does it matter how long ago a discussion began if it's still just as valid now as it was then? Geez, it's only been a few months. Stop whining and submit something useful to this conversation
     
  15. Andro

    Andro Master of Death DLP Supporter

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    Right after you posted this?

    Oh the irony. If you've ever expended a brain cell in any of your posts, none were spent in this one.

    This isn't the first occurrence though. No one on this site minds if someone necroes worthlessly once. But you've continued doing it, and you've been told again and again and again. Are you aggressively ignoring everything that is said to you?

    The banhammer finds those that want it, so I'm just putting you on my ignore list. Hopefully that means threads you post in don't show up as having new posts now.
     
  16. Jamven

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    Update has been posted, once again left me wanting more
     
  17. Demons In The Night

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    *sigh*

    I love this series by Draco664, but the update rate is so slow that now I'm going to have to go back and start reading Master Potter from the beginning again, as I've pretty much forgotten everything that has happened.
     
  18. Ragon

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    I agree complete with both the loving the series and complaining about the update rate. I read about the will and was like what the fuck is going on?
     
  19. kmfrank

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    Great update. Luckily I'd just reread the series a few weeks ago, so I knew kinda what was going on.

    Great work as always, Draco. Harry killing innocents by mistake, was a nice touch to show that he isn't perfect.
     
  20. Element

    Element Seventh Year

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    I really can't see any recent update. Do you need to be logged in or something?
     
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